Darth Strelok
I have asked for critique of my characters before, and have been extremelygreatful for the feedback on them, but this time I'd like your thoughts on the Lore itself.
See, I've been interweaving this lore about my Cult of The Brain Demon and how their actions during the Gulag Plague created ripple effects that are still being experienced to this day by my characters.
My questions are these:
1. How consistent is my internal lore on a scale of one to ten?
2. Has the use of the Lore enhanced the main story of my characters or was it too sporadic to be really commented upon?
3. Is the Lore intriguing? Can you get a clear depiction of what's happening and why?
See, I've been interweaving this lore about my Cult of The Brain Demon and how their actions during the Gulag Plague created ripple effects that are still being experienced to this day by my characters.
My questions are these:
1. How consistent is my internal lore on a scale of one to ten?
2. Has the use of the Lore enhanced the main story of my characters or was it too sporadic to be really commented upon?
3. Is the Lore intriguing? Can you get a clear depiction of what's happening and why?