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Approved Starship Intrepid Class - Heavy Cruiser

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Ravenous

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OOC Information
  • Intent: To create a Cruiser for Intrepid Inc.
  • Image Source: Here Fam
  • Cannon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: N/A
Production Information
Technical Specifications
  • Classification: Cruiser
  • Length: 780 Meters
  • Width: 300 meters
  • Height: 295 Meters
  • Armament: Very High
  • Defenses: High
  • Hangar Space
    • 750 Meters
    • 1 Hangar
  • Hangar Allocations
    • Average
    • 5 Squadrons
    • 8 Starfighters
    • 2 Support Craft
  • Maneuverability Rating: Very Low
  • Speed Rating: Low
  • Hyperdrive Class: Slow, 6
Standard Features
  • All Standard Features
Advanced Features
  • A DNA recording of all passengers on board at any given time
  • A direct line to Ravenous
  • A small weapons factory in the heart of each ship
Strengths
  • Armed to the teeth
  • Extremely resistant metal plating
  • Nice Paintjob
Weaknesses
  • Slow
  • Low sensor and weapons range
  • Onboard factory requires a massive amount of power and resources
Description
  • The Intrepid Class Heavy Cruiser was designed to be able to hold off hordes of ships on its own without support and also function as mobile command centers. When Intrepid Inc. began laundering credits and Resources meant for the outer rim Kriselist's local authorities and rival criminal organizations didn't take kindly to it and began to openly attack and raid Intrepid's shipments. In response to the ever-growing need for protection, Intrepid Inc. began production of Heavy cruisers designed for the purpose of protecting their foundries and shipments as well as escorting important officials to and from Kriselist.
 
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Ravenous

Hey there! I will cut straight to the nitty-gritty for this:
  • You are missing a Base (1 sqdrn) to Extreme (9 sqdrns) rating for your Hangar allocations. Your ship of this length may only have a maximum capacity of 9 squadrons unless you are willing to provide extensive reasoning.
  • The "Expensive to build and maintain" weakness will need to be changed. Be that as it may, I'd like to see this weakness replaced by something more reasonable and actionable. A limited production ship will no doubt be expensive to manufacture and maintain. Examples for alternatives: Limited firing arcs, slow deployment of starfighters, power fluctuations between shields and weapons.
I'm easy to please and I will work with you in getting you the starship that you envision. Just work with me a bit to balance and refine this bad boy a little bit. If you can provide very astute reasoning and provide appropriate weaknesses, I have no qualms in allowing you to exceed the hangar space for this ship size.

Please @tag me when you are finished with any adjustments that you have done. If you're interested, please feel free to use our Starship Spreadsheet calculator for the ratings business. Just select the tab rating for your ship length at the bottom and play with it until you are satisfied.
 
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