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Formitron

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To expand the star wars universe, to create interesting races and cultures.​
Canon: N/A​
Links: N/A....Yet​
GENERAL INFORMATION

Planet Name: Formitron​
Demonym: Formitronian​
Region: unknown Regions​
System Name: Formitronian System​
System Features:​
Formitron orbits alone around a red sun, with two silver moons orbiting around it.​
Location:​
Bogo Rai planet hex​
Major Imports:​
As of now nothing...​
Major Exports:​
Also nothing...​
Unexploited Resources:​
GEOGRAPHIC INFORMATION

Gravity: Twice Standard​
Climate: Chilly.​
Primary Terrain: Synthetic...Metal​
Atmosphere: Type IV​
LOCATION INFORMATION

Capital City:
Axium
Planetary Features:
Formitron used to be an endless city but an endless civil war has left many ruins.​
There are Jagged fissures and gorges, some reaching the core.​
Major Locations:​
The Fortress of the Illitronions…​
Located on the outskirts of the capital amidst the ruins of war the Fortress is created out of the debris of battle {Created is the correct term because they move it wherever it is necessary} to look upon it is to see broken buildings seamlessly merged with the remains of fallen soldiers a gruesome sight indeed.​
The Stronghold of the Solitronians…​
Located within the capital building the Stronghold is constantly built and rebuilt further out into the city​
claiming streets in the name of protection...nobody minds because nobody lives there anymore.​
To look upon it is to see complete restorations of old structures with additions of fortifications and turrets.​
Structures here are bound only to the builders imagination​
fantastical structures can be seen beside shacks the one thing that is consistent about said structures​
is there material metal.​
The Core​
The very center of the planet and also it's Force Nexus​
Access is open but traditionally limited to creation ceremonies and formal events.​
Force Nexus:
Intent:​
To create the source of life on the planet​

Nexus Name:​
The Core​
Nexus Alignment:​
Neutral​
Size:​
Large​
Strength:​
Strong​
Accessibility:​
Any Formitronian can visit it but as it is worshipped they only come on formal/special occasions.​
Effects:​
Life​
It brings life to the metal on the planet...and during the ceremony of creation where the Formitrons forge this metal into a form brings consciousness.​
POPULATION

Native Species:​
Formitrons, A species made of force imbued Durasteel/other material.​
Immigrated Species:​
None...{unless someone can point out something that only needs to eat metal to survive}​
Population:​
Moderate​
Demographics:​
Entirely Formitronian...​
Primary Languages:​
Formitronian,​
Culture:​
Daily life:
Daily life is a constant struggle, the war is beginning to siphon more and more resources...Formitronians do not require sustenance, but there bodies do wear down over time so parts must be replaced from time to time, which is becoming more difficult because of the war.​
Society
In general they are tinkerers and inventors but there similarities end there...​
Illitronians are disgusted by organic life,​
Solitronians see them as equals,​
Illitronians make a hobby of integrating weapons of war into there system.​
Solitronians do so only under extreme circumstances.​
Arts
They are incredible craftsmen however we see differences again between the two sides,​
Illitronians have made the construction of weapons an art.​
Solitronians find small intricate clock work like designs stunning and beautiful and can craft them with exquisite detail.​
Sports
Formitronians are created as adults so children's games are not a part of society, however they do have a game that is similar to basketball,​
Religion
They do not have a religion per se. the core is recognized as the source of life so they treat it with the respect it is due... most of them.​
GOVERNMENT & ECONOMY

Government
The Illitronians are under a dictatorship​
The Solitronians are under a military dictatorship...albeit a very nice one.​
Affiliation:
The Solitronian Protectorate​
The Illitronian Regime​
Wealth:
Low, Why? War...just centuries of war, that will definitely ruin an economy.​
Stability:
Low, constant skirmishes and explosions engulf the planet​
Freedom & Oppression:
In general people are not free, on either side some are not free by choice, others are not free because they are forced to be.​
MILITARY & TECHNOLOGY

Military:
On Formatron an area is either fortified or in ruins.​
Most Formatronians are skilled in combat​
and those that aren't specialize in something that helps the war effort.​
Technology:
Formitron is a planet inhabited by a robotic species while this in itself makes them advanced.​
their knowledge of creating anything is based in the peculiar nature of the planet itself​
and is not much use in the rest of the galaxy.​
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Beginnings
There was a time when the solar system had many planets
but one day through a cataclysmic battle they were all wiped out
the people, the planets, everything.
the cries of the innocent fell upon the ears of the Celestials
who were moved by this cry but they also saw this as an opportunity.
The Celestials gathered the remnants of life that was in the system and brought it together to form one entity,
what is now called the core.
The Celestials played with reality and went on their way to whatever tickled their fancy never to be seen again.

Creation

The core, driven by some unknown purpose drew up the remaining debris around itself forming the planet called Formitron.
Over time it formed living beings made of metal imbued with the force these beings were known as the Founders,

the Founders helped forge more precise beings who would be the true inhabitants of Formitron,
after the Founders had completed their mission they sat in their great hall and went into a deep slumber where they remain to this day.

Founding

The newly formed residents of Formitron marveled at their surroundings learning how to form the world to their wishes merely by touching it {as both they and the planet are imbued with the force they and the planet are connected} creating new beings and creatures at first and eventually entire cities.

There was peace, but good things never last... there were those who would use their power for destruction and so they did...
war was inevitable and those who stood in the way ended up as collateral damage.

The War has lasted a over a thousand years how much longer will it last.

Perhaps by gathering the remnants of all remaining life the celestials did not question the incredible hatred imbued in some of that life...
Or maybe this is what they intended. Who can say?

{So it is perfectly clear the Celestials came they messed with stuff and then they left and are never coming back}
 
Hey, so here are some thoughts on this submission



Thalliesin Bard said:
Gravity: Twice Standard

This would crush the Formitronians with the height and weight you gave them, they would not be able to stand. I recommend sticking with Standard or slightly lower than standard gravity. This is just a suggestion though so don't feel like you have to change it.



Thalliesin Bard said:
Links: N/A....Yet
Don't need the yet, either you have links or not. Just need to keep it simple, if there is anything you want to add at a later time, make a submission modification submission, here.

The whole nexus needs to be redone with much more detail. As with the species sub that I am judging, I can give you some links to some approve planets with nexus so you have an idea what you need to do in order to have a nexus on the planet.



Thalliesin Bard said:
...{unless someone can point out something that only needs to eat metal to survive}
Don't need the brackets again, none is just fine.

Be careful with the Celestials, I know that you said they weren't returning but their tech is also banned so make sure that there is no chance of that being there either.

This sub is fairly vague on a lot of areas, and needs more detail about the world and how the people live within it. I also need you to make changes to remove the things that are too similar to the Transformers franchise again. If you need ideas on how a planet sub should look for details and such, look into the approved planets as there are some great subs and give a read of the nexus ones as well
 
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Hey what's the status on this? If you want to move it to pre-Codex to make the adjustments and such, let me know.
 
[member="Thalliesin Bard"]

As per the Pre-Codex rules, linked here, a submission only remains in the Pre-Codex for about month. This submission has been present for a little longer than that.

Please let Codex Staff know if you intend to complete this submission when you have a moment. Otherwise, if we don't hear anything, we will archive the submission for inactivity. You can always reach out to Codex Staff to have it placed back in Pre-Codex when you're ready/have time.
 
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