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Tech Review Energite Kyber Crystal

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Energite Crystal

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Nature
  • Affiliation: Braze Braze Character Bio
  • Market Status: (Closed-Market (Any character can use this if they have explicit permission through, for example, a marketplace purchase),
  • Model: N/A
  • Modularity: N/A
  • Production: The scale is Unique (Can be used in Unique Production Submissions only),
  • Material: Kyber Crystal,
PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Kyber Crystal,
  • Weight:Very Heavy,
  • Color: Blue / Balack / White
  • Resistances:
    • Energy (And other Blaster type weapons) Extreme
    • Kinetic: Average,
    • Lightsabers: Average,
    • Other: Can not be corrupted.
SPECIAL FEATURES
  1. Energy Absorption and Durability:
    • Can absorb high amounts of energy from fire and electricity ect
    • Has a similar effect to the Solari Crystal - (Uncorruptible)

STRENGTHS
  • Energy Absorption: Can absorb high energy from fire and electricity, boosting wielder's resilience.
  • Uncorruptible: Resistant to dark side influence, ensuring purity.
  • Durability: Exceptionally tough, withstands damage and pressure.
WEAKNESSES
  • Vulnerability to Overloading: The crystal may become unstable if exposed to excessive energy influxes, leading to temporary erratic behavior until the excess energy is fully dissipated or absorbed, creating an unstable lightsaber beam.
  • Rare and Difficult to Obtain: Due to its unique properties and rarity, acquiring or replacing the crystal may be challenging and require significant effort or resources.
  • Force Nullification Vulnerability: The crystal's connection to the Force makes it susceptible to disruption by Force-nullifying phenomena, such as Force voids, void stones, and ysalamari. When exposed to such environments or creatures, its abilities may be severely diminished or nullified altogether. Additionally, its unique energy signature may attract unwanted attention from Force-sensitive individuals seeking to exploit its weaknesses, posing a constant threat to the wielder's safety and security.
  • Interference with Technology: The crystal's energy signature may interfere with nearby electronic devices or technology, causing malfunctions or disruptions in communication systems or machinery.
  • Hot/Shocking Nature: The crystal's hot/shocking nature presents a danger to handle, potentially causing harm to the wielder or nearby individuals.
  • Should a user of this crystal ever fall to the darkside, the weapon this crystal is within becomes unusable to the user.
DESCRIPTION

Its appearance is striking, with a jet-black surface adorned with intricate icy blue electrical-like crackling patterns that seem to dance and flicker with an ethereal glow. A subtle hum emanates from within, hinting at the raw energy contained within its crystalline form.

The Energite Crystal possesses a unique ability to absorb ambient energy from its surroundings, channeling it into a formidable force that enhances the abilities of its wielder. When used in lightsaber construction, it imbues the blade with a unique flexible quality of a thin strong and brilliant blade, capable of cutting through even the most formidable of obstacles with ease.

It can create a very bright blade.
 
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Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
Moderator
Braze Braze

Hi there, I will be taking this submission up today.

So going through some things

1 - How come these crystals can't be corrupted, you simply say they can't but never give any reasoning beyond basically because it is.

2 - Way too many strong abilities. There are some many abilities on this crystal, It can absorb heat and lightning, It enhances all of your combat skills, It enhances your force power, It gives you just invisibility. You need to lose some of these abilities.

3 - Visual Effects - these crystals also just blind people whenever you want with no down side. Please create some sort of downside to it or do something else.
 
Braze Braze

Hi there, I will be taking this submission up today.

So going through some things

1 - How come these crystals can't be corrupted, you simply say they can't but never give any reasoning beyond basically because it is.

2 - Way too many strong abilities. There are some many abilities on this crystal, It can absorb heat and lightning, It enhances all of your combat skills, It enhances your force power, It gives you just invisibility. You need to lose some of these abilities.

3 - Visual Effects - these crystals also just blind people whenever you want with no down side. Please create some sort of downside to it or do something else.
1- it's just similar effect to this- Solari
2- this should be fixed
3- You mis-understand this section. Granted I posted this with out reviewing it so it got mixed in by mistake with other ideas when I was work shopping this. This applies to how it works in a specific weapon and it's not for 'when ever you want' and it can blind the wielder too. It's been removed from here regardless.
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
Moderator
Braze Braze

Fair enough, please do add that it has a similar effect to the solari crystal to your special features and also add to weaknesses that should a user of this crystal ever fall to the darkside that whatever weapon this is within becomes unusable to them. Considering that is what the effect of the Solari crystal is listed as within the wookie page.
 
Braze Braze

Fair enough, please do add that it has a similar effect to the solari crystal to your special features and also add to weaknesses that should a user of this crystal ever fall to the darkside that whatever weapon this is within becomes unusable to them. Considering that is what the effect of the Solari crystal is listed as within the wookie page.
this should be changed
 

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