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Private Edge of the Abyss

Ana Rix Ana Rix

"That is if we are lucky, unlucky has the flies out when we are going and they take a nip spread a brain eating parasite." Aya said it as she tapped and brought up the charts. Her hand going to it as she directed with her finger to show. "This island chain here obscures it but there is another larger island, the black coast." She shrugged. "They aren't original with names but there is a river. Wide and used long ago by sailors. Going upriver takes time but it isn't the danger. The danger is the snakes, flies and monkey. The vines will hang over the river in places letting them get on the boats to steal anything not held down. Snakes as large as a hutt that will grab someone and pull them into the canopy or river. Then it will start to get in and the ruined cities are from older civilizations that we have had here. We'll have to walk through it and the path is narrow lined with dangers and riches... but they are cursed and many have died trying to claim them." She spoke as the ship was going. "My aunt is on the far side of the city in the gallery it is an old fortress and she hates visitors."
 
Ana listened in silence at first, one hand braced against the side of the craft as it cut through the calmer water, the other absently pushing wet strands of hair out of her eyes. Salt and river mist still clung to her clothes and skin, and she looked every bit like someone who had just survived something spectacularly unpleasant. She did not complain about it. She rarely did.

Instead, she focused on Aya's words.

Flies with parasites. Snakes the size of speeders. Monkeys that stole anything not bolted down. Cursed ruins and narrow paths.

By the time Aya finished, Ana had a fairly complete mental model forming in her head. It was not a comforting one.

She let out a slow breath through her nose, glancing at the charts as they hovered in front of Aya's hand.

"So," she said evenly, her tone dry but thoughtful, "we're dealing with hostile terrain, aggressive wildlife, biological hazards, unstable ruins, and a population that does not like outsiders."

She tilted her head slightly.

"And we're doing it while wet, tired, and carrying things everyone wants to steal."

A pause.

"Good. That's…efficient. Saves time."

There was the faintest hint of humor in her voice, the kind that only surfaced when things were objectively terrible.

She shifted her footing as the ship adjusted course, then glanced toward the dark line of islands in the distance, eyes narrowing slightly as she studied the silhouette of the Black Coast.

"If the river was used by sailors, that means there are predictable currents and sediment patterns," she continued, slipping naturally into analysis. "Which means certain sections will be safer than others, even if locals don't think about it that way anymore."

She looked back at Aya.

"Do we have any old maps? Trade routes? Logs? Anything pre-collapse?"

Then, after a beat: "Because if people keep dying in the same places, it's usually not a curse," she said calmly. "It's bad information."

Her gaze drifted briefly toward the canopy beyond the riverbanks.

"As for the wildlife…" She shrugged lightly. "If it bleeds, it follows patterns. Feeding routes. Territory. Nesting zones. We can work around that."

When Aya mentioned her aunt, Ana's expression softened just a fraction.

"An isolated fortress. On the far side of dangerous ruins. Run by someone who hates visitors," she summarized. "I'm guessing she's either very competent, very stubborn, or both."

A small, wry smile touched her lips.

"Which means she's probably our best chance of getting through this alive."

She adjusted her damp jacket and settled back against the railing, eyes forward now, steady and focused.

"Just…let me know when we reach the part where the brain-eating flies start," she added lightly. "I'd like a minute to emotionally prepare."

Mistral Mistral
 
Ana Rix Ana Rix

"Sailor yes, maps no. These are places from before most islanders had homes. the first civilizations were much more advanced then island tribes that went with the seasons from island to island." She said it but was showing the map. "This is the best aerial image we have of the area and it is not good. The canopy from above is too thick in places, underwater sensors area attacked. Most of us just have for the old places stories and sometimes when you get brave you try and go there. It is said the riches from the treasuries could buy this planet a thousand times over. It has endured even with the storms aand the risks because it is something mysterious and older."
 
Ana studied the aerial image as Aya brought it up, her head tilting slightly as if she were trying to see through the canopy rather than at it. The resolution breaks, the occluded zones, the way the forest swallowed up everything beneath it all painted a familiar picture to her. Not mystery. Not magic. Just an environment that refused to be cooperative.

She nodded once, slowly.

"That actually explains a lot," she said, her tone thoughtful rather than disappointed. "Nomadic cultures don't leave clean data trails. Seasonal movement means fewer fixed landmarks, fewer permanent records, and a lot more oral history filling in the gaps."

