NIO's Best Ensign
I've been threading in the TSE Invasion of Bastion and find it difficult to load pages and read through everyone's posts, especially to effect of creating a cohesive internal understanding of the narrative.
To tl;dr the suggestion without droning, I think something that would be helpful is if there was a chronological progression of "plot points" for the objectives.
Characters who post in the invasion/annihilation/rebellion/diplomacy push forth their own take of the narrative--adding their unique selves and actions/interactions/reactions to the greater plot. For me, it seems difficult to chronologically fit these things into the narrative.
For example, for a space battle, that would look along the lines of:
1. Initial Engagement
While a fleeter could "plot point"-wise go from Initial Engagement to Blackout in two posts, perhaps a starfighter pilot writer would want to have multiple posts for the maneuverings and dogfighting within the "plot point" of Initial Engagement.
By adding "plot points" and the requirement to specify where a post correspond to the plot point, it would be far easier to follow along with the flow of the narrative as well as allow for characters to have different pacings of progressing the chronological plot and writing their own narrative.
What do you think?
To tl;dr the suggestion without droning, I think something that would be helpful is if there was a chronological progression of "plot points" for the objectives.
Characters who post in the invasion/annihilation/rebellion/diplomacy push forth their own take of the narrative--adding their unique selves and actions/interactions/reactions to the greater plot. For me, it seems difficult to chronologically fit these things into the narrative.
For example, for a space battle, that would look along the lines of:
1. Initial Engagement
- TSE advances
- NIO defends
- NIO causes system wide comms to go down
- TSE consolidates forces and fires weapons
While a fleeter could "plot point"-wise go from Initial Engagement to Blackout in two posts, perhaps a starfighter pilot writer would want to have multiple posts for the maneuverings and dogfighting within the "plot point" of Initial Engagement.
By adding "plot points" and the requirement to specify where a post correspond to the plot point, it would be far easier to follow along with the flow of the narrative as well as allow for characters to have different pacings of progressing the chronological plot and writing their own narrative.
What do you think?