Approved Vehicle JSA-H1

[Jak Sandrow]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To give Jak a speeder bike
• Image Source: Found here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Restricted Missions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Jak Sandrow
• Model: N/A
• Affiliation: Jak Sandrow
• Production: Unique
• Material: Durasteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Speeder bike
• Role: Recon/Fast Attack
• Size: 5 m long
• Weight: Low
• Minimum Crew: 1
• Optimal Crew: 1
• Propulsion: Repulsorlift
• Speed: Very Fast - 600 km/h (with pilot)
• Maneuverability: Moderate
• Armament: Low
• 1x Laser Cannon
• 1x Slugthrower
• Defenses: None
• Squadron Count: N/A
• Passenger Capacity: 0
• Cargo Capacity: Can carry up to 180 kg evenly balanced over the back of the speeder - every 45 kg slows it down 50 km/h

SPECIAL FEATURES
None

Strengths:

• Greased lightning - No shielding, no armor, practically no protection of any kind means all the power and weight can be used entirely for speed.
• Easy to fix - Made from scrap pieces lying around, anyone with a hydrospanner and any technical expertise could fix it.

Weaknesses:

• Tin can - No shielding, no armor, and practically no protection make the craft dangerous to fly. Unless the pilot has their own shield generator, they have no protection whatsoever.
• Portable rust - Any being susceptible to tetanus will have to make sure their shots are up to date. This thing isn't orange from the paint alone.

Description: Raxus Prime also afforded Jak the time to make his own personal speeder. Whatever this is was enough for him.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Hello, I'll be the factory judge reviewing your submission. If you have questions, please feel free to respond to this thread once we are underway.

 

[Ellie Mors]

Cargo Capacity: Can carry up to 400 lbs evenly balanced over the back of the speeder - every 100 lbs slows it down 50 km/h

Please change imperial measurements to metric.

Maneuverability: High

You have Maneuverability and Maneuverability Rating included in your template, I would suggest removing one of them.

Speed: High - 600 km/h (with pilot)

600 km/h should be Very Fast.

Affiliation: None

This should be your character.

, made from Mass-Produced parts

You can include this in your description, but it doesn't belong in the production field. The only information that should be included here is the production level of the speeder alone.

 

[Jak Sandrow]

Alrighty -

Changed

• Cargo Capacity: Can carry up to 400 lbs evenly balanced over the back of the speeder - every 100 lbs slows it down 50 km/h

to

• Cargo Capacity: Can carry up to 180 kg evenly balanced over the back of the speeder - every 45 kg slows it down 50 km/h

Removed

• Maneuverability Rating: High

Changed

• Speed: High - 600 km/h (with pilot)

to

• Speed: Very Fast - 600 km/h (with pilot)

Changed

• Affiliation: None

to

• Affiliation: Jak Sandrow

Removed

• Production: Unique, made from Mass-Produced parts

Hope this covers everything? [member="Darth Ananta"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

Armament:

You need to have a rating here. Low would be acceptable here.

Maneuverability: High

Generally, the higher the speed on your vehicle, the lower your maneuverability is going to be. Please lower this to Moderate or below.

 

[Jak Sandrow]

Alright -

Changed

• Maneuverability: High

to

• Maneuverability: Moderate

Added

• Armament: Low

[member="Darth Ananta"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Cira"]

 

[Cira]

Approved.