Approved Starship Fleet Tec Droid Starfighter

[Herr Vanderhing]

Fleet Tec Droid Starfighter

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Affiliation: Open market
Manufacturer: Fleet Tec Ship Manufacturing:http://starwarsrp.net/topic/95602-fleet-tec/?hl=%2Bherr+%2Bvanderhing
Model: Fleet Tec Droid Starfighter
Modularity: no
Production: mass produced
Material: Non-magnetic alclad alloy
Classification: Droid Starfighter
Length: 4 meters
Height: 2 meters
Width: 2 meters

Armament:
-Blaster Cannon (2)
-Energy Torpedo Launchers (2)
Rating: 5
Links: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Blaster_cannon/Legends, http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Energy_torpedo
Defenses:
-Deflector shield
-High Maneuverability
Rating: 6
Links: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Deflector_shield

Squadron Count: 12 Fighters

Special Features:
-Auto Enhancement
-Droid Brain
-KV457-C Thruster Component
Links: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/KV457-C_thruster_component, http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Auto_enhancement, http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Droid_Brain
Maneuverability Rating: 2
Speed Rating: 2
Hyperdrive Class: None

Strengths:
-being a droid gives it unquestionable loyalty
-very fast
-high maneuverability
Weaknesses:
-being a droid makes it not as good in dog fights

Description: The Fleet Tec Droid Starfighter was built to be main air and assists interceptors in dogfights. It has little to no cargo capacity. It's only crew is a droid brain and it's consumables include energy torpedo launchers and a droid defense barrier.
Development Thread: if necessary
Intent: profit
Who Can Use This: N/A
Primary Source: N/A

 

[Gir Quee]

RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review
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Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review
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WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review
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SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Gir Quee]

Defenses: -Blaster cannon (2) -Droid Defense Barrier

This appears to be missing a defense rating. I would also remove the mention of blaster cannons from the defenses, if they are the same weapons listed under the armament.

Maneuverability Rating: 4 Speed Rating: 3

-very fast -high maneuverability

The maneuverability and speed ratings on this are roughly equivalent to a classic fighter-bomber like the X-wing. While they're not bad ratings per se, I would not consider this to be exceptionally fast or maneuverable. Given your current armament ratings, I would recommend bumping both speed and maneuverability up to "2".

 

[Herr Vanderhing]

Fixed

 

[Gir Quee]

Defenses: -Blaster cannon (2)

Please remove the blaster cannons from the defense listing.

 

[Herr Vanderhing]

Ok I fixed it

 

[Gir Quee]

Model: Variable Geometry Self-Propelled Battle droid

Again, I'd probably change this to something like "Fleet Tec Droid Starfighter", or something else that isn't already used as a canon starship class.

-Droid Defense Barrier

Is there a particular reason for using the droid defense barrier over standard shielding technology (Deflector shields, ray shields,etc)? I'm a bit hesitant on this simply because it seems kind of vague on what it can do on wookieepedia.

Links: http://starwars.wiki...uster_component

These link(s) seem broken.

 

[Ellie Mors]

[member="Herr Vanderhing"]
What is the status of this submission?

 

[Herr Vanderhing]

Fixed

 

[Gir Quee]

Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Varanin"]

 

[Ellie Mors]

Approved.