Approved Vehicle Jet Cycle Mk.I

[Titan]

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Intent: To provide a land transport for Abraxis, and the Raxian Empire, as well as a cycle for open sale by CCT

Development Thread: If needed

Manufacturer: Concordia Crescent Technologies and Haven Shipyards
Model: Jet Cycle Mk.I

Affiliation: Closed Market

Modularity: No
Production: Mass Produced
Material: Durasteel

Height: 2 Meter

Length: 3 Meters

Width: 1.5 Meters

Weight: 200 Kilos

Minimum Crew: 1 Pilot

Optimal Crew: 1 Pilot

Propulsion:Wheels

Top Speed: 250 KM/H

Armaments: Light Blasters
Squadron Count: 24
Passenger Capacity: 0
Cargo Capacity: None

Misc. Equipment: None


Strengths: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)

• An ultra light design allows the cycle to get up to high speeds

Weaknesses: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 weaknesses of this submission.)

• Fragile, the bike was made for seed not durability any crashes will severely harm, or destroy the bike. With the latter being more likely.

Description: An ultra light design built for speed rather than durability, the Jet Cycle can reach up to 250 KM/H. Though it has a severe downside, any crashes what so ever will most likely destroy the bike. With a squadron equal to almost double the norm, Jet Cycle's can normally be found in packs of at least a squadron if not more. The original design came from Abraxis' time in the Grid, as he tried to replicate it in the real world.

 

[Jamie Pyne]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
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WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Jamie Pyne]

Hi [member="Abraxis"]! I will be reviewing this submission.

There's just a couple of things that need editing or clarification.

Height: 1 Meter

• This seems incredibly small in terms of height. If the highest point on this vehicle is 1 meter, the rider would almost certainly have to be a child, lest they have nowhere to put their legs aside from beside their face.

Weight: 60 Kilos

• 60 Kilograms is also incredibly light for two reasons. The first being that the material you listed states that it is almost double the weight of standard Durasteel, but you also make mention that the vehicle is supposed to be lightweight. Either the weight needs to be increased according to the material's description, or a different material should be chosen, though 60kg would still be a little bit too low for a high-speed vehicle. 200kg is more likely an accurate weight.

Top Speed: 250 KM/H

• This isn't all that fast in comparison to speeder bikes (or even motorcycles). You might want to increase this to around 350 km/h.

 

[Titan]

[member="Jamie Pyne"] done.

 

[Jamie Pyne]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Allyson Locke]

Approved.