Feedback on Darth Abyss ... Again

[Darth Abyss]

Okay I know I am now asking this pretty frequently, but Abyss is rather rapidly evolving in the last few days/weeks, hitting master, making great plans, doing many threads etc. And I really want to know how people perceive all that. Seeing flaws and potential for improvement is often a lot easier from a outside perspective in my opinion, so give me all the love, hate, apathy or dank memes you have, both for Abyss as a character and for me as a writer. I want to know what you think about the things I am doing with him, his progress etc, and also if my spelling in grammar has become bearable or if have to go back to school lol.

Thanks in advance.

 

[Teynara Jeralyr]

but Abyss is rather rapidly evolving in the last few days/weeks

That sums it up nicely.

 

[Hailyn]

[member="Darth Abyss"]
Your character has developed significantly since I first saw him. Keep doing what you've been doing, you're doing well.