HK-50 Assassin droid

[Causstik Rahn]

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[Boethiah]

Under review.

 

[Boethiah]

[member="Causstik Rahn"]

You don't have to keep all your information inside the brackets. The reason the submission template contains them is to explain what would go inside each field.

Additionally you're missing the following fields.

Species: [Remember to consult the Banned Species List, and be very careful about how you use banned species which may be NPC'ed.]

Force Sensitivity: [Choose from: Non-Force User, Apprentice/Padawan, Knight, Master]

Weapon of Choice: [Military blaster rifle? Toy lightsabre? Bioweapons? Wits? The Force?]

Skills: [For Force users if they have any special abilities that are rare list them here. If they are skilled with a blade, for Non Force users have they been trained by special groups?]

Wealth: [Please keep this reasonable, or be prepared to have a very good reason for exceptions. How wealthy are they? Where does that wealth come from? Are they stakeholders in existing corporations? If so, link to them.]

Intent: [State why you are making this submission. Is the character there to assist with faction roleplays, to help train your character, or provide an antagonist for dominions or something else entirely?]

Please consult the NPC individual template again and place them in their appropriate locations within this submission.

Age: Several Millennia

The HK-51 was introduced in 3668BBY, so it's not unreasonable for the droid to be this old. I will ask, however, that you provide an approximate age. As well, does this droid have any memories from these thousands of years?

Also, for 'Appearance:' please describe in writing. You are more than free to use images, but please also include their sources when you do.

Personality: [Smart aleck, loyal, efficient]

Could you expand this to a full paragraph at minimum?

For Combat Fuction there's quite a few things that will need changes and dev threads.

First, Stealth Filed Generators are a restricted item.

Personal Cloaking Device (( Objective : Complete a role-play without your character by only describing the scenery and actions of other characters from NPC perspectives without changing the course of the story directly. Ask for permission from the participants before engaging. ))

[He is capable of faster and more fluid motions, almost able to replicate those of organic humanoids, perform leaps, and perform combat rolls. HK-51 also has built in weapons and equipment. Wrist mounted micro-missile launchers and railgun, hidden smoke grenades, a stealth field generator, and the ability to repair himself if critically damaged. If all other options fail, HK-51 is implanted with a powerful explosive which he can activate in a kamikaze attack to complete his mission.]

This entire paragraph--and some sentences in other areas of this submission--is plagiarized; which is a violation of General Rule #13.

13. Plagiarism is prohibited.

Codex is a resource for writers to create their own works, in their own writing, and of their own inspirations. It should be personalized by you, rather than taken directly from something straight out of canon. For information you take from wiki articles, please rewrite them in your own words. The only time you should ever copy-paste anything is when citing sources/information.

Do be warned, if this happens again you will not be given a second chance.

As far as development concerns go, I'll give you an approximation of the minimum number of posts when you've made all the edits to this submission.

 

[Boethiah]

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