Feedback for Sanya

[Sanya Val Lerium]

So as it is my 19th today I'm looking for feedback on this char and my writing abilities

Where can I improve?

What do you like about her?

And your overall opinion? (Don't hold back I need honesty)

Also for you FJ's out there where can I improve on my subs? (Wouldn't be fair to leave you out the loop)

Also for the fun of it place in your favorite GIF.

 

[Darth Veles]

Your writing's not bad, just a grammar mistake here and there. That's not much of a problem, we all make those.

The character itself is one of the better Jedi on this site from what I have seen. She's a fairly good Jedi and a solid character, one that does not have constant anger issues and problems with self-control like so many others. You keep her pretty consistent as well and I haven't noticed any personality flips, so good job on that.

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