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Approved Species Hangyo-Jin

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Hangyo-Jin
  • Designation: Sentient
  • Origins: Atrisia codex Atrisia wookiee
  • Average Lifespan: 80 Years
  • Estimated Population: Rare: Found within the Akagi clan on Atrisia in the city of Raijin.
  • Description: Largely Atrisian lookig, with smooth skin that is in colors of blue and greens varying in shades. The skin is covered in a sheen of moisture and almost mucus to prevent on land them from drying out or underwater becoming bloated. Slits under the ribs that function as gills with have suprabranchial organs over them and allow them to breathe air in and out of water. Their eyes have a membrane that slids over it in the water and allows them to see underwater, webbing between their fingers and a dorsal fin along their spine. Long flowing hair that generally goes to their ankles or waist. Two sets of teeth, a normal Atrisian/human looking set and in their gums a more jagged sharp set that can slid into place when aggravated and fighting.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: Type 1
  • Average Height of Adults: 2m
  • Average Length of Adults: 4m (with tail)
  • Skin color:
    • the color of the sea; The turquoise of Glee Anselm; the deeper medium blue of Scarik; a stormy greenish-blue like the ocean before a storm, sliding into a blue that was nearly black, where the water runs deep and thick
  • Hair color: Black and darker shades of red.
  • Distinctions: Compared to their ancient ancestors the melodies, they are able to shift albeit painfully between a more humanoid form and their aquatic form. Their features are distinctly more Atrisian in looks with small eyes usually in black and rarely green.
  • Races:
    Akagi Clan: Largely populated compared to ones in the wild. The children of marriages to strengthen the ties between the two peoples over the centuries and the children are regarded well within the clan.
    Wild: The few that went out into the wild rather then be kept and cared for didn't just die off though some encountered dangers in the strange new world. They went to places like the isle of Horai or other costal areas of the planet. Some having children with the Atrisians and intermingling over the centuries.
  • Force Sensitivity: Standard
Strengths:
  • Adapted: They are born rarely but the children of the melodies in the Akagi clan and its atrisian people. The children can breathe underwater but have a pair of lungs that allow them to survive out of the water. Their spine had a dorsal fin that can retract close to their body and webbing between their fingers.
  • Bone Density: Their bones are made to handle the prerssure along with their skin at the depths of the ocean. Even the smaller children usually outweigh some beings four times their size. Their skin is also thicker and small blades or slugs can be less effective but larger or more advanced weapons can still pierce them.
Weaknesses:
  • Shifting: Not exactly a comfortable process as their body both ways is altering itself and almost molting like a snake. Bleeding can happen and even slipping into unconsciousness. The pain has been known to make them slip into shock and forget things or whe in the water it can cause predators to come after them.
  • Instincts: Even within a peaceful clan there can be disagreements and not all like the hybrids. Usually they are tested and it is almost a subconscious instinct to fight when two are in an area outside of the main city.
CULTURE
  • Diet: Omnivore's in nature, they can eat just about anything. The major poisons to their body are major poisons to most humans but they also have dangers fro toxic and polluted waters. Their gills are large and can take in a lot causing seizures.
  • Communication: Spoken language (Atrisian, Basic, Melodese), body language, hisses and cries underwater
  • Technology level: Galactic Standard
  • Religion/Beliefs: Liaozhai Pantheon
  • General behavior:
  • With Outsiders: Reclusive and solitary, they are not the most social of the being on Atrisia and not everyone has made them feel welcomed over the centuries but their main city is also largely out of the way.
  • With Family: They are affectionate and love being around the clan. Exploring and aiding each other in the city and usually one will accompany submersibles down deeper to explore.
  • With Each other: They can be dangerous, the oceans are large so two of them meeting not just seeing each other is supposed to be rare. If they do usually they will fight for dominance and because it means someone is trying to take what food they had.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Relatively young at least on Atrisia, the group of Melodies that were rescues and relocated by the Akagi clan after the vongs main attack force came to Yavin 4 slowly over the centuries interbred and mixed with the clan. Some going off into the wild of the ocean and fidning their own home while others more or less joined the clan int their new underwater city. The handful of centuries that passed with them on Atrisia saw the intermingling of the Akag clan with the melodie colony and a rare chance of children was possible. In this case what children they had being able to live in the city. Not a long and glorious history but as the centuries went on they helped out the clan, explored the deeper oceans of Atrisia and in some cases traveled to the more remote locations. The different oceans, the underwater seas and caves that were known but rarely ever explored or seen. The occupation by the One sith saw most of their lives isolated as they retreated deeper into the ocean and away from danger. Like with the gulag plague and the netherworld which took parts of the population making their rarity among the clan and on the world something few outside saw... The Jishi era has seen the smallest restoration of them as efforts to clean the water, air and world have been underway.
 
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Junko Ike Junko Ike Hey hon! I love these mermaids you've made! There are just a few things I want to go over with you before I approve them

This link is broken, and leads to the old site.
The turquoise of the Mediterranean; the deeper medium blue of the Pacific
Please either change the references of the Mediterranean and the Pacific to Star Wars universe references, or remove them.
From Meredith Gentry series
Unfortunately this tells me nothing about their skin color, even looking a little bit into this series I found nothing referencing the skin color of mermaids. Please change this to a specific color or color combination instead of the vague reference you have now. Alternatively, you can remove this bullet point completely since the one above it does a good job of describing their skin color already.

Tag me once you finished making these changes! :)
 
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