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Approved Tech GS3 Rifle

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Intent: I want those who help in dominions/invasions to get some cool weapons.
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Drakos Systems
Model: GS3-Rifle
Affiliation: Closed Market.
Modularity: It can use a variety of rounds, per the standards of verpine shatter guns; grenade launcher can be swapped for something else.
Production: Minor
Material: Durasteel, Dallorian Alloy(to help the weapon doesn’t overheat easily)
Classification: Slugthrower/Sonic Rifle
Size: Rifle
Length: 80 cm
Weight: 3.0 kg
Ammunition Type: Slugs, and a variety of rounds(.50 caliber is what the weapon was designed to fire though)
Ammunition Capacity: 100 shots
Effective Range: 350m
Rate of Fire: Semi-Automatic; Two Round Burst.
Special Features: -Weapon can be fired silently
-Is extremely fast
-600 muzzle velocity
-Can be integrated with the HUD of armor
-Projectiles can be able to punch some of the strongest armor depending on the round; moreover, it requires a few rounds for it to be able to it to punch through heavy metals (depending on the metal of course)
-Variety of ways to combat opponents
-Dampeners and mitigation systems help with the recoil, and therefore the accuracy.
-Magnetic acceleration system helps make sure the round doesn’t overheat (?)
-Cooling system also makes the round not overheat

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As a galactic superpower, the One Sith must constantly develop the best weapons in order to help their soldiers on the battlefield, especially against force users. After some time desigining this weapon, the GS3 Rifle was created.

Following the features of its ancestor, the verpine shatter gun/rifle, magnetic accelerator coils have been added in order to generate the speed of the projectile, while maintaining the feature that he coils make the weapon not produce any sound while firing the projectile. While the projectile is being fired, it enters into a containment chamber (which compresses the sound), and creates a cloud around the projectile. The magnetic accelerator coils shape the cloud, however they downgrade the slug's muzzle velocity to that 1200m/s, but it is an impressive speed for the round nonetheless.

As expected, when it heats opponents, regardless of their weight or size, the slug will potentially punch through the opponent using its speed; moreoever, per the damage capabilities of sonic bolts, the sonic bolt will potentially disorienate you, and rupture your organs, and if you are wearing metal, it would compress the metal, reducing its resistance against various weapons.

Thansk to the incredible versatility of verpine shatter guns/rifle, the weapon can fire practically projectiles ranging from 10mm projectiles, to .50 caliber prjectiles, and and White Phosphorous rounds, etc)


Weaknesses:
-Range is significantly reduced
-Unlike other verpine shatter guns, there is a specific ammunition for this rifle, despite it being able to fire a variety of projectiles
-Despite the use of dampeners, and mitigation systems, the recoil is still somewhat powerful.

Strengths:
-It pucks a punch
-Extremely fast.
-Underbarrel grenade launcher fires a variety of grenades.

Affiliation changed to Open market from Closed Market
Manufacturer changed to Drakos Systems from One Sith
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
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ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
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Krayzen Dratos said:
Thansk to the incredible versatility of verpine shatter guns/rifle, the weapon can fire practically almost any projectile such as from 10MM slugs and 20MM slugs
how can this weapon fire both 10mm and 20mm rounds?
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
[member="Krayzen Dratos"]



Krayzen Dratos said:
Don't verpine shatter guns get to be able to fire a lot of rounds? I even went on to state it is a direct descendant of the verpine shatter gun.
Wiki - "Custom versions of the weapon also had the ability to fire nearly any kind of small (less than an inch in diameter) projectile, due to a very expensive feature: multicaliber magazine and bore."



Krayzen Dratos said:
Ammunition Type: Slugs, and a variety of rounds(.50 caliber is what the weapon was designed to fire though)


Krayzen Dratos said:
Modularity: It can use a variety of rounds, per the standards of verpine shatter guns; grenade launcher can be swapped for something else.
Verpine shatter guns could fire a variety of projectiles but they were small and the gun needed different magazines for these various types of projectiles. And most importantly all the projectiles were about the same size. You state the weapon fires a 50 cal shell. Then you claim it can fire a 10mm and a 20mm shell. These are all very different sized projectiles. Settle on one size projectile and it can fire various projectiles of that size.
 
[member="Reshmar"]

Per Wookipidea, the verpine shatter gun could also be a lot of things, including the verpine sniper rifle.


