George O Rourke
Master Under the Sea
Hey just wondering if anyone could give me any feedback on my bio. Haven't really done anything like this before so anything at all is welcome.
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Roxy Lalonde
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Y'know I really like it, all with the family and stuff. :3 Not sure what other people's opinion on it would be, but that's a heck lot better than the nothing I have for mine. Family! Drama! Jedi sense!
Y'know I really like it, all with the family and stuff. :3 Not sure what other people's opinion on it would be, but that's a heck lot better than the nothing I have for mine. Family! Drama! Jedi sense!
George O Rourke
Master Under the Sea
[member="Roxy Lalonde"]
Thanks I think its a good story, just think it could read better.
Thanks I think its a good story, just think it could read better.
Roxy Lalonde
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I'd most honestly put it in Microsoft Word or something of the sort and play around with it for a while. :3 Best of luck friendo.
I'd most honestly put it in Microsoft Word or something of the sort and play around with it for a while. :3 Best of luck friendo.
George O Rourke
Master Under the Sea
[member="Roxy Lalonde"]
Thanks for that, I'll try that later on. Cheers
Thanks for that, I'll try that later on. Cheers
Roxy Lalonde
Oh Roxy-Senpai Oh
[member="George O Rourke"]
Cheers cheers! Best of luck!
If you ever want some closer tips just pop me a friendo request and a PM.
Cheers cheers! Best of luck!
If you ever want some closer tips just pop me a friendo request and a PM.
George O Rourke
Master Under the Sea
[member="Roxy Lalonde"]
Thanks will do.
Thanks will do.