First Order Anti-Forcer Armor Set

[Ricochet]

Anti-Forcer Corps Armor FO-XFU1 Set​

Standard Stormtrooper​

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Lieutenant/Captain's Armor​

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Spoiler

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Art Credit: SW Trooper Toy and Photoshop Edits by [member="Jay Scott Clark"]​

Intent: To create an Anti-Force User specific Stormtrooper Armour set for the First Order Military's Anti-Force User Corps
Development Thread: If Necessary
Manufacturer: The First Order, [member="Belis Ren"] providing Phrik Raw Materials from First Order Scouting Operations
Model: FO-XFU1 Stormtrooper Armour
Affiliation: The First Order
Modularity: Several ‘Specialist’ Modes exist, details later in submission.
Production: MINOR (First Order PCs and NPCs only)
Material: Plastoid, Duraplast, Phrik (Shield, Electrostaff)
Phrik (limited to shield production)
Classification: Multi-purpose
Weight: The armour has been specially designed to be light weight and flexible while still maintaining a high level of durability and protection. Each suit weighs around 7-9kg.
Quality: 6

Special Features:

Anti-Force User Gear:
First Order Electrostaff (Standard Canon Electrostaff with First Order aesthetics)
Anti-Lightsaber Phrik Shield

Armour Componants:

Compression Body Glove
Energy Dispersing Surface
Manual Environmental Regulation
Reinforced Duraplast Forearm Segments
Environmental Seal Functionality
IFF circuitry for Indenification
Security Resonator
Genetic Coding Activation
Magnetic Weapon Holsters
Magnetic Contact Gloves

Helmet Componants:

Multi-Frequency Target and Acquisition System (HUD, Friend/Foe Designation)
Self-preserving Oxygen Filters and Reserve Tank (2 hours)
Automatic Polarising and Anti-Flash Blinding Lenses.
Holographic Vision Processors. (Thermal/Nightvision/Ultraviolet/Infrared)
Encrypter Internal Comlink with Three-Phase Sonic Filter
Vocoder for audio output.
Audio and Video Recorders
Cooling and Atmospheric Temperature Control System

Utility Components:

Utility Belt equipped with:
High Tension Wire
Grappling Hooks
Spare Power Packs
Ion Flares
Energy Rations
Encrypted Anti-Jamming C1 Military Comm Link
Water Packs
Medpacs
Coded Thermal Detonator


Description:

After various combative encounters with Galactic Alliance and then recently after the Lothal campaign against Jedi Order Force Users, the First Order Military specialists began to formulate the creation of a unit specially trained and armed to combat what they categorized as Forcers.

From this sprang the XFU1 Project - the creation of an Anti-Forcer Corps Armor Set for the Anti-Forcer Corps to established once the armor set went into full production. The armor set possesses a base FO-01 Stormtrooper with additions of a specially contracted Phrik Shields and Electrostaff. Along with this the XFU01 comes with magnetic contact gloves which magnetically attach to the staff and shield so that Force Push and Force Telekentic powers have a lesser effect in removing an Anti-Forcer Stormtrooper's weapons.

Dev Thread: If Need Be
Who Can Use This: First Order Anti-Forcer Corps/Unique Units
Primary Source: Base of Armor Set is based off of Approved FO-01 Armor Set submitted to Tech Forums by Aram Kalast

 

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RESEARCH REVIEW

Star Wars Canon:
Pending initial review

Starwars Chaos:
Pending initial review

WITHOUT DEV THREADS
Pending initial review

WITH DEV THREADS
Pending Initial review

SUGGESTIONS
Pending Inital review

 

[Netherworld]

[member="Ricochet"]

Alright, this is all fine and dandy, but I have a couple of questions/issues.

1. This sub is pretty much a direct copy-paste of the FO-01, grammar mistakes and all, apart from the description itself. I know you quote it as the primary source, but at least copy-paste the approved version if you do that.
   
2. I don't actually know why you're subbing the whole armor again. With the exception of the electrostaff (which is canon), the only "new" additions are the shield and the gloves.
   In light of this, my recommendation would be to submit the shield only and drop the whole armor sub surrounding it, because at the moment, all I get about the new thing (i.e. the shield) is that it comes with the armor. Given that the armor information is already there (in the FO-01) sub, this should be about the shield, not the armor.

Therefore, I strongly suggest you revamp this sub to be about the shield, and give me actual specifications for it instead of sneaking it by with a 90% copy paste.

 

[Ricochet]

[member="Netherworld"]
Aaaaaaaah ok ok. See I wasn't sure which route to take on this one. Ok. I'll do your suggestion, thanks for pointers!~

 

[Netherworld]

[member="Ricochet"]

Np. Tag me when you've made the appropriate edits.

 

[Netherworld]

[member="Ricochet"]

What's the status of this submission?

 

[Netherworld]

<p>Moved to Archives - PM [member="Spencer Jacobs"] for removal / if denied for Second Chance please post and tag Spencer Jacobs for review.<br />
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Thank you!</p>