Jen'ari Imperial Officers

[Darth Vyrassu]

http://i59.tinypic.com/2em2wxk.jpg

Name: Jen'ari Imperial Officer

Intent: Thier general role is to lead the Imperial Military Units in skirmishes, dominions or invasions as well as to make sure everything is going the way things should with in the Imperial Military.

Affiliation: Order of the Jen'ari

Availability: uncommon

Quality: C - trained

Type: Imperial Officer

Strength: 150 per unit
There is 150 Imperial Officers that are stationed on Dromund Vatsu. These 50 are the commanders of the Imperial Military. The other 100 officers range from the rank of 2nd Lt. Up to Captain and they are sent to where ever the Imperial Military is needed.

Description: The Imperial Officers are basic Shadow Troopers who have been promoted through hard work and dedication to The Order of the Jen'ari. They are controllers of different doings through the Imperial forces, such as command the Imperial Infantry Units into a combat zone, or planning an invasion or a dominion. They even at times have mapped navigational charts to find the best systems that are worthy to the Order of the Jen'ari for an invasion or Dominion. Some of the officers even work at the Imperial Military academy watching over cadets who will one day become an Imperial Shadow Troopers. The Imperial Officers are only armed with a SE-14R light repeating blaster pistol and a E-11 blaster rifle. Thier uniforms are basic Uniforms consisted of a pair of trousers, overfold tunic, and cover, along with standard black plast-leather belt, gloves and boots.

starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_military_uniforms

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/SE-14r_light_repeating_blaster

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/E-11_blaster_rifle


Links:
https://galacticnewssl.wordpress.com/2013/01/30/jenari-prepares-new-military-campaign/

https://galacticnewssl.wordpress.com/2012/04/04/sith-under-vyrassu-meet-with-allies-and-partners-on-eclipse/


https://galacticnewssl.wordpress.com/2012/04/16/eclipse-empire-meeting/

 

[Enoch Zambrano]

Under Review

 

[Enoch Zambrano]

Alright, I'll be working with you to get this approved. Let's do this.

Intent: Basic Roleplay fluff officers of the Jen'ari Imperial Military

When it comes to units, I'm uncomfortable with the word 'fluff.' That leaves a lot of vagueness for this unit to be used simply in passing-by, or launch a full on attack against a planet. Please clarify.

Strength: 150 per unit 2 Units = 300 Imperial Officers 150 for Imperial Army 150 for Imperial Navy

Because infantry and naval units are very different in training and what they do, I think these need two need to be different submissions, one for the infantry, and one for the navy. Also, this portion might include tactics and a break-down of the command.

Description: The Imperial Officers are basic Shadow Troopers or Imperial Navy pilots who have been promoted through hard work and dedication to The Order of the Jen'ari. They are controllers of different doings through the Imperial forces whether it's commanding the Jen'ari Imperial Armada or the Imperial Infantry Units. They are only armed with a SE-14R light repeating blaster pistol and a E-11 blaster rifle

I would like to ask for a more descriptive, well, description. Maybe a fleshed out ranking structure? This is also where strengths and weakness should be added.

Links:

I am going to need a link for the image, please. Also note that previous roleplays done with these units do not guarantee this sub will be accepted. However, thank you very much for linking them!

One last note, is this unit armorless? You have linked weapons, but no armor. Also, and vehicles the unit might use should be linked as well, if there are any.

Thanks~

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[Member=Enoch Zambrano]

Edited, I can't get the military uniform link to work, not my fault, but it's in there

 

[Enoch Zambrano]

There is 50 Imperial Officers that are stationed on Dromund Vatsu

I believe this is a typo, and should be 150.

starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Imperial_military_uniforms

No worries about the link, as long as it's there. Just remember this is a rather simple cloth outfit, not blaster resistant armor.

Other than the typo, everything else looks fine, and I'm ready to approve this.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[Member=Enoch Zambrano]

Edited,

 

[Enoch Zambrano]

Thank you very much! Good work. Approved, pending secondary.

[member="Darth Vyrassu"] [member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]
I am a little confused by this submission.

Why is it that there is a unit submission for officers in general? These officers do not fight as a unit, they are distributed to various units and academies as mentioned, so putting them together seems a bit strange.
What I would normally suggest is that you simply mention in your infantry sub that the officers are armed a certain, different way.

Can you give me your thoughts on this?

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[Member=Valiens Nantaris]

I just figured they need to be submitted since there is a large amount and they are NPC's

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]
It's for actual, complete military units only.

So you'd need to sub your standard infantry or armoured units etc, but there's no need to sub the individual components unless they form a battlefield formation.

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[Member=Valiens Nantaris]

Ah ok my mistake

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

I'll archive this, but feel free to use bits of it later in other subs.