Approved Starship Liberty class battleship

[Custani Valcho]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Purpose: Create top of the line battleship for the United Galactic Federation

Affiliation: United Galactic Federation , UGF Exodus Fleet, UGF Mercantile Fleet

Subclasses: Liberty class destroyer, Liberty class Carrier
Liberty class assult cruiser
Production Information
Manufacturer: Shovik- Orion Defense Solutions
Model: Liberty Multi- Class Warship
Production: Semi-Unique
U.G.F.S Freedom
C.N.S Bane of Tyranny ( Former Flagship of CIS Vice Marshall [member="Cypher Rage"])
C.D.F 00001( being donated to the Corellian Confederation)
U.G.F.S Endevor
U.G.F.S Democracy
U.G.F.S INVINCIBLE'
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Multi Class Warship
Length:2,000meters
Width: 1,500meters
Height: 500 meters
Armaments
Offense Rating: Very High
Offensive Capabilities:
45 long range turbo lasers
15 heavy turbo lasers
7 torpedo launchers
1 Focaused Ion Beam ( This a special feature that allows the ship to disable other ship's shields and weapons Syestems. This weapon can only be used once at full power before it has to be recharged. Unique weapon supplied by SODS)
75 standard particle cannons
Fighter Carrying Capability (Carrier only)

Defensive Capabilities :
Speed: High

Defense Rating: Very High

45 point defense turbo lasers
25 plasma Railguns
25 ion Railguns
25 particle Railguns
Hangar Allocation:
Fighters:6 Squadrons
Support Craft:5 Squadrons. - All troop transports


Strengths:
High Focus Range: with it's long range turbo lasers the Liberty can execute any enemy ship outside of normal weapons range

Carrier Capability- while not designed to be a dedicated Carrier the Liberty can carry a minimum of 15 fighters at a time

Weakness:

Exposed Engines- The Liberty is a capable Warship but its over exposed engine make for an easy target.

Sluggish Recharging- The Focused Ion Beam can only be fired at high power once before it has to be recharged. This takes over 5 hours,taking away the Liberty's most powerful weapon.

Speed:
Hyperdrive class: Class 1( Class 12 in emergency)

Materials: Phrik Hull
Cortosis Bulkheads. Spitfire Drive Engine ( unique drive supplied by SODS) Various Equipment.

Fighter Rating: Moderate
Manuverbility: Moderate

Description: The Liberty class Battlecruiser is designed to be both the Flagship of a
large fleet and a top of the line battleship designed to serve and protect the citizens of the United Galactic Federation and it's allies. Although it rarely sees combat on a regular basis it's crew and it self is drilled day by day and week by week to ensure the victory of the Federation, Confederation of Corellia and Confederacy of Independent Systems. The galaxy is not a safe place but with the Liberty and it's sister classes it will be














Starship Sensor Package
Starship Ion Engines
Starship Hyperdrive
Starship Shield Generators
Starship Repulsorlift Engine
Starship Maneuvering Thrusters
Starship Life Support System
Starship Escape Pods
Starship Inertial Dampeners
Starship Medical Bay
Starship Barrack

 

[John Locke]

Under Review.

 

[John Locke]

[member="Grand Admiral Cypher Raige"]

Hi, I'm the factory judge who'll be reviewing this ship. You've got most things down, but there are a few things I want to bring your attention to. I've included the link to the template on ships below for your reference, I'll be referring back to it.

Template

So, the first thing I want to bring to your attention is the size of your ship,

Length: 9,000 meters

Any ship larger than 5,000m is classed as an SSD on Chaos, the rules for subbing an SSD require your faction to have completed 3 Dominions in a month. The affiliation is for your minor faction, which by definition can't do the dominions means that you can't sub a ship at this length. I noticed you're a member of the CIS, but to create an SSD you would need to have your faction owners permission.

I also want to bring your attention to the table below from the template thread.

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As you can see, a minor faction can't field a ship larger than 3000m, 1/3 the size of the ship right now. If you were to sub this under the CIS, you could increase the size fo 5,000m but then it couldn't be the flagship of United Galactic Federation. If you want to keep the intent of the ship, I'm going to have to ask you to reduce the length and width of the ship down to 3000m.

Next, I noticed you failed to link the manufacturer,

Manufacturer: Shovik- Orion Defense Solutions

If you could link through to the company, that would be awesome.

I also want to bring your attention to the offensive and defensive sections of your submission.

