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Approved Tech M33 Anson Heavy Incendiary Bomb

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a heavy incendiary bomb for the closed market and future submissions.
  • Image Source: N/A
  • Canon Link: N/A
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Heavy Ion Bomb
  • Size: Very Large
  • Weight: Very Heavy
  • Explosive Type: Chemical Combustion
  • Delivery Method: Launched
  • Effective Range: Personal
  • Area Of Effect: Extreme
  • Stopping Power: Very High
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • The M33 Anson is able to intimately interface with a launcher and ship's tracking systems to accurately release the proton torpedo.
  • The M33 Anson features precise built-in thrusters that can adjust the flight of the torpedo accordingly.
  • Environmental sensors in the M33 Anson help adjust tracking depending on atmospheric conditions.
STRENGTHS
  • Pyromaniac: The M33 Anson is an extremely powerful ordnance, able to potentially do extreme amounts of damage to any substance that is corrosive to extreme heat, or organics. Jungles, organic systems, and all can be melted down to disfiguring cinders by a single bomb.
WEAKNESSES
  • Not For Armor: The flammable nature of the M33 Anson means that it performs poorly against well-armored vehicles, persons and ships.
DESCRIPTION
Roble Manufacturing's third model of heavy ordnance, the M32 Anson Heavy Incendiary Bomb is designed to be a people killer; chemical combustion resulting from the high-impact charge released on a naphthenic acid/styrene incendiary gel combination, creating a fast and hot-burning fire that can potentially eat away through any flammable or corrosive material. Although the Anson performs poorly against heavily armored or heat-insulated armors, it is extremely lethal against anything that is not resistant to heat, and an extremely valuable ordnance for any military to have.
 
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Alban Roble Alban Roble

This is a pretty solid submission all around, but I'll just need you to tone down the language in the submission to make it less absolute, please.

For example, instead of saying "creating a fast and hot-burning fire that eats away through any flammable or corrosive material" saying "creating a fast and hot-burning fire that can potentially eat through any flammable or corrosive material"
 
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