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Helping with this new character

I've been a member of Star Wars role-playing sites for years and years, but it was almost always an extremely developed character who I played most of that time named Stap Praxeum. So, Dovan Grey is something new to me so I thought I would see if anyone has any feedback for the character.

My writing style can be a little erratic. I mostly write scripts for TV, film, and theatre. So, writing prose can be a little weird for me sometimes, but notes on that would be greatly appreciated as well.

Thanks!
 

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