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Approved Tech Minna's Ataru Swords

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(Imagine them double edged)
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Intent: Personal Short Swords for Minna to symbolise her part in the Seven Swords aswell as effective weapons when utilizing her main form; Ataru.
Development Thread: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/48189-a-new-weapon-krest/
Manufacturer: Krest and Minna
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Minna personally
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Manipulated Desh-Terenthium
Classification: Short-Swords
Size: One Handed
Length: 0.4 Metres
Weight: 1.5kg (each)
Special Features: Lightsaber Resistant, Able to deflect Blasters, Double-edged.
Description: To become a member of the Seven Swords, a group of force-users within the Ession Reformation, Minna had to have a sword. She was to be the Ataru user of the group, and therefore needed to incorporate that form into her choice of sword. For this, she chose two light, dual-edged swords. These allowed her to perform her fast-moving and leaping abilities with minimal difficulty compared to her lightsaber, aswell as make multiple strikes easy and fast with two edges to strike with on each sword. The swords were created with help from Minna's master; Krest, who forged them from basic swords he had lying around and then allowed Minna to modify to her own liking through Art of the Small. The swords strengths are that they are light, and therefore can be swung faster and with more ease, especially for Minna who is quite small and not as strong as your average humanoid. Having two swords allows Minna to make the most of the rapid form of Ataru, meaning she can land multiple strikes with each jump during combat, most likely more than if she had one lightsaber. The disadvantages are the same with every sword, it cannot penetrate the same materials lightsabers can, and even thought the swords are light, they're heavier than a lightsaber aswell. The reason Minna puts up with these disadvantages is because the swords are more than weapons, they are symbols to show her membership in the Seven Swords.
 
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I'm not a fan of alchemized metals like Desh-Terenthium to circumvent the effects of alchemical procedure. However, whether or not I'm a fan is irrelevant. Your submission is whole and in good order, the development thread is clear enough though I'd like to see more description of the process of forging, but again that's personal preference. All in all it is fine.

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