Final Fury Support-Frigate

[Darren Onyx]

Image Credit: http://i145.photobucket.com/albums/r238/Chrpica/DevastatorAssaultFrigate.jpg
Intent: To give Onyx his own personal mobile command post. Also serves as a temporary command for the NSE (New Sith Empire) faction.
Development Thread: TBA (After consulting with a RPJ, I will post the Dev Thread link here)
Manufacturer: Kuaty Drive Yards
Model: Hutt-Assault Frigate
Affiliation: NSE, Darth Onyx
Modularity: Yes; armaments can be substituted for stealth and non-combat technologies.
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel, Turadium, Quadranium, Glasteel
Description: The Hutt-Interceptor class type is a fast ship with multiple capabilities. Onyx decided to use it as his command station for the time being due to its speed and many armaments as well as non-combat effectiveness. Onyx also, upon founding the NSE, realized that they needed a main command station until a planet was secured, and decided to constructed and use his personal ship as that command station. The ship is the average size for a frigate, however it is mainly used for more mobile command and non-combat procedures instead of combat. The vessel has two small labs for researching anything that it runs into. The ultimate power the ship brings is it's sub-light speed, which is slightly faster then most other frigates.

Classification: Frigate
Role: Mobile Command Station, Support-Frigate
Height: 33 meters
Width: 88 meters
Length: 100 meters
Power Core Generator/Reactor: Standard Fuel Cells
Hyperdrive Rating: 1.5
Minimum Crew: 6
Optimal Crew: 12
Armaments:

• 4 precision laser cannons
• Missiles

Hangar:

• None

Non-Combative Attachments:

• Holo-communicator- A meeting room with a holo-communicator that can contact up to three individuals at once.
• Sensors Relay- A relay on the bottom belly of the ship that can allow for communication disruption.

Passenger Capacity: 25
Cargo Capacity: 907.1847 Kg
Consumables: Two Months
Sublight Speed and Maneuverability: 3

 

[Ayden Cater]

@[member="Darth Onyx"]

There are a number of issues that you will need to address before this has a chance of being approved.

• First and foremost; you did not get the owner of KDY's approval for this ship. If you're going to use a company with an owner, you need to get their permission. If you wanna use KDY, you need to get Lady Silencia's approval.
• Second, and almost as bad; this is -not- an interceptor. Interceptors are 7 - 10 meters long. This thing is ten times that.
• Interceptors aren't capable of functioning as multi-crew command ships. They're literally designed to seat one, or two people. It's a space fighter jet.
• The description is not sufficient as it currently stands. You're going to have to put a bit more into it, detailing more about the ship and its capabilities.
  

 

[Darren Onyx]

EDITED:

I rewrote everything that needed to be rewritten and added to the description. If you want me to add more though, currently, I cannot due to my computer not wanting to respond properly. Though I will add it as soon as I can.

Also, I sent Lady Silencia a message and will get back to you on that.

@[member="Ayden Cater"]

 

[Ayden Cater]

@[member="Darth Onyx"]

I suggest you fully read the guide to familiarize yourself with terminology and allotments

 

[Darren Onyx]

I did. Sorry... I'm new to this, since I never actually did this on the board ever.

@[member="Ayden Cater"]

 

[Darren Onyx]

Permission denied. I'll just scrap this project. Thanks for at least trying to help.

@[member="Ayden Cater"]