The quality of your posts is extremely consistent, never failing to lay down absolute HEAT. Such posting quality has made Lyra one of the few characters on the site I read in full even when the posts do not pertain to any of my characters. The amount of development and depth you've portrayed in the character in such a short amount of time is nothing short of impressive.
As for critique, I think it'd be interesting to see even
more of how war and adversity have changed her as a person. This isn't to say that you don't do it at all, only that I think there is room for more portrayal of that aspect. On the flip side, seeing what her 'other, more vulnerable side' of the strong and stoic soldier persona is like outside of just interactions with select characters could likely go a long way for further development. It's hand to find anything more than 'minor' critiques that are legitimate rather than just stemming from my own interest to see the character develop.
Keep up the good work, Commander.