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[Nyx]

Alright, so I plan on doing a fairly long dev thread (30 or so posts), set in the Old Republic era.
I would like people to read what I have so far, and tell me what's wrong with the writing; too long, too short, not detailed, etc.
I need this to be the best work I've done so far, so don't hold back.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/59056-old-blood/

 

[Via Dolorosa]

[member="Zoya"]

Question: Are you planning to tie this into the current Sites Era? If you are unaware, this site is set 844 ABY.

 

[Nyx]

I am, yes; it's for a subspecies to my current one, and the biggest conflict in their history was this era.
[member="Ciara Jevnaker"]

 

[Via Dolorosa]

Ok...then I say it looks good so far. Good luck with your dev thread....they can be so tedious at times.

 

[Unravel]

I may be new on here but I have rped at other places and this looks rockin. When we would do Dev threads we use to have to have them loong so this looks great in length and description.