I have helped you out a few times, watched as you played, and wondered where you plan on going with the character. While I feel you have done ok this far, I feel that your character has something that need to be tweaked. First of all, he is just a bit over powered. A bit. Mainly using the Force without essence of draining himself.
Though this has become a namesake for the sites newcomers.
But if you use Force Lightning, or any other high caliber attack, which I am not saying to avoid, I recommend that you show the weakening afterward. Our characters are like batteries with a certain level of ability. Show this! Beside making your character more relatable, it also shows that your growing as a writer as well that provides a good degree of intrigue to the story!
Imagine your character is in battle, starts losing because he is getting tired, but the numbers of the enemy never cease! Your character now can prove that they are devastatingly useful by overcoming their fatigue to be quite the warrior!
My other comment is your grammar/punctuation/length of posts. Though your pretty good with grammar, it could use a little more effort. Alongside this is potential run on sentences, or those without enough commas and the like. As well, for example our thread in the works, whenever I make a huge post attempting to go in depth about the details, I come back to a single paragraph.
Though this isn't a real issue, it is for some people. They post these intricate ones to provide a good story, to feel in the end that it is one sided.
All in all I give your character a B+. Pretty interesting and one I don't mind reading. Just need some work as a writer, and as a character.
Also don't take a B as bad, I give my own characters C's. Lol