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Intent: To provide a unique weapon for Sirius Nova.
Development Thread: If Required.
Manufacturer: Narrikians
Model: Light Axe Model 1
Affiliation: Sirius Nova
Modularity: No
Production: Unique to Sirius Nova.
Material: This is made out of the standard materials of a Lightsaber, but sized up. In addition it has a bit of aurodium trim, and runes etched onto the handle of the hilt.
Classification: Axe
Size: One Handed
Length: 2 meters
Weight: 15 KG
Special Features: This axe has been modified so that it will electrocute the hell out of anyone who attempts to steal it, whose force signature is different than that of the owner. Other than that, it has no special properties besides being a light-saber axe. Presently the electrocution is only capable of happening if someone physically touches the axe.
Strengths:
- Able to do the same things as a Lightsaber: This is made to be similar to a lightsaber, but is an axe.

Weaknesses:
Light-saber resistant materials: These could block it.
The Force: Those more skilled with the Force could turn the weapon against him.

Description:
Created from studying some of the light-sabers that the Storm Troopers had when they invaded the Narrikian world of Setus Prime after they were defeated, the Light Axe is a weapon the Narrikians made. While they were not as capable with lightsaber technology they were able to make this. A black iron was used for construction of the 'base' of the axe and two red lightsaber crystals were used for construction of the axe's blade. Purified by the Narrikians they still retained their red coloration for some reason. This axe has been carved with certain runes that can be filled with energy from the force. The runes will 'fry' anyone who tries to steal the weapon by releasing a nasty Force Shock into their nervous system upon contact with the axe. The axe has recently been passed down to Sirius Nova.


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I think 30Kg is an overkill and makes the weapon redundant. Axes tend to be even of less weight than swords. For your own benefit, I suggest dropping the weight to 2kg perhaps ? Also, the length seems really short unless that's what you're going for.

Unless of course you really want it to be 30kg and 50cm.

Otherwise, it is a standard light axe with a nice tweak/trait on 'this is mine, no touch' force signature thingy.
 
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