Approved Ranged Weapon GC - 125 "Mayhem"

[Ladybug]

SPECIAL FEATURES

• Mounted Flashlight
• Laser Sight (optional)
• Hair Trigger

STRENGTHS

• Firing Squad: Being the weapon is automatic , it has a very concentrated rate of fire, allowing for the firing of consistent slugs at targets.
• Ammo Lover: Each clip can hold a high count of slugs, which works in conjuncture with being a automatic weapon.

WEAKNESSES

• Recoiled: The slugthrower has a nasty recoil, forcing the wielder to hold the weapon tight.
• Damage Controlled: The weapon's damage output is low, however, it makes up for it in its rate of fire.

DESCRIPTION

The "Mayhem" is an automatic slugthrower, capable of rifling off slugs in rapid pace. Originally created as a secondary weapon for battlefield units, it quickly became a favorite to military ranked officers and junior officers, as well as high profile security companies and by misfortune, lesser desirable characters.

It comes with three special features, though one of the features is optional. The first of these features is the mounted flashlight. It can be used, for obvious reasons, to illuminate dark areas. The second feature is the laser sight, which is optional; meaning the attachment can be equipped or removed based on the individual's preference. Also, the attachment is easily equipped or removed. The laser sight adds a more precise accuracy to the weapon. And lastly, the hair trigger. This mechanism adds to the slugthrowers rate of fire.

It's two main strengths are the ammo count and it's rate of fire. The slugthrower has a high ammo count, allowing for the weapon to fire off more rounds before it needs to be reloaded. The other strength, rate of fire, grants the weapon to rifle off more slugs in a alarming rate; essentially adopting the concept of "more is better".

It's two glaring weaknesses are the weapons recoil and damage output. The recoil on the weapon is so high, that is takes strong, sturdy hands (and arms) to keep the weapon from sporadically spraying slugs. The damage output, the other weakness, is low. What it lacks in damage, it is made up in its ability to disperse slugs fast and in high numbers; essentially overpowering targets (and protective measures) with consistent projectiles.

 

[Rara Gowisi]

Ladybug

I'll be honest, I understand the want for minimalism in strengths and weaknesses, but I as a judge cannot understand what this does, then other people won't.

Reading the description, I can kinda get what the gist is, but it shouldn't be expected to read that to understand it.

I'll ask you to expand on your strengths and weaknesses for the sake of clarity.

 

[Ladybug]

Rara Gowisi

Done.

 

[Rara Gowisi]

Ladybug Apologies, you seem to have misunderstood my request.

I'm asking you to reorganize this sub so that your explanations are within the strengths and weaknesses section, rather than in your description. Folks tend to skim subs when looking at them, and it's a lot easier to simply look at a sub's strengths and weaknesses, and understand the sub so you can write with it.

 

[Ladybug]

, Rara Gowisi

Done

 

[Rara Gowisi]

Ladybug Appreciated, thank you for your cooperation.

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