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Approved Vehicle Hilal's Tank

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Heart Breaker and Life Taker
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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  • Intent: To expand Hilal's arsenal by providing her a tank that can be used to take out vehicles, small starfighters, and tanks.
  • Image Source: COD Tracker
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Durasteel, Military Grade Electronic Components
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Hilal Vizla
  • Affiliation: Hilal Vizla
  • Market Status: Closed Market
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: Yes
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: Durasteel
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • Adanced HUD: Has an advanced combat aid that displays the combat situation, and how much ammo is left. In addition, Hilal can use the HUD to communicate with anyone within her vicinity.
  • Self Destruct: At any time, Hilal can overload the core. As soon as she ejects from her tank, It will denotate after a 3 second fuse at a large radius. The explosion will deal massive damage to its surroundings.
STRENGTHS
  • Fast and Nimble: Thanks to the modified thrusters, Hilal can run rings around her opponents and can even match some Starfighters.
  • High damage output: At close range Hilal can melt people and tanks from close range due to her cannon's high rate of fire.
WEAKNESSES
  • Big: Hilal's tank is a large target for the enemy to fire upon.
  • Vulnerable Spots: In addition to being big, the tank's Wheels are vulnerable to high burst attacks. Any malfunctions to the leg will severely hamper its mobility leaving it have problems accelerating.
DESCRIPTION

After stumbling upon an abandoned building on the planet Kestri, a ten-year-old Hilal saw many weapons and parts scattered inside of the building. Desiring to build an ultimate weapon to defend herself, Hilal started to take the parts and constructed a tank. It was smaller than a typical tank but it more than made up for it with its speed and agility. As Hilal got older, she was able to add more features to the tank such as: Concussion missiles, better shielding to compensate for its relative fragility and an advanced HUD. Hilal's tank was the main inspiration for her armor and it remains an important part of Hilal's arsenal whenever she goes bounty hunting.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Hilal Vizsla Hilal Vizsla

Interesting one, however there are serious problems with it, the submission is violate one site, and one factory rules.
  • First, this is D.Va's mech from the Overwatch/HotS; the site rules prohibit the crossovers.
  • Second, this is a mech, and Factory rules prohibit the mechs.
  • Because of these, you need to totally rework the submission, and you need to chose a different vehicle art as well.
  • Not to mention you forget to add the Armaments and Defences ratings to your sub, so please edit this too.
Because of these I need to ask, do you want to rework this, or I should archive the thread?
 
HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Hilal Vizsla Hilal Vizsla

Thank you!
  • Armaments rating, you have to specify in only one rating. What you wrote this is a simple "Very High" or "Extreme" rating, please modify this.
  • Electrothermal Cannon; this is a not existing technology in the SW, so please remove it, or create it in the Factory, and you can link it after that.
 
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