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Menzoberranzan

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^ refer to the top of this pic if possible

Image Credit: Paul Carter of Elfwood
Intent: To give Mazarr a way of traversing the stars
Development Thread:
Manufacturer: Kuat Drive Yards
Model: Imperial II-Class (Modified greatly)
Affiliation: Mazarr
Modularity: Yes
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel and transparisteel
Description: Centuries ago, the Menzoberranzan was an Imperial frigate, gained a new captain until the final battle from within caused it's reign of fear to crumble. The Menzoberranzan was claimed by Mazarr's family when it's previous crew was slaughtered by each other after one half the crew betrayed the other half during the 400 year darkness, the ship was nearly totaled, but the family managed to fix it up. Passed down from generation to generation, this ship has had a ton of battles, but it's age is beginning to show itself now that Mazarr has it. The Menzoberranzan was named for it's age by Mazarr's father, now Mazarr has it, and some of his father's crew still remain.

Classification: Assault Frigate
Role: "Personal Hammer"
Height: 66.7m
Width: 133.4m
Length: 400 meters
Power Core Generator/Reactor: cryogenic reactor
Hyperdrive Rating:
Minimum Crew: 6
Optimal Crew: 19,899
Armaments:

45 capital guns
20 warhead launchers
8 defense guns
2 sets of 10 flares

Hangar:

Non-Combative Attachments:

Communications Array
Encryption Network
Escape Pods
Holonet Transceiver
Standard Deflector Shield Generator
Standard Detention Cells
Standard Life Support Systems
Standard Navigational Systems
Standard Sensor Array
Standard Targeting Systems
Tractor Beams
Reinforced hull plating
Backup generators

Passenger Capacity: 4,400
Cargo Capacity: 46,350 tons
Consumables: 6 years
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 6
 
@[member="Adenn Colston"]

  • Speed is wrong. Frigates start at Speed 5, Assault adds one to that, so this thing should be speed 6.
  • You need to list actual weapons (turbolasers, quad laser turrets, etc) instead of what you have currently.
  • The image is already in use and will have to be changed to something else.
  • You have to have a manufacturer of some sort, unless you intend to build the ship yourself in a massive dev thread.
 
Ayden Cater said:
@[member="Adenn Colston"]

  • Speed is wrong. Frigates start at Speed 5, Assault adds one to that, so this thing should be speed 6.
  • You need to list actual weapons (turbolasers, quad laser turrets, etc) instead of what you have currently.
  • The image is already in use and will have to be changed to something else.
  • You have to have a manufacturer of some sort, unless you intend to build the ship yourself in a massive dev thread.
Changed the speed, not sure which weapons are under which classification, and I don't know the manufacturer of the Imperial II-Class Frigate, I'll look up a new image and the manufacturer myself however
 

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