Approved NPC Kalous Ro

[Vandal Saar]

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Name: Kalous Ro
Loyalties: The First Order
Role: Knight
Development Threads: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/83518-the-master-and-the-apprentice-npc-thread/
Age: 54
Species: Human
Force Sensitivity: Yes
Appearance: Shows his age but also his experience. Tends to wear more lean clothing for better movement but puts robes on over to give off the appearance of an older, decrepit man. Wears a mask to conceal his face.
Personality: Sometimes plays the fool if only to annoy those he teaches. When teaching he’s stern, forward, keeps up the pressure and doesn’t relent.
Weapon of Choice: Lightsaber.
Wealth: Average, spends most of it on traveling.
Combat Function: Highly skilled in saber fighting over anything else.
Skills: Force Healing
Notable Possessions: His lightsaber which was given to him by his master, apparently passed on through others. Also carries two training sabers for himself and his student.
Other Notes: Has an ex-wife and daughter out somewhere in the galaxy. Does not see them due to the bad history between them.

Intent: To help train my character

 

[Reverance]

[member="Vandal Saar"]

Greetings, I will be reviewing your submission.

 

[Reverance]

[member="Vandal Saar"]

First things first, I'm going to need significant development for this NPC (25 posts) - due to him being a master, assuming your role matches with force rank. This development number may increase depending on quality of development and the characteristics of your npc. Below is the link to development guides for the codex.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/75918-codex-dev-thread-guide/

 

[Vandal Saar]

[member="Reverance"]

Understood. So do I just set up a thread and work it from there?

 

[Reverance]

[member="Vandal Saar"]

Yep. Start up a thread but and make sure to focus on the development of the NPC.

 

[Reverance]

[member="Vandal Saar"]

Where are we with development?

 

[Vandal Saar]

[member="Reverance"]

Here's the thread, let me know if anything needs to be fixed or the like.

http://starwarsrp.net/topic/83518-the-master-and-the-apprentice-npc-thread/

 

[Reverance]

[member="Vandal Saar"]

I'm gonna take some time to read this. But while I do, take the opportunity to beef up this submission a good deal. A master level NPC should have a submission that reflects his expertise, level of skill, personality, and connection to your character. Right now, I'm not getting enough information about the npc to feel comfortable with moving forward (feel free to use what you have done in the development to spice this sub up.) Along with that, link to the development thread directly in the submission.

 

[Vandal Saar]

[member="Reverance"]

I went back and changed a few things but, seeing that you're right about not having a lot since I don't need him for much, I've decided to knock him down to just a knight level character.

 

[Reverance]

[member="Vandal Saar"]

If that is your intent, please mention his rank in the submission and link to the development thread.

 

[Vandal Saar]

[member="Reverance"]

Made the edits.

 

[Gabriel Sionoma]

Role: Knight
Development Threads: None
Age: 54

Put your development thread in that portion of submission please. Just to keep things uniform.

 

[Reverance]

[member="Vandal Saar"]

Apologies for posting with the wrong account. Edit request still stands.

 

[Vandal Saar]

[member="Reverance"]

Edited. So sorry if this is all a hassle. My first time :unsure:

 

[Reverance]

[member="Vandal Saar"]

With the drop down to Knight, this looks fine to me.

Approved pending secondary.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Approved.