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Miri

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: ​To create a speicies that fits my roleplay style and goals for a new character.
  • ​Image Credit: http://paguluses.centerblog.net
  • Canon: ​N/A
  • Links: ​N/A
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Miri
  • Designation: ​Sentient
  • Homeworld: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Coruscant/Legends
  • Language: Mirian
  • Average Lifespan: Scattered - A moderately sized manor with large underground chambers on Coruscant is there only place that could be considered a centre for them, and Miri from tribes all across the galaxy regularly take pilgrimages there to report information they find.
  • Description: Miri are humanoids that are usually found in clothing that covers most of there skin. That which you can see, however is either an incredible pale tone, a tan tone, or a light blue.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: Type 1
  • Average height of adults: 1.4-1.6 M
  • Average length of adults: N/A
  • Skin color: Blue, Tan, Pale
  • Hair color: ​Purple, Orange, Black, Brown
  • Distinctions: All Miri are at least mildly force sensitive and naturally receive force visions of the near future, giving them the edge in battle. Significantly trainable force power is rarer, so most Miri only know at most a couple of rarer techniques along with there basic pushing and pulling and sensing.
  • Races: Cru'sci - The scholar culture of Coruscant - They spend their lives sorting and reading and finding the events in recorded visions by more powerfull Miri.
  • ​No'sci - The Nomadic Miri - No'sci primarily hunt Sith and Jedi they deem evil or abusive of their power.
  • Strengths:
  • Force powers
  • Force visions show near future in combat
  • Agile
  • Weaknesses:
  • Frail
  • Weak - Unable to carry heavy weaponry
CULTURE
  • Diet: ​Fruit, fish, bread, rice
  • Communication: ​Talking, Hand signs (during combat)
  • Technology level: ​Able
  • Religion/Beliefs: ​The Miri belive in the O'sai, a mystical energy that requires balance. They belive that the Miri are a race gifted by the O'sai the task of maintaining it's balance. They go so by hunting those force users that abuse their power and recording the future so to know things that may help their quest for balance. They know this, and many other things, due to the book of Mirus. The original copy is held on Coruscant, but most Miri carry a copy. It contains the most important predictions of the Miri and the rules that the Miri must follow.
  • General behavior: ​The Miri look down to the force users of other species but believe that any can earn respect if they deserve it. Miri are taken to there tribe elder or the Coruscant manor to assess there abilities at the age of 6. There they begin there training. Depending on the tribe and the ability the child will train for a certain job. Those with a large force potential will be trained for the job of a seer and will learn there power to mastery. Those with just above average will often become scholars that carry out the work of the seers. Those that can simply use it to a reasonable level will learn what they can and then be taught to use a weapon and sent with a couple of others to hunt Sith and Jedi or will be taught a common trade like blacksmithing. Some with the potential for the rank of scholar will choose to become hunters, or a mix of the two. Miri are fully trained at 17 but they are sent out on a years journey if they are hunter rant or above. In that year they are to find a lost artefact, see the sight of a prophecy unfolding, hunt a rogue Sith or Jedi and go to a large number of pilgrimage sites. If they succeed they are given the job, if they fail they are sent to do it again.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

​The Miri were a race born on Coruscant. during its war between the first two races on the planet they helped neither side on military affairs but solved many inter-tribe issues such as a lack of food or bandit attacks. As humans became the primary race they relied on them for food. They built a large building where they stored their prophecies and their artefacts.

​A long times later, when the empire came, they scattered their artefacts across the galaxy. They knew that soon their manor would be invaded. At this point the Miri sent a number of tribes to the outer rim in case there manor was completely destroyed and their race genocided, the rest continued to live in the underground of Coruscant. When the Empire was destroyed, they rebuilt and built the system we know today, operating the same way ever since.
 
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A couple of things: your image source links to a dummy website with no content. You are also missing at least one field that I notice - in fact, you are using the average lifespan to detail the population. Please look over the template and add any fields you have missed.

If you aren't using them simply add N/A at the end of it and make sure to use the rating system as well. So with population you would need to pick between [Unique (Only One Member), Rare (A few groups, often limited to a single world), Planetary (A Large Concentration on a single world or system, rarely found off-world), Scattered (Smaller groups found in many places around the galaxy), Inter-Planetary (Large colonies found within numerous star systems), Common (Can be found in most any space-worthy colony around the galaxy)]

I also need you to add substantially more to your history as this is a fairly elaborate species, so they really should have more history to flesh them out.

There is also the matter of this strength: 'Force visions show near future in combat' strength you have. I am not really comfortable to give an entire species a blanket force vision ability like that. A canon example that I can think of is the Iktotchi, but their precognition is only really effective on their homeworld and once they leave it it becomes severely weakened. So, either remove it or you could limit it to a very small group of the species but I am gonna have to ask you to water it down at that point.

Tag me when you make these changes.
 
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