Offensive Capabilities: 15 long range turbo lasers 30 heavy turbo lasers 50 torpedo launchers Focaused Ion Beam Fighter Carrying Capability (Carrier only) Defensive Capabilities : 45 point defense turbo lasers 50 plasma Railguns 50 in Railguns 50x Saotome Snare Battery

If you look at the template you can see that it specifically notes that "You may provide your armament in list format and must provide your vessel an Armament Rating" the same is true for the defensive rating. I'm going to have to ask you to adjust the submission to please include the required ratings. The same applies to the fighter rating

I also want to point out that you have listed the Saotome Snare Battery without linking it, I have provided the link here. This submission is affiliated to the company only, so I'll need some proof that the company has approved its use here and for them to be listed as a manufacturer. I would recommend talking to the writer to seek their permission, however if the permission is not forthcoming then you'll need to remove it.

Fighter Carrying Capability (Carrier only)

There are specific ratings for fighters on the template, while you can go smaller than the rating you choose, you need to actually choose a rating rather than just put a number in your special features.

Moderate Speed- the Liberty is much slower than the counterparts in it's Battle groups. This means the Liberty will not be able to run from enemy fleet as fast as it's smaller counterparts.

While you have listed this as a weakness, a moderate speed rating means that it is faster than the average rating on the board, and as such is not a true weakness.

I have to point out that there are several parts of the template that are missing. While you can add to the template, you are not allowed to remove from it. As such I'm going to have to ask you to please bring this submission in line with the factory template before I can think about approving this submission.

I understand that there are a lot of points here, and I'm asking you to do some additional work to the submission so feel free to tag me if you have any questions you would like answered. Additionally, if you wish me to move this submission back to the prefactory to allow you to work on it without a time pressure let me know and I will shift it there for you.

 

[Custani Valcho]

[member="John Locke"]

I believe I have made all the nesscary changes although I am unable to link in the company because I use mobile

 

[John Locke]

[member="Grand Admiral Cypher Raige"]

Thank you, this is a lot better, but there are still some issues I want to bring to your attention.

Since you were unable to, I have added the link to the company for you.

Width: 3,500 meters

The width is still larger than 3,500m, could you please reduce this size?

Production: Minor

You've marked this to minor production, however the manufacturer is a company. If you look at the table below you'll see that a company can only produce battle cruisers at a limited production.

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Could you please reduce the production to Limited or lower?

1 Focaused Ion Beam

I'm not sure what you mean by this, could you give us a little more detail what a Focused Ion Beam is and what it's capabilities are?

50 plasma Railguns 50 ion Railguns 75 particle cannons

These all sound like offensive weapons instead of defensive weapons.

In addition, you still haven't brought the submission into line with the current template on ships. Could you please edit your submission to match the rating? You are missing a rating for fighters, and manoeuvrability.

 

[Custani Valcho]

[member="John Locke"]

Could you please review this again.

 

[John Locke]

[member="Custani Valcho"] Hey, ok lets take a look

So, the first thing I noticed was that you have an incomplete template. In particular the following.

Speed:

While you have the speed rating there you haven't filled it out. You have also got to include a hangar allocation, splitting your rating between fighters and support craft (shuttles, landers etc)

There were two other things I noticed on a first read through. Firstly,

Production: Limited UGFS Freedom UGFS Bane of Tyranny ( Flagship of CIS Voice Marshall Cypher Rage) 1 unnamed ship ( being donated to the Corellian Confederation) UGFS Endevor UGFS Democracy UGFS INVINCIBLE

A limited production series of ships can only be used by a small part of a faction, but you're giving one to Corellia, so in this circumstance I'd suggest using the semi-unique rating so you can give one to Corellia easily.

The other thing that stands out is that the ship is extremely over powered as it currently stands. I calculate that you are 6 ratings too high in this submission. I would recommend using the spreadsheet we provide here to work out a balanced submission you would be happy with.

As always I will approve this submission as it stand if you me want to, however if used in RP and especially PvP it does have a high chance of being reported to factory staff and being pulled up for a more detailed run through.

 

[Custani Valcho]

[member="John Locke"]. I am ready for this to be approved

 

[John Locke]

[member="Custani Valcho"]

That is fine, I shall go ahead and do so. Could you just complete the speed rating and Hangar Allocations first so as to bring it into line with the factory template?

 

[Custani Valcho]

[member="John Locke"].

I believe it is ready.

 

[John Locke]

[member="Custani Valcho"]

As it currently stands the submission is not complete, since you are missing two of the required fields. As per your request I will be approving this submission with the ratings in their current form, however in order to approve any submission we require the template to be completed. I have provided a link to the template I will be referring to here, given the size of these ships we will be looking at the Battlecruiser template which I have copied below for ease of reference.

