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Approved Starship Keldabe-class Cruiser

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Valdus Bral

️ Clan Bral Alor ️| Warlord of Nellogant
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

[*]Defenses: Moderate

[*]Hangar Space: (Please provide the amount of fighters this submission can hold in it's hangar by count of Squadrons, which hold 12 average Starfighters. The higher your squadron count, the lower your Armament and number of advanced systems should be. )
  • 1000 Meters: Average: 6

[*]Hangar Allocations: (This is the allocated amounts of starfighters and support craft (dropships, shuttles,gunships,etc) this submission can hold in its hangar based on the maximum hangar space capacity listed above)
  • Starfighters: 4 squadrons
  • Support Craft: 2 squadrons (Minimum squadrons lists should match the squadrons listed for the "Base" rating for ship its size)

[*]Maneuverability Rating: Low,
[*]Speed Rating: Low
[*]Hyperdrive Class: Average: 2
STANDARD FEATURES
  • All standard features for Heavy Cruiser classification starship as well as those explicitly stated within the Keldabe-class Battleship / Keldabe-class Cruiser official sources.

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
  • Shield Leecher Weapon - The Keldabe-class Cruiser is armed with a device that leeches the energy used to create deflector shields generated from enemy starfighters and starships that venture close to it and then uses that energy to bolster its own deflector shields and weapon systems. Due to a lack of canon measurement for the area of influence, this submission will determine that the area influenced by this weapon is a sphere 1,000 meters in diameter from the center of the Keldabe-class Cruiser. It is never said if this device is only capable of operating in space and as such it will be presumed that the device works at full efficiency despite the environment outside of direct/purposeful interference from unnatural sources.

Strengths:
  • Mandalorian Made - As is common with Mandalorian creations, the Keldabe-class Cruiser puts an emphasis on high amounts of offensive ability. During its original creation period it was capable of going toe-to-toe with an Imperial-class Star Destroyer, a ship nearly one and a half times its size.
  • Shield Leecher - An interesting trait of the Keldabe-class Cruiser is the ability to drain the shields of nearby hostile starfighters and starships known only as a "Shield Leecher Weapon". The energy drained from these starcraft are then used to bolster the Keldabe-class Cruiser's own shield strength and weapon systems.
Weaknesses:
  • Heavy Built - The Keldabe-class Cruiser has traded maneuverability and speed for a large armament and increased durability.
Description:

The Keldabe-class Cruiser (also known as the Keldabe-class Battleship) is a Mandal Hypernautics design and was originally produced by MandalMotors and Mandal Hypernautics. However, the design is considered a relic of the past and the knowledge to build the Keldabe-class Cruiser rests with many modern Mandalorian shipwrights. It was named after Mandalore's then-capital, Keldabe (though the capital of modern Mandalore has since changed to Sundari). Like the Mandalorian Crusader-class corvette, the cruiser's design is marked by sharp edges similar to the ancient Mandalorian Kandosii-type dreadnaught. Atop the main superstructure is a tower similar in design to the Galactic Empire's Star Destroyers

This class of cruisers were able to compete with the Galactic Empire's Imperial-class Star Destroyers. Keldabe-class Cruisers are armed with turbolasers, ion cannons, and a group of mass driver weapons. The mass drivers were located in batteries between the two engine systems and at the front of the ship. An interesting trait of the ship's design is that the ship is capable of leeching energy from enemy vessels and shields to power its own weapon systems. For comparison the cruiser was approximately a third more powerful than the Zann Consortium's Aggressor-class Star Destroyer, but this also led each cruiser to be much more expensive - approximately 200,000,000 (two-hundred million) credits per cruiser.

Additional Stats:
Crew: 6,000
Soldiers: 1,000
Cargo Capacity: 20,000 tons
Consumables: 2 years
 
Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening, [member="Valdus Bral"]! First and foremost, thank you for taking the time to use the Factory. I will be reviewing your submission with you and if all goes smoothly and without a hitch, we can have your ship to you in no time at all. Further if anything I say/write throughout this process does not make sense to you, please do not hesitate to ask me for clarification. So without further ado, let's begin . . .



Valdus Bral said:
Material: Durasteel
There is nothing wrong with the way you have written this, however I would suggest expanding on the materials used as the ship would have various materials used including something at least similar to Transparisteel (if not transparisteel0 for view ports.



Valdus Bral said:
Length: 1,000 meters - In extended canon the length is 1,035 meters. However, this puts the vessel into Star Destroyer classification and out of the Heavy Cruiser classification within Chaos' Factory. One of the notable traits of this starship was that it was smaller than a Star Destroyer but capable of matching its firepower. That is why I have decided to shorten the length by 35 meters.
You can just leave this at 1000 meters. You don't to include the clarification afterward



Valdus Bral said:
Shield Leecher Weapon - The Keldabe-class Cruiser is armed with a device that leeches the energy used to create deflector shields generated from enemy starfighters and starships that venture close to it and then uses that energy to bolster its own deflector shields and weapon systems. Due to a lack of canon measurement for the area of influence, this submission will determine that the area influenced by this weapon is a sphere 1,000 meters in diameter from the center of the Keldabe-class Cruiser. It is never said if this device is only capable of operating in space and as such it will be presumed that the device works at full efficiency despite the environment outside of direct/purposeful interference from unnatural sources.
I'm afraid for this, you are going to have to do one of three things.
  1. Link a canon/legends/subbed "Shield Leecher Weapon"
  2. Sub a "Shield Leecher Weapon"
  3. Remove this from the submission
If you can do one of these three things regarding this tech, it will be greatly appreciated. This will in turn effect you strengths if you choose to remove the "Shield Leecher Weapon" instead of providing a link to an either already approved factory sub, or to a canon/legends piece of technology.

Please tag me when changes/edits have been made, or if you need clarification
 
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