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Alright, I guess it's that time again. If someone, or maybe multiple someones, would like to take the time to read and give me some feedback on how I am doing and what I can do better, that would be amazing. After all, I'm always looking for that next thing to make me into a better writer and help to make it so all my posts are enjoyable. Long story short, please give me some constructive feedback on what I can do to improve in my writing.
Sample 1 - Alden Akaran
Sample 2 - Tireya Syvare
And please don't be tentative to be honest in your feedback. If it's awful, tell me so, but please offer me a suggestion or two as to what I can do to improve so it's no longer terrible.
Sample 1 - Alden Akaran
Sample 2 - Tireya Syvare
And please don't be tentative to be honest in your feedback. If it's awful, tell me so, but please offer me a suggestion or two as to what I can do to improve so it's no longer terrible.