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Approved Tech Mercenary Dress

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Intent: To create Vera's armor for her primary combat form.

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Image Source: https://geektyrant.com/news/classic-mystique-cosplay-by-rei-doll, Irina Ueshenina

Canon Link: None

Primary Source:

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Biorestorative_underlay

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Sonic_nullifiers

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Multishield_generator

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Regenerative_armor

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dominator_gauntlets



PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Manufacturer: Castle Morpheus R&D Labs (http://starwarsrp.net/topic/129671-castle-morpheus-the-leviathan-tantive/#entry1788101) (Where it was created)

Affiliation: Vera Mina

Model: N/A

Modularity: No

Production: Unique

Material: Specialized electronics, armorweave, ballistic fiber

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
Classification: Multipurpose

Weight: Average

Resistances

- Blasters (And other plasma weapons): Low

- Kinetic: Low

- Lightsabers: None

Ion: Extreme

Microwave: Extreme

Sonic: High

Cryo: Low

Flame: Low

Anti-Vong: Extreme (Baffer Pollen, Alpha Red, Vong Unmasquers)

Paddle beam: None

Vibro: None

Electricity: None


SPECIAL FEATURES

Extreme strength regenerative underlay geared to repairing biot tissue, based off both biorestorative underlays and ancient regenerative armor

Shield system geared towards protection from threats to which the wearer is uniquely vulnerable

Dominator gauntlet technology in gloves, increasing Vera's Command Form strength by a factor of three

Emergency Nutrient Underlay, feeding concentrated Biot Nutrient via skin contact, allowing Vera to remain operational for an extended period in the field if cut off from supply

Reflexive enhancement band built into the collar, increasing Vera's reaction time by a factor of three

Bipedal enhancement strips in the boots increase Vera's bodily speed by a factor of three.

Strengths:

Regenerative: The experimental healing underlay is even more powerful than Vera's Lawyer Suit, able to heal even incredibly serious burns, lascerations broken bones and other forms of damage heal in a span of five minutes.(It can even regrow limbs!) In addition, the underlay releases protective therapeutic mutagens via skin contact upon exposure to Baffer Pollen and Alpha, providing immense protection from both and even eventually reversing their effects, though this is a slower process than standard healing. Lastly, these same mutagens release upon exposure to Vong Unmasquers, reducing the effect they have on Vera, merely causing her intense, nigh crippling agony in their proximity, which is better than what the normal effect would be: Without the underlay, an unmasquer would literally cause the skin to rip itself clean off, severely damaging and possibly killing her if repairs could not be made.

Unconventional Protection: due to her unique vulnerability to certain threats, the armor was made with an experimental shielding system designed to provide immense protection from, Sonic, Ion, and Microwave.

Strength enhancement: Dominator gauntlet tech modified to enhance biot muscular tissue built into the gloves enhances Vera's strength in her Command Form by a factor of three

Reflex enhancement: A experimental reflex enhancement band built into the collar geared towards Biot nervous systems enhances her reaction time in her Command Form by a factor of three, by both speeding up the rate at which stimuli is processed and the rate at which she coordinates a response, through regulated, low strength electrical signals delivered through skin contact.

Speed enhancement: Experimental bipedal enhancement strips geared to Biot muscle tissue built into the boots increases her movement speed by a factor of three, via delivering a carefully regulated electrical stimulus of electrical signals to the biots leg muscles, as well as extremely minute bursts of artificial adrenaline geared toward reacting safely with biot tissues.

Head Turner: This dress accentuates the Biots beauty, and may make her more persuasive to men and women.

Agile: Designed for max manuverability.

Supply and Demand: A concentrated biot nutrient underlay delivered via skin contact keeps her supplied with her main food source for a decent, though not limitless time should she be cut off from supplies and has not had any nutrient for at least a day, though the underlay itself will not last her more than three before needing a replacement. Located at the back.


Weaknesses:

Weak to Conventional threats: Because the suit is more geared to protection against the more serious threats to the Biot, and because it is so reliant on the regenerative underlay to repair most damage, it can only withstand pistol strength rounds of either blaster or slug. In addition the armor is thin to maintain manuverability, meaning she is knocked down easier.

Paddle beam weakness: It has no protection against paddle beams, which will react with the suits systems and underlays, completely shutting them down and causing Vera immense debilitating pain she would normally be unable to experience, due to the specifics of her design.

Practicalities: Significant exposure at the legs and shoulders mean signifcant areas to aim for disabling shots...that is, if Vera stays still long enough or is too slow to react.