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: (Example: 'A personal weapon for Darth Scabious' or 'an advanced armored personnel carrier for the Republic')
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PRODUCTION INFORMATION

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TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: (Destroyer, Assault, Escort, Exploration, Medical, Patrol, Transport, Dedicated Carrier, Command Ship, Escort, Heavy Carrier, Planetary Assault Carrier)
• Length: (Via Metric System. Max: 5000 meters. Examples: Venator-class Star Destroyer: 1137 meters, Imperial-class Star Destroyer: 1600 meters, Allegiance-class Battlecruiser: 2200 meters)
• Width: (Via Metric System. Max: 5000 meters. Examples: Venator-class Star Destroyer: 548 meters meters, Imperial-class Star Destroyer: 900 meters, Allegiance-class Battlecruiser: 1100 meters)
• Height: (Via Metric System. Max: 5000 meters. Examples: Venator-class Star Destroyer: 268 meters, Imperial-class Star Destroyer: 400 meters, Allegiance-class Battlecruiser: 450 meters)
• Armament: (You may provide your armament in list format and must provide your vessel an Armament Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, Moderate, High, Very High, Extreme. Armament Ratings are scaled in relation to the class of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. For example an average 900m ship will outgun an average 600m ship. Armament Ratings provide only basic weaponry unless the ship also has a description of weapons. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Starship Weapons, Approved Technology)
• Defenses: (You may provide your shield and armor systems in list format and must provide your vessel an Defense Rating. (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, Moderate, High, Very High, Extreme. Where None is a man in a space suit hanging on to an engine, Average is typical defense, and Extreme is heaviest defense with heavy armor plating and multiple layers of powerful shields. Defensive Ratings are scaled in relation to the type of ship, meaning a Starfighter will not equate to a Destroyer. You should list particular systems under advanced systems. Please link to all Factory Submissions used. Links: Approved Technology)
• Hangar Space: (Please provide the amount of fighters/support craft this submission can hold in it's hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )
  2000 Meters: [None: 3 | Very Low: 6 | Low: 7 | Average: 10 | Moderate: 11 | High: 14 | Very High: 18 | Extreme: 21]
• 2500 Meters: [None: 3 | Very Low: 7 | Low: 8 | Average: 12 | Moderate: 13 | High: 17 | Very High: 21 | Extreme: 25]
• 3000 Meters: [None: 4 | Very Low: 9 | Low: 10 | Average: 15 | Moderate: 16 | High: 21 | Very High: 25 | Extreme: 30]
• 3500 Meters: [None: 4 | Very Low: 10 | Low: 11 | Average: 17 | Moderate: 18 | High: 24 | Very High: 28 | Extreme: 34]
• 4000 Meters: [None: 5 | Very Low: 12 | Low: 13 | Average: 20 | Moderate: 21 | High: 28 | Very High: 32 | Extreme: 39]
• 4500 Meters: [None: 5 | Very Low: 13 | Low: 14 | Average: 22 | Moderate: 23 | High: 31 | Very High: 35 | Extreme: 43]
• 5000 Meters: [None: 6 | Very Low: 15 | Low: 16 | Average: 25 | Moderate: 26 | High: 35 | Very High: 39 | Extreme: 48]

[*]Hangar Allocations: (This is the allocated amounts of starfighters and support craft (dropships, shuttles,gunships,etc) this submission can hold in its hangar based on the maximum hangar space capacity listed above)

• Starfighters: x squadrons
• Support Craft: x squadrons (Minimum squadrons lists should match the squadrons listed for the "None" rating for ship its size)

[*]Maneuverability Rating: (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, Moderate, High, Very High, Extreme. How agile is your ship? Can it take tight turns? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Maneuverability will be more agile than a Star Destroyer with a Low rating.
[*]Speed Rating: (Choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, Moderate, High, Very High, Extreme. How fast is your ship in normal space? How fast can it take off, how fast can it speed through a planet's atmosphere? This is relative to the size of the vessel (e.g. a Corvette with Low Speed will be quicker than a Star Destroyer with a Low Speed.
[*]Hyperdrive Class: (The lower the number, the faster the ship. You may use decimals. [Very Slow: 10 | Average: 2 | Very Fast: 0.3] Going below 1 typically requires balancing out with other weaknesses. Links: Hyperdrive, Hyperdrive Comparisons)
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• (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)

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Although you have added the speed rating you still have to add the hangar allocations as requested.

While you have provided a Hangar Rating as you can see from the template, you also need to provide a hangar allocation, splitting that space between fighters and support craft.

As I said, I am happy to approve this if you want, but to do so you will need to complete the rating the factory asks for so that this is a complete submission.

Please tag me back when you have done so.

 

[John Locke]

[member="Custani Valcho"]

My apologies, I didn't receive a tag that you had finished adjusting the submission.

Fighter Rating: Moderate

I assume you mean hangar rating, which means you can fit 11 squadrons.

However, you have put in the following squadrons.

Fighters: 10 Squadrons Support Craft: 15 Squadrons. - All troop transports

The total number of squadrons, needs to equal 11, if you could bring the numbers down then I think the ship will be ready.

 

[Custani Valcho]

[member="John Locke"]. I am done.

 

[John Locke]

[member="Custani Valcho"] Awesome! Thanks so much for working with me and enjoy the ships.

 

[John Locke]

Approved.