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Approved NPC Ice

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Nima Tann

Master of Her Own Destiny
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"Woof." -Ice, 2016

Name: Ice
Loyalties: Nima Tann, Tygaran Alliance, SSC
Role: Pet, Combat Support
Intent: For him to become a friend and a companion for Nima.
Age: 5
Species: Mutated Wolf
Appearance: A horse sized, muscular pure white wolf whose eye color is icy blue. His body has several incurable wounds as a result of mutation. He has a baby face even though the huge and scary look of his body, makes him look like a huge puppy instead of a mutated wolf.

Development Threads:
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/58434-wet-paws-nima/?hl=paws – Found alongside his siblings
Cameos in several Nima threads.
Support in dominions, invasions.


Backstory:

His mother has been captured and experimented on by a mad Sith Alchemist who liked to experiment new things on animals, while she was pregnant with three babies who would be Ice and his siblings. The experiments carried on to the babies, the babies started to have mutation inside, the mother got more and more ill as the experiments continued and the babies growing, and then she stopped responding to any more experiments, which the Alchemist thought as a failure and threw the mother into the hunting spot of Endor for her to die. There, the mother succesfully gave birth to all of her children, they were all healthy babies, but same could not be said about the mother as her illness grew and grew with the added weakness after birth, to the point she could not even stand up anymore. Still feeding her newborn pups, she grew weaker and weaker. This continued until her newborn pups opened their eyes and had strength to walk themselves. Her being a mutant made her lifespan longer even though she was in such pain.

Meanwhile Nima and her sister landed on Endor as Nima wanted to surprise her with a birthday party, since her sister was in a desert zone all her life that she has never seen the green and blue together, which, both could easily be found in Endor. Then they’ve found a river as they continued to explore the area, just at the other side of the river they’ve found 3 little pups drinking water and playing with each other. Nima’s sister swam to the other side to take a closer look at the pups, which resulted their mother, even though in such pain, stand up to protect her children and with all her might, tried to attack them. Before the attack could be successful, another voice was heard, which sounded much bigger. It was a huge bear and taking the opportunity of mother being distracted by two, he charged to attack the babies. The mother’s attention immediately turned to the bear, tried to fight it off but could not manage. The bear won the fight and threw her to the side. Then Nima decided to act and ran to the between, meanwhile her sister took the babies and started to run back to the ship.

Killing the bear after taking so many damage, she then killed the wolf mother as well to end her suffering, as her mutation continued to keep her alive even though she was bleeding and in no condition to be saved. Because she was in no condition to even move, she fell unconscious back in their ship, which resulted her sister to get captured by the local gang. And at the same time, both of Ice’s siblings ran away from the ship as well, he was the only one trying to climb at Nima’s bed when she regained her consciousness. Both losing their siblings in one day, they’ve created a bond out of sadness. She felt very bad because both of those were her fault, so she took Ice to her care. The bond out of sadness turned into a bond of friendship.

The wolf grew up quickly, as each passing year meant he was growing more and more, after a while reaching to the size of a horse. Sharing everything to each other, they replaced their own little lonely time with a feeling of family. He was an extremely intelligent wolf, helping in so many ways, even she felt like he understood and really tried to help her through her problems, but of course that brought up negative things as well, like, Ice was indeed a big troll. Often he would be a rebellious 5 year old and did exactly the opposite of what Nima told, which could be adorable at times but Nima would get angry if he continued. Yet fortunately, he knew how to make her forgive himself, with the huge puppy eyes of course. And in battlefield, in contrast to his usual self, he was very loyal and protective towards her, even though he continued not to listen to her words from time to time.

So, their journey would continue, with each moment lived to its fullest, there was never a dull moment when you lived with a huge adorable wolf!

Strengths:

+His mutation made him stronger and faster, which is indeed a good asset to have in a battlefield.
+He is pretty intelligent and understands most of the words, even could strike a conversation with you, if you could understand him. Also he is a big puppy outside the battlefield, and a huge troll!
+His body can endure a lot of pain, taking this quality from his mother.

Weaknesses:

-His rebellious nature often puts him into harm’s way.
-He has weak spots in his body due to some wounds from his mutation, even though he can endure much, with enough pressure it could hurt him a lot.
-He is scared of fire.

Personality:

Pacifist Ice

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Friendly, rebellious, adorable, playful, also a famous memelord(might as well!)

Battle Mode Ice

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Loyal, Overprotective, Cold as Ice
 
[member="Nima Tann"]

Please specify what about Ice is mutated and what effect that has on him.

Additionally, please add one more weakness and proofread your backstory for typos. One I saw is when you reference Ice as a dog.

Once that's done, you should be good to go.
 

Nima Tann

Master of Her Own Destiny
[member="Gael bar Ammon"]

Well, to answer your questions.

Firstly, he is the size of a horse due to mutation. Also his speed and strength are increased greatly as an effect of mutation. Yet, as a side effect he gets the incurable wounds which are sensitive comparing to his whole body, and if pressed too much it's going to create internal bleeding.

Secondly, Nima sees him as her dog, and besides dogs are descended from wolves so that's not that much of a wrong thing to say here.

But, edited and done :)
 
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