Shield limits: Designed to take extreme damage from all the energy sources that presentvthe deadliest threats to Vera, due to power source limits, it can only take two to three shots from one energy source at a time and never from all three at once, and requires eight minutes to recharge once depleted.

Electricity: For all its protection against Ion, it can't protect against even weak electrical discharges, shutting the suit down temporarily and causing damage to her processors, which have to be manually repaired in such a case.

Vibro: Provides no protection from vibro blades whatsoever.

Underlay side effects: being repaired multiple times by the underlay leaves Vera exhausted and needing to feed on blood to replenish her stamina. Overtaxing the underlay can cause it to shut down temporarily after multiple uses in a short time, especially after incurring severe damage.

Elements: The suit cannot protect for long against cryo or flame weapons, and then only in small exposures.

Wait time: The wearer must have survived and been out of active combat for at least two minutes before it will start to heal her if she has taken damage. She can't heal in the middle of combat, though it will stop heavy bleeding. However, if in protracted, heavy combat, damage can and will accumulate and if there is no chance to heal, she won't.

DESCRIPTION

Developed in the very same labs she was programmed and created in, the Mercenary Dress is the main garb of choice when in her command form, relying on an extremely powerful regenerative underlay to repair most damage to her that she could suffer in the field in a matter of minutes as well as protect against the forms of energy to which she is most vulnerable, rather than conventional threats, even capable of regrowing a severed limb. And saving her from what would be an otherwise fatal or near fatal encounter with Vong Unmasquers. Special tech in the suit also increases her strength, speed, and reflexes by a factor of three, and an additional concentrated nutrient underlay geared towards biots can keep her in working condition for a decent length of time if cut off from supplies before it has to be replaced.

For all its advantages it can take only so much damage and not all of Vera's most serious weaknesses could be addressed, it is still vulnerable to electricity, cryo, flame, and paddle beams will shut all its systems down temporarily. Still, for what it enables, it turns her glass cannon nature into slightly stronger glass.
 
Hi, I'll be going through your submission with you today to see if we can't polish it up and approve it :)

So firstly, the image source. Websites like Imgur and Pinterest aren't great because they don't always provide a link back to the source or artists. In this case, a quick reverse search found this which contains links to the artists name and details as well as providing a better image source in its own right.



Vera Mina said:
Manufacturer: Castle Morpheus R&D Labs
I'm going to have to ask you to include a link to a submission for Castle Morpheus' R&D labs as the manufacturer.



Vera Mina said:
Anti-Vong: Extreme

Could you clarify what you mean by anti-vong?



Vera Mina said:
Dominator gauntlet technology in gloves, increasing Vera's Command Form strength by a factor of three
If you could please link to the wookiepedia page for dominator gauntlets provided here, it will allow future readers of the submissions to follow along without any issues.



Vera Mina said:
Reflexive enhancement band built into the collar, increasing Vera's reaction time by a factor of three
Could you please provide me with a link to this technology, or a more detailed look into how it works?



Vera Mina said:
Speed enhancement: Experimental bipedal enhancement strips geared to Biot muscle tissue built into the boots increases her movement speed by a factor of three.
Again, as above, could you please link me to this technology, or give me some idea of how it works?



Vera Mina said:
Regenerative: The experimental healing underlay is even more powerful than Vera's Lawyer Suit, able to heal even incredibly serious burns, lascerations broken bones and other forms of damage heal in a span of five minutes.(It can even regrow limbs!)
I looked at the link provided and this level or regeneration is far in excess of the described technology. Wookiepedia describes it as 'The biorestorative underlay was an armor enhancement that hastened the healing processes of the wearer during combat.' However, broken bones and limb regrowth are injuries which require a medic and a medical suite respectively. As it currently stands this is far too powerful without any weaknesses that truly balances its strength. I would suggest scaling back on the level of power or submitting a new technology sub for this enhanced restorative layer so the strengths and weaknesses can be laid out more clearly. However, as always, this is just a suggestion and if it is your wish I will approve the armour in its current form with the warning it might get reported and pulled up for review.

My comments are just the recommendations I would have for you to make changes to the armour, and if you wish to keep it as it is, barring the adjustment to the image source and a link to the manufacturer, then I can approve this if you wish.

Please read through this post and then tag me back with your decision.
 
Ok, edited the reflexes and speed enhancements, going into more detail about how they work, added links to regenerative armor for the healing underlay, and added a weakness that it needs to be out of combat at least two minutes before it will activate, added your provided links as well, and for the manufacturer, the best I could do was link the actual ship the labs that helped create Vera are located on, [member="John Locke"].
 
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