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Approved Tech Kyrel's Life support Armor

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Intent: To create a life support Armor for Kyrel Ren
[SIZE=11pt]Dev thread[/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]: [/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/102163-casus-belli-tygaran-alliancegalactic-alliance-vs-first-order-rebellion-of-kaeshana/[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Manufacturer: Kyrel Ren [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Model: N/A[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Affiliation: Kyrel Ren[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Modularity: No[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Production: [/SIZE][SIZE=11pt]Unique[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Material: Durasteel,Duraplast,Phrik, Cortosis armourweave cape. [/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Classification: Life support Armor.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Weight: 45 KG[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Quality: 9[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Special Features:[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Wrist Vibro blades[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Internal tubes that pump bacta[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Internal Air pump within the helmet to provide oxygen,and a backpack in the back that filters and supplies air.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Resistant to toxins, and provides the user to survive in space for a short time. [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Internal cybernetics grafted to the wearer to keep him alive out of the suit for two days.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Strengths: [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Lightsaber Resistant- Due to Phrik reinforcing the armor it is able to withstand two lightsaber strikes at the most against force wielders[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Intimidation- Given the dark look and the design the suit can be used to instill fear into the wearer’s enemies.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Sealed- The suit is able to withstand most gaseous toxins, and can survive in space for a time, and most hazard environments.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Blasterbolts- Could stand against multiple blaster bolts to the armor.[/SIZE]
[SIZE=11pt]Weaknesses: [/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Weight- The weight of the armor restricts the wearer in combat, and when it comes to lightsaber combat one must use a completely different variant than the more acrobatic and freeform approaches to combat.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Uncomfortable- The suit is not designed for comfort, and only used to keep the wearer alive causing much pain and discomfort to the wearer in the process.[/SIZE]

  • [SIZE=11pt]Electrical attacks- The suit cannot withstand an increased amount of electrical discharges, and so when introduced to electrical attacks, it makes the suit short circuit and shut down.[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Description:[/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]After his accident during a patrol mission as a TIE pilot, Thomas Kyrel was brought to Avalonia, Dosuun, where First Order Scientists were working hard to save Kyrel’s mangled body. Knowing he was a Force Sensitive many of the scientists were obsessed with the empire’s best work Darth Vader. Taking an old unused schematic from the archives of the old Empire they used Doctor Cylo’s work in creating a more updated version of Vader’s Armor. With using Durasteel and Duraplast, and making a cape out of simple Armorweave they sought to create a “Vader Reborn” Within Thomas, after three days of non stop work, and no anesthetics what emerged out of the operating table was no longer Thomas, but a cyborg that would become Kyrel Ren. The armor served as a simple life support suit giving him life, and adding two vibroblades to the suit hidden within the armor. The suit became synonymous with Kyrel, as everyone who saw him viewed him as some kind Vader devotee, which he did modeling his fighting style, and behaviour off the former Sith Lord. The suit served Kyrel from The Red Nebula,to Virgillia,to Endor. During the Battle of Kaeshana between The First Order and The Galactic Alliance, Kyrel faced off against Jedi Trextan Voidstalker, and Charlyra Araano, Kyrel manage to hold off Trextan, and kill Charlyra, but this came at a cost. Before dying Charlyra with the help of Trextan delivered several lightsaber wounds to his armor, destroyed his cape, and with electrical attacks damaged the internal systems severely. After the battle Kyrel spent weeks within a bacta tank while his armor was repaired. The same group of scientists who originally designed it, recognized the faults within the armor when it came to dealing with force users so reinforced the armor with Phrik, and made a new cape out of Cortosis Armor weave. After three weeks of repairs Kyrel was placed back in the suit eager to serve The First Order, and be a formidable adversary to his enemies as a new Knight of Ren. [/SIZE]

[SIZE=11pt]Primary Source: N/A[/SIZE]
 
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[member="Aria Vale"]

Alright will edit it for the quality.

Alright question about that second one, what is the primary source? Still new to this type of thing with subs so forgive me if I am a bit ignorant on that. :)
 
[member="Kyrel Ren"]

Primary source is intended for modifying existing items. For this, you'll only need to put "N/A", but it is required as part of the template.
 
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