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Approved Starship Hell-Bringer

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Affiliation: Open Market
Manufacturer: Titan Industries
Model: N/A
Modularity: Various types of bombs can be put in.
Production: Mass-Produced
Material: Durasteel Hull, Durasteel.
Classification: Bomber
Length: 2 meters
Height: 4 meters
Width: 3 meters
Armament: 5, 10 grenades or 1 medium-sized bomb carried in the cargo bay
Defenses: 10

Squadron Count: 20

Special Features: Able to drop bombs from its cargo bay.

Maneuverability Rating: 2
Speed Rating: 2
Hyperdrive Class: 0, no hyperdrive.
Strengths: +Fast and easily maneuverable. +Able to carry 10 grenades, or 1 medium-sized bomb in its cargo bay and drop it with a press of a button.
Weaknesses: -No hyperdrive. -If shot in the cargo bay, it may make the ship explode mid-air taking other nearby ships with it. -Not very effective in space. -As it is more effective near the atmosphere of a planet, it is normally in reach of mortars.

Description: The Hell-Bringer is supposed to be a quick, atmospheric, bomber dropping ship, that would normally be used in a first sweep/attack on a small city or rebel camp. These pilot-controlled ships, need to be carried in a carrier or left in an hangar bay nearby the attack, as they are not very effective in space, as dropping a bomb from there, would make it useless at it reached the surface. It's carbo bay that is located at the bottom of the Hell-Bringer, is where the armaments are stored and with a quick press of a button, the hatch opens, and Hell is brung upon your enemies.
Intent: To provide a mass-produced bomber for Titan Industries to sell.
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Undin Jaii Kryze said:
Armament: 0, except the bombs in the cargo bay.
Because this is carrying bombs, this will need armament rating. Based on your description in the strength's section, I would probably put this as a "4" or "5". I would also probably list the loadout from the strength's section here.



Undin Jaii Kryze said:
Maneuverability Rating: 5 Hyperdrive Class: 0, no hyperdrive.
We're missing the speed rating here. Based on your strength's section, I would recommend that both your speed and maneuverability ratings be "2".



Undin Jaii Kryze said:
Description: (Describing your submission's history is optional. Please provide a detailed account or link of each special feature that is listed in this submission. All miscellaneous descriptive elements go here, such as Cargo Capacity, Passengers, Consumables, Crew, etc.. There is no requirement for amount of words here so long as you meet the minimum requirements for your special features.)
Please give us a basic description of what this, especially the concept behind your design choices. Some of the wording here suggests that this a low-flying, atmospheric bomber. I would mention that in the description, if that is your intent.
 
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