Sabosen'tir'inrokini
I read back through older things that I've written and... I've been disappointed that it seems my skills as a writer have regressed of late. My characterization isn't as precise. My scenery isn't as vivid. My plots are plodding or premature.
So, I'm curious to hear opinions from the people with whom I have written with of late or any that have stumbled across one of my threads. Is there an area you would like to see me improve? Is there something lacking that you feel I should acquire? If so, what and how?
I'm using Sentiri as a basis as she has been my only truly active character recently.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
So, I'm curious to hear opinions from the people with whom I have written with of late or any that have stumbled across one of my threads. Is there an area you would like to see me improve? Is there something lacking that you feel I should acquire? If so, what and how?
I'm using Sentiri as a basis as she has been my only truly active character recently.
Any feedback is greatly appreciated.
