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Tech Review House Io Gravitic Stealth System, Type 1

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Scion Mobile Shipyards
  • Affiliation: Scion Mobile Shipyards
  • Market Status: Closed
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: Yes (Can be scaled down to starfighters, or all the way up to SSD Sized Vessels)
  • Production: Semi-Unique
  • Material: Gravity Manipulation Electronics
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Gravity based Stealth System that modulates gravitational fields around vessel, making it far more difficult for Crystal Gravfield Traps to detect than Normal
  • Bends light around user and absorbs almost all incoming scans
  • Can be scaled all the way up to an SSD sized Vessel, or all the way down to a starfighter
STRENGTHS
  • Event Horizon: Derived from devices designed to affect and modulate gravity, the Gravitic Stealth System bends light around a vessel and blocks scans, while altering gravitational fluctuations around the vessels enough to potentially fool even vessels equipped with Crystal Grav Field Traps, making so that there is almost no fluctuation in local gravity fields, and if there is, its often so incredibly small as to be potentially discounted as a glitch or or even just flat out dismissed as a natural anomaly
  • Modularity: Can be scaled down to starfighters or all the way up to SSD sized vessels
  • Stygium free: One of the few cloaking systems not reliant on Stygium crystals
WEAKNESSES
  • Duration: Can Only be active for a duration of 7 hours before a duration of 14 is required to cool down and recharge. If disrupted before the seven hour limit is up, the recharge time is the same regardless
  • Detection Risk: It greatly, greatly, GREATLY reduces the chance of being detected by a Crystal Gravfield Trap. It does not eliminate it
  • Sensitivity: Requires constant adjustments by computer systems, which may slow down computing functions in other parts of the vessel, leading to possible loading times on other computer systems, Any disruption in computer systems could lead to the momentary disruption of the stealth system
  • Calibration issues: The device becomes harder to adjust and hide if near a planetary mass. It will still work, but vital power from other systems such as engines must be diverted to keep it working, reducing speed and agility to very low.
  • Double Blind: Using this system has an almost Hibridium like effect on the sensors of the vessel its installed in, reducing sensor strength to very low levels, and the accuracy of targeting systems by one fourth their potential
  • Shields: Absolutely no shields can be active while this system is on
  • Repairs: If damaged, it takes three times longer to repair than other stealth systems, and requires double the after flight maintenance after every use.
DESCRIPTION

The Gravitic Stealth System was crafted by House Io both to reduce the need for Stygium in their cloaked vessels, as well as provide a more effective means of potentially defying the Crystal Grav Field Trap. A touchy, delicate system, it is non the less a highly effective Next Generation Cloaking System, to give an out numbered faction an edge against their many, many, enemies.
 
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Krass Wyms

Jedi Tech Division
Factory Judge
Laertia Io Laertia Io

This is an interesting idea so credit but this reads as just another means to powergame. 1 in every 4th shot might miss, can't be detected, minimal weaknesses that don't factor into others writing against it. THe weaknesses are your discretion which means it can be exploited and always be perfect. It is another instant win item crafted to not write with another person but to just dominate and beat them.

So I am going to return it ot the pre-factory for heavy edits. Specifically ones that make it so you can cooperate with and work with someone you are using this on. Chaos is about telling stories together not turning on god mode and making a fan fiction where one side is always the best. I strongly recommend listening to what myself and the other judges have told you previously, make subs that work with people aand don't just try and turn on god mode for an instant win. It isn't in the cooperative narrative style of chaos.
 

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