Looking for Character Feedback

[SonoftheStars]

So I recently was thinking about my experiences rp'ing here, and started thinking of how I've interacted with people, good and bad. So, I decided to ask for feedback on my characters. If you have had any interaction with the following characters, please come and give your honest opinion of the quality of both my writing and my interaction with you. Keep it clean and respectful, of course, but feel free to speak your mind, and if you really just want to let me have it, do it in a pm please. A preferred response would be at least one good thing and at least one bad thing, but you don't have to follow that pattern if you don't want to.

Characters:
Otium Mentis
Filius Stellarum
Txon Taronyu
Miles Cormin
Jenson Koraz
Blazing Eye
Atiniir Starrider

Thank you for helping me to improve my rp!