Approved Starship Ireth-Class Cruiser

[Sanya Val Lerium]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To Develop a new Cruiser
Image Source: EVE Online
Canon Link:
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Inquisition Industries™
Model: Ireth-Class Cruiser
Affiliation: Ancora, ORC, SJO, Closed Market
Production: Mass
Material:
Durasteel interior
Quadranium frame
Alusteel hull
Alusteel reinforced plating
Glasteel Viewports
Classification: Destroyer
Length: 1000m
Width: 400m
Height: 120m
Armament: Average
Heavy turbo lasers

• 20 port
• 20 starboard

Ion cannons

• 20 port
• 20 starboard

Octuple heavy Turbo laser cannons

• 2 port bow
• 2 starboard bow

Point defence lasers

• 20 top
• 15 bottom
• 15 port
• 15 starboard

Defenses: Moderate
Heavy plated
MC 1011 Delphus.2-class Double Redundancy Shield Projector
Chaff launchers
Point Defense Emplacements
Reinforced frame
Em shielding

Hangar: 1 squadron
B-wing or B-zero

Maneuverability Rating: Moderate
Speed Rating: Average
Hyperdrive Class: 1 backup 15
SPECIAL FEATURES

Communications Array
Encryption Network
Holonet Transceiver
Shield Generator x 2
Reinforced Frame
Chaff Launchers
Inertial Compensator
Standard Life Support Systems
Standard Navigational Systems
Standard Sensor Array
Scanner System
Escape Pods
Assault boarding pods
Catapult pressor
Docking clamps
Repulsors
Biometric scanners
Containment field
Hydra
Opal
MC1005 Dolfin-class Communications Array
MC1003 Tetra-class Targeting/Tracking Array
Electromagnetic shielding


Strengths:

Agile - The Ireth-Class Cruiser is able to make tight turns making it easy to focus the most weapons on a target more easily.

Hardy - The ship has a lot of protection to keep it in a close quarter battle for longer.


Weaknesses:

Hanger size - The Ship has a very limited hanger size meaning very few ships can be carried inside.

Exposed thrusters - Once the shields have been depleted the ships is vulnerable to been made immobile due to the thrusters been exposed towards the inside of the ship.


Description:

The Ireth-Class Cruiser has been designed to tank damage and has the armor to take a fair amount of firepower. Its ability to turn fast makes it a formidable foe up close and at mid ranges however it does have a weak spot that can be exploited the inside area of the thrusters are exposed, this means a few well placed missiles or bombs could make the ship immobile.

As for its appearance the ship uses the Ancoran Royal colours Red, Black, Gold that suits its sleek modern design. The ship also has many supporting systems that aid in combat to deal with various types of situations making it efficient in combat. One such system is Hydra that allows ships to keep communication when they are been jammed.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

Under Review.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

Please give this sub a once-over QA check. You've got sentences that randomly end, some very rough formatting, and so on.

Additionally, I don't quite understand what you mean with your Hanger numbers. Is that a vastly reduced squadron count, or are there that many squadrons of each type of fighter?

If that is supposed to be five fighters total, that amounts to one squadron, in which case this ship is within balance standards and is approvable as-is. If it's meant to be something other than that, please let me know and we'll work from there.

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

[member="Cyrus Tregessar"]

when I read over it myself it makes sense so you'd need to point out the lines that may need tweaking. Also the ship inst able to support large squadrons so in total it has five ships inside.

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

Under 'Intent'

Intent: To Develop a new

Please finish that sentence.

Under 'Material'

Material: Durasteel interior Quadranium frame Alusteel hull Alusteel reinforced plating Glasteel Viewports

Change 'Hanger' to read 'One Squadron.' It is preferred to use sizes rather than specific ships, and that's in line with the concept behind the ship and balances out fine with the rest of the sub.

Under 'Strengths' please remove the parenthesized section.

Strengths: (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)

It's simply clarification text in the template and not needed. Please do the same for under 'Weaknesses.'

Also this bit.

Hanger size - The Ship has a very small hanger vastly making the amount of ships that can fit inside few

That sentence makes no sense. Something along the lines of 'The ship has a very small hanger, capable of holding only a single squadron.' would work.

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

[member="Cyrus Tregessar"]

edited exept for hanger

(3) - number of ships in squadron as per the star fighters submission
x1 - number of squadrons

I misunderstood one of your questions before.

My last sub graf had me list how many ships in a squadron with how many squadron

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

As written that gives this ship a size of Hanger: Two Squadrons, since Hanger is a property of the ship and Squadron Count is a property of the starfighter. If you keep Hanger Count at One, this ship is ready to be approved. If you want to bump it to Two, you'll need to either add another weakness or reduce one of the other ratings.

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

[member="Cyrus Tregessar"]

I've lowered the amount of ships down to three if that is acceptable?

2 B-wings 1 B-zero

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

[member="Sanya Val Swift"]

Hanger Size is a function of the ship, not the fighter. A potential customer could utilize this ship with any manner of fighter, based on the Hanger Size.

In your specific case, you are trying to put TWO squadrons of fighters on this ship, which would require a reduction in one other rating. This is because the Squadron Size of those fighters is very small, but that has no bearing on the Hanger Count of the ship.

Option 1. Hanger Count remains at ONE.
Option 2: Hanger Count increased to TWO. Another rating reduced by one mark or an additional appropriate weakness is added.

 

[Sanya Val Lerium]

[member="Cyrus Tregessar"] I've edited it

Hangar: 1 squadron
B-wing or B-zero

 

[Cyrus Tregessar]

Awesome. Pending Secondary Approval. Thanks! [member="Jamie Pyne"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

Approved.