The Verpine sniper rifle was an expensive, top-of-the-line sniper rifle based on the Verpine shatter gun design

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Verpine_shatter_gun


This evidently shows that the verpine shatter gun had other variants, and not simply, a handheld weapon.


http://starwarsrp.net/topic/53912-verpine-shatter-rifle-jaing-variant/?hl=%2Bverpine+%2Bshatter
The Verpine Sniper Weapon System was arguably one of the most versatile and deadly weapons in the galaxy. The long-range weapon's special feature was its ability to utilize multiple types of ammunition and also multiple calibers. The Verpines created this in order to sustain the sniper's save position and prevent it from being compromised by obvious and easily noticeable traces of glowing blaster bolts. You could choose any kind of ammunition - including armor piercing ammunition, explosive ammunition, 2 stage explosive ammunition, smart grenades, smoke grenades, laser dissipating aerosol canisters, EM dust tags, tracking devises, EMP grenades, acid rounds, poison rounds, frangible ammunition, and even rocks, nuts or bolts, and rivets could be used if nothing else was at hand -, as long as it could fit into the electro-magnetic (EM) chamber. The weapon system allowed nearly unlimited combat usage, with super accelerated particles at a speed of 3000 feet per second, making even a handful of dust, ice or even water considerably lethal ammunition at close range.

This is a weapon that doesn't even the size of the ammunition, and it was still approved. All of this are different sized projectiles. The weapon that I linked doesn't even have an underbarrel grenade launcher, and it can still be able to fire a variety of different sized projectiles. I did not even see anything about a multicaliber magazine.
 
Krayzen Dratos said:
[member="Reshmar"]

Per Wookipidea, the verpine shatter gun could also be a lot of things, including the verpine sniper rifle.



This evidently shows that the verpine shatter gun had other variants, and not simply, a handheld weapon.



This is a weapon that doesn't even the size of the ammunition, and it was still approved. All of this are different sized projectiles. The weapon that I linked doesn't even have an underbarrel grenade launcher, and it can still be able to fire a variety of different sized projectiles. I did not even see anything about a multicaliber magazine.
Do not argue with your judge. If you believe there is an issue you can politely ask if something is acceptable/correct, or you can request a second chance. The submission you are quoting does not state sizes at all, which does not at all imply it fires incredibly different sized projectiles. Please tag your judge when you have made the appropriate edits, or you may request a second chance.

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ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
[member="Krayzen Dratos"] the acceleration system for a 20mm projectile would not work for a 10mm or 50 cal projectile. It would have too big of a bore. if you want ti to fire 20mm projectiles that is fine but shoving a 50 cal shell in it would be less than useless. the magnetics would push it sure but not with any velocity or usable trajectory. it would be impossible to hit anything you aim at.



Krayzen Dratos said:
This evidently shows that the verpine shatter gun had other variants, and not simply, a handheld weapon.
thats fine but like the pistol they fires small high velocity rounds. accelerating a 20mm round is ok so would be a 50 cal or a 10mm round but a magnetic bore that fires them all would not work.



Krayzen Dratos said:
This is a weapon that doesn't even the size of the ammunition, and it was still approved. All of this are different sized projectiles. The weapon that I linked doesn't even have an underbarrel grenade launcher, and it can still be able to fire a variety of different sized projectiles. I did not even see anything about a multicaliber magazine.


This is a different submission and doesn't have anything to do with this submission. Basically you can accelerate anything you fit in a 20mm bore but throwing a 50 cal shell in it would make the shell have a very unstable trajectory and be basically uncontrollable and unable to be targeted.
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
[member="Krayzen Dratos"] So I have been tossing around some ideas on how to make this work. You would need far too much power to accelerate a 20mm projectile. Its an anti Aircraft cannon basically. the 50 cal and 10mm would work fine as there is not alot of difference in the size. But once you throw in a 20mm bore it is just too big.

Just remove the part about the 20mm and it is fine. I would up the muzzle velocity since this is a mag rail fired weapon. something like 1,200m/s would be best. and make the range a bit more. 95 meters in insanely short range for a mag rail.. 350 meters would be a better range for an assault weapon.
 
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Krayzen Dratos said:
the slug will punch through the opponent using its speed; moreoever, per the damage capabilities of sonic bolts, the sonic bolt will disorienate you, and rupture your organs, and if you are wearing metal, it would compress the metal, reducing its resistance against various weapons.
This needs to be changed to the "potential" damage of the weapon. You cannot decide what a writer perceives as the damage their character sustains. This is considered hit calling and thus against the rules. Please edit accordingly to suggest the potential power of the weapon.

This edit must be done, if not the item will be denied. [member="Krayzen Dratos"]
 
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