Her gaze traced the dark patches where the canopy grew too dense for imaging.

"Which means the absence of maps doesn't mean the absence of structure," she continued. "It just means the structure isn't visible from the outside."

She glanced up at Aya briefly, then back to the projection.

"If the first civilizations were more advanced, they would have planned for this environment," she said calmly. "Thick canopy. Storm cycles. Hostile wildlife. They wouldn't have relied on surface visibility."

Ana lifted a hand, gesturing lightly at the image.

"Subsurface construction. Stone foundations. River-aligned access points. Thermal differentials in older materials."
A faint, almost curious smile touched her lips.

"If there really are cities and treasuries that survived this long, they're not hidden by accident."

At the mention of stories and people getting brave, her expression softened, not in disbelief but in recognition.

"Stories are data," she said quietly. "Messy, biased, incomplete data, but still data. Patterns repeat even when the details change."

She leaned back slightly, bracing herself as the ship moved, eyes still on the map.

"And the idea that the riches could buy the planet a thousand times over…"
She exhaled softly.

"That's exactly the kind of exaggeration that grows when something is real enough to tempt people, but dangerous enough that no one comes back with proof."

Ana finally looked out toward the horizon, where the dark green mass of the islands loomed closer.

"Whatever's there is older, yes," she said evenly. "But it's also engineered. And engineering leaves fingerprints."

Her eyes sharpened with quiet focus.

"If we pay attention, we won't need a map."

Mistral Mistral
 
Ana Rix Ana Rix

Aya looked at her as they were moving and the open waters started to shift. Seastone bringing them around as she moved and they were adjusting the domed shielding for water around the boats deck. The boat heading towards the island as Mistral was looking at it and the trees were thick, dark with shadow... and he could almost swear he saw things moving or eyes for a moment but then there was nothing as he blinked. Aya looking at him. "It isn't a trick, the islands haave eyes and old things that see far more." The repulsor boat slid upriver with a whispering hum, its anti‑grav field stirring the water into long, glassy ripples that reflected a sky the color of tarnished durasteel.

Jungle growth pressed inward from both banks, towering fronds and black‑barked trees leaning close as if drawn by curiosity or hunger. Vines hung in slow, tangled curtains, some thick enough to resemble dormant serpents, their tips brushing the mist that hovered over the river like a half‑remembered dream. Beneath the surface, something vast shifted long, sinuous shapes gliding parallel to the hull, their silhouettes thicker than hutt bodies and stretching for dozens of meters before vanishing into deeper shadow. The air was heavy, dense with rot and blooming life, carrying the metallic tang of old stone and stagnant water.

Sensors flickered intermittently, confused by mineral interference and ancient debris from crashed ships, boats and pieces of armor that could be seen buried deep beneath the silt. Far above, reptilian birds circled in slow spirals, their wings leathery and broad, swooping low to claw at carrion snagged on branches. The boat's lights carved pale corridors through the haze, illuminating drifting pollen, spores, and flecks of ash that suggested a fire no one had seen but the jungle still remembered. As the vessel pressed deeper inland, the ruins began to reveal themselves not all at once, but reluctantly, as though resenting the intrusion.

Cyclopean stone blocks rose from the riverbanks at crooked angles, their surfaces worn smooth by centuries of flood and neglect. Carvings still clung to them, eroded figures of beings no longer found in any archive, their elongated forms and hollow eyes staring eternally toward the water. Some structures leaned into the river, half‑submerged domes and fractured causeways vanishing beneath the slow current. Others loomed farther back, swallowed by vegetation, their once‑proud spires now wrapped in roots thick as starship cabling. Massive serpents coiled among those roots, their scales patterned like cracked obsidian, their movements slow and deliberate as they tasted the air with tongues the length of a man's arm.

Faint lights flickered within the stone at irregular intervals not active systems, but lingering echoes of forgotten technology, like embers refusing to die. The Force felt different here, heavy and layered, pressed flat by time rather than absent. It was watchful, patient, carrying the weight of rituals performed and promises broken. Even the boat's engines seemed to lower their tone, as if instinctively acknowledging that they were trespassing in a place that had never truly surrendered to decay. The canopy thickened as the river narrowed, branches interlocking overhead until the sky vanished entirely, replaced by a dim, green‑black twilight that pressed down like a physical weight.

