Approved Location Loste Citadel

[Maple Harte]

https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/princeofpersia/images/8/8a/Fortress_of_Time.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20080203181032&path-prefix=en



Intent: To create a more permanent place of residence for Maple Harte, as well as a place to store her equipment and acquired vehicles and vessels, along with exploring more of Maple's history.

​Image Credit:

Prince of Persia Wiki(http://princeofpersia.wikia.com/wiki/Prince_of_Persia_Wiki)


Deus Ex Wiki (http://deusex.wikia.com/wiki/Deus_Ex_Wiki)


creativeuncut.com(http://www.creativeuncut.com/gallery-28/to1886-tesla-lab-coil-experiment.html)

The Order: 1886

Canon: No

Links: N/A

SETTING INFORMATION

Structure Name: Loste Citadel

Classification: Abandoned Temple

Location: Dantooine. (Mountains) (http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Dantooine/Legends)




Affiliation: Maple Harte. (http://starwarsrp.net/topic/124267-maple-harte/)

Accessibility: Located in a midway point one one of Dantooine's smaller mountains on a flat natural base. Thick fog in this area usually keeps it hidden from air and usually hides it from ground level but is otherwise lacking in special means to keep it hidden. It can be accessed through a special hidden passage near the base of the mountain, but is primarily accessed via starship

Security: Powerful biometric locks, security force fields, and three functional, ceremonial droideka waiting to be fixed and activated.


Description: A large, imposing, fortress like structure, behind which lies a vast, underground hanger, capable of storing over a dozen light frieghter or personal corvette sized craft. The interior is vast, dusty, and abandoned,

POINTS OF INTEREST

Hanger: The Hanger is capable of storing and securing a dozen personal starships of respectable size. The ceiling parts overhead to allow lift off.

Personal quarters: loft size rooms to allow the Marksmen breathing room. Mostly abandoned, Each room has high quality displays designed to simulate windows to outdoor environments on other planets. Maple's had hers set to simulate ancient Coruscant. Most of Maple's stuff before she left is intact, painstakingly preserved for some reason by Ursula (https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/deusex/images/b/b8/AdamJensenApartment.png/revision/latest?cb=20110917135452&path-prefix=en)

Ursula Sandraven's personal quarters: Abandoned, dusty, and vast, Sandraven installed both a meditation chamber and a wide, personal dueling circle. It clearly has not been inhabited in some time. The security features are controlled from this room.(https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/princeofpersia/images/b/b3/Throneroomww.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20180305005453&path-prefix=en)

Hidden lab of Ursula: A strange lab hidden behind Sandravens's bed, filled with old and ancient equipment and electrical coils. Has a work bench as well as tools to personally upgrade equipment.(https://za.pinterest.com/pin/427349452132957355/?%24ios_deeplink_path=pinterest%3A%2F%2Fpin%2F427349452132957355&%24android_deeplink_path=pinterest%3A%2F%2Fpin%2F427349452132957355&amp_client_id=MDDsiXlADXX6EUrH2EWP2KZUHs3h8smHrNrbgg7vvDEkjKNr452AJQs73QLZLuyP&utm_source=168&utm_medium=2160&%24fallback_url=https%3A%2F%2Fza.pinterest.com%2Fpin%2F427349452132957355%2F&current_page_url=https%3A%2F%2Fza.pinterest.com%2Famp%2Fpin%2F427349452132957355%2F&install_id=f158772c53ec4f03bc55f26bd53ff178&_branch_match_id=494635204967199244)

Abandoned underground dueling chamber: One of the oldest sections of the facility deep within the abandoned temple. It is a simple structure of rock with a circular scheme, led up to by a vast hall with confining walls, presumably to encourage refinement of one's close quarters skills. This is only the first level. The secondary level contains a much wider and more traditional dueling chamber scheme. The scouring marks indicate vicious lightsaber battles occured within its halls.(https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/princeofpersia/images/1/17/Time_Portal_WW.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20130602200236&path-prefix=en)

Shooting range: The practice range of the Marksmen, long and with sensors to detect every hit on holographic targets, both moving and not.. Its indoors.

