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Approved Tech Mandalorian wholegrain beer Mustard

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Lyth Meran

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Name: Mando Mustard
  • Manufacturer: Meran Catering
  • Affiliation: Open Market
  • Modularity: yes additional / differing beers can be used
  • Production: Mass produced
  • Material: beer rapeseed oil and mustardseed
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
  • Classification: food
  • Method of Consumption: oral
  • Average Life: can last 1 to 2 year in proper conditions
  • Nutritional Value/Allergies/Side Effects/ Purpose: decently high in fiber
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • is Tangy to hot taste
STRENGTHS
  • additional to a meal
WEAKNESSES
  • Not very lightsaber resistant
  • May act as a allergen
DESCRIPTION
Lo it is said that all mandalorians have a taste for war..
i tell thee nay the have a taste for Mustard.
Lo this is made from the finest mandalorian beer the strongest mustard seed and the best Mandalorian oils.
this is the greatest of all mustards.
lo when asked " What is best in life?" Mandalor Izen the great answered
"To crush your enemies, see them driven before you, and Mustard on Cheese and toast! "

The ingredients are made of high quality Brewed Beer crafted on the teraformed world Vito
as is the Mustard. the oil crafted from the finest rapeseed.

the Mustard seed are fermented in beer and blended to create a lumpy spreadable sauce that's tangy spicy and can be mad to order
as in alternate beers additional spices or honey for sweetness
 
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Lyth Meran Lyth Meran

Greetings, I am Vis and I will be reviewing this submission. I always like to see folks sub stuff like this, it makes the galaxy richer and more immersive and besides, it's just plain fun.

That said, however, I have a couple of suggestions. First, I must humbly ask that you remove all references to 'anal consumption' from this sub. Can't believe I said that :) Also, in your description, while the advertisement language is clever, please include at least a few lines discussing the making of this product, its qualities, ingredients, et al. We like to have a sense of understanding here, particularly in submissions such as this one, to help towards that 'world-building' sense I spoke about.

Otherwise, great idea and good submission.
 
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