Hey all, this is a first. but I figured I might as well throw it out there. I've been writing with Kala for....little over five months now, and am trying to get a gauge on if there areas of improvement that I can make. I mean, there are always areas to improve upon, but I do aim to write compelling character pieces, so I'm always curious how it is panning out. Well, with Kalanda about to hit another streak of development, I wanted to try and see if there are things I should keep in mind as I start another arc with her. Any and all feedback is appreciated! Thank you for your time!