Hiram Loste's Tomb: Hiram Loste, founder of the Marksmen and Ursula Sandraven's mentor. Loste developed and experimented with styles of lightsaber fighting joined with stick type weapons. Loste's tomb is peaceful, despite the lonliness. (https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/princeofpersia/images/9/9d/Hourglasscham.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20180304140021&path-prefix=en)

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Built during the Gulag plague as an ancient refuge for the Jedi, only to be abandoned completely in the proceeding three centuries, Jedi Master and Shadow Hiram Loste would discover and renovate the old temple into a training center for his band of warriors and Jedi skilled in long range assassination. He tutored Sandraven, who took control after Loste was killed in battle on Jakku. Maple spent her formative years as a shadow here, trained by Ursula personally. By this point it has long been abandoned once more, no sign of the Marksmen anywhere. Maple lays claim to the whole facility, as the way she sees it, she is owed compensation for what Ursula put her through, and perhaps the facility can be raised to greatness under another flag...

 

[Maple Harte]

Ready to move this to location creation, [member="Jairus Starvald"]

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Maple Harte"]

Under Review

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Maple Harte"]

First off, I'm going to need you to properly source all of your images.

How to properly source your images!

Links: Maple will travel here after the liberation of Katanos VII, to restore it to working function.

This is for links that don't fit in other sections- not extraneous details. Remove this or put it somewhere else in your sub.

Classification: There are indications it was once a temple of some kind, but it was abandoned at some point.

This information would be appropriate for description, not for classification. You can put simply 'Abandoned Temple' or something similar here.

Location: Dantooine. (Mountains)

Affiliation: The Marksmen (Disbanded), Maple Hart

Add links to the wookiee entry for Dantooine, and a link to the Marksmen if it exists (or you can remove this since it is not the current affiliation), and to your character.

 

[Maple Harte]

Fixed what you listed, and I THINK I got the image sourcing correct. But if I have not, let me know. I really tried to get that correct. [member="Irajah Ven"]

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Maple Harte"]

Some of this is okay, some isn't unfortunately.

The stuff from Prince of Persia and Deux Ex are all screen grabs from the game- so that stuff is sufficient cause it's not art that's been privately made and you've cited the game it is from.

The pinterest image is concept art from another video game. [member="Jairus Starvald"] tracked down a source you can link to for it:
http://www.creativeuncut.com/gallery-28/to1886-tesla-lab-coil-experiment.html


Something I'm seeing a lot in this sub is a lot of subjective information from the POV of the character (examples, but not limited to: " meaning Maple will have to find ways to unlock the doors." and " Maple was not sure what this place was for, only that it gives her the creeps whenever she walks in")- these upper fields are for objective knowledge, not your character's impressions and feelings on the location. If you want to include that info because it is important to you, History is the appropriate spot. Take a look through the sub and remove/move those subjective impressions.

Accessibility: Located in a midway point one one of Dantooine's smaller mountains on a flat natural base. Thick fog in this area usually keeps it hidden from air and usually hides it from ground level but is otherwise lacking in special means to keep it hidden. It is isolated, lonely, but roomy and with great opportunity for customization. Its security systems, mostly powerful Force Fields and hallways patroled by ceremonial Droideka, were powered down completely when she finds it, with most droids in a state of disrepair. It contains powerful biometric locks and mag sealed doors shutting off other parts of the facility, meaning Maple will have to find ways to unlock the doors.

Everything after: " Located in a midway point one one of Dantooine's smaller mountains on a flat natural base. Thick fog in this area usually keeps it hidden from air and usually hides it from ground level but is otherwise lacking in special means to keep it hidden." is unrelated to Accessibility, and belongs in either description ( It is isolated, lonely, but roomy and with great opportunity for customization.) or security (the rest of it).

 

[Maple Harte]

Fixed what else you listed and added the link. Special thanks to [member="Jairus Starvald"] for going out of his way to help me. I really appreciate that.

[member="Irajah Ven"]

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Maple Harte"]

Thank you, excellent.

You can completely remove the pinterest credit- it's entirely unneeded now that an accurate image credit is offered.

Otherwise this looks good and once that's done I'll stamp it.

 

[Maple Harte]

Pinterest credit removed, [member="Irajah Ven"]

 

[Kuzo]

[member="Maple Harte"]

Looks good, pending secondary.

 

[Zeradias Mant]

Approved.