The air grew colder, the mist thicker, and the water darker, its surface broken only by the slow rise of bubbles from unseen depths. Occasionally, a massive shape rolled just beneath the surface scaled, ridged, and impossibly long sending a tremor through the hull. Reptile‑birds dove between the branches, their talons snapping at smaller creatures that fled in frantic bursts of color. The jungle's earlier silence gave way to a low, continuous murmur: the rustle of unseen bodies moving through undergrowth, the distant splash of something heavy entering the river, the grinding of stone as roots shifted against ancient masonry.

The boat's lights struggled to penetrate the gloom, illuminating only fragments of the world ahead slick stone, coiled vines, the glint of predatory eyes watching from the dark. Every meter forward felt like a negotiation with the river itself, as though the water weighed their presence and had not yet decided whether to allow passage. The ruins grew denser still, rising from the riverbanks in jagged formations that resembled the vertebrae of some colossal beast. Black stone jutted upward in broken spires, their surfaces etched with glyphs that pulsed faintly when the boat drifted near. Some structures appeared melted, as though subjected to unimaginable heat.

Others were split cleanly down the middle, revealing hollow interiors filled with tangled roots and the skeletal remains of long‑dead fauna. A toppled archway lay half‑submerged, its keystone carved with a symbol that glimmered like wet obsidian. As the boat passed beneath it, the Force stirred slow, heavy, like a breath drawn after centuries of stillness. The sensation of being observed intensified, not by eyes but by presence, by memory, by the accumulated weight of a civilization that had risen, ruled, and vanished without witness. The river bent sharply, funneled between two towering monoliths whose surfaces were so dark they seemed to swallow the light.

Beyond them, the water widened into a basin choked with floating debris broken statues, shattered tablets, and the bleached bones of creatures too large to name. The central complex rose ahead like a mountain of black stone, its silhouette jagged against the faint glow of bioluminescent moss clinging to its flanks. Broken stairways spiraled upward, disappearing into the canopy, while others plunged directly into the river, their steps worn into shallow bowls by countless feet long turned to dust. Water dripped from unseen heights, echoing through hollow corridors in a rhythm that mimicked a heartbeat. The jungle had retreated entirely here, leaving only bare stone and black soil, as though the land itself refused to claim this place.

Symbols carved along the walls glimmered faintly as the boat approached, reacting to movement or perhaps to intent. The air grew colder still, and the mist thickened until it clung to skin like damp cloth. Something vast moved in the water behind them, sending a slow wave that rocked the hull. Ahead, the river disappeared into a cavernous opening at the base of the ruins, a mouth of darkness framed by fanged stone. The certainty that anything beyond this point still belonged to the living faaded from Mistrals mind as he had been watching all of his corners throughout the trip. The sides showed areas where boats could rest as Aya was bringing it in and close but she motioned as the large shark was grabbing a plank to move on.
 
Ana had been quiet for most of the approach, her usual habit of commentary and analysis subdued as the river drew them deeper into its shadowed throat. She stood near the edge of the deck, one hand braced lightly against a railing, the other resting near a console she no longer seemed to be actively monitoring. Her attention was fixed outward now, eyes tracking the slow, predatory movements beneath the water and the way the ruins emerged piece by piece, like memories clawing their way back into the present.

The longer they traveled, the more her expression shifted from academic curiosity to something sharper and more alert.

Not fear. Calculation.

She watched the flickering sensor readouts with a faint frown, noting the erratic interference patterns, the dead zones, the way entire sections of data simply dissolved into static.

"The mineral content alone would scramble half the survey satellites in the Core," she murmured quietly, more to herself than anyone else. "Dense basalt. Heavy metals. Probably layered with old energy conduits or crystal matrices underneath. No wonder nobody ever mapped this properly."

Her gaze lifted as one of the massive shapes rolled beneath the surface, the faint distortion rippling through the water.

"And whatever built this," she continued softly, eyes narrowing as they traced the half-submerged causeways and fractured domes, "didn't design it to be welcoming. Every structure funnels movement. Every approach narrows. Every open space becomes a kill zone."

She glanced briefly toward Mistral when he shifted, then back to the ruins.

"This isn't a lost city," she said. "It's a fortified system that outlived its occupants."

As the glyphs began to pulse faintly and the Force seemed to thicken around them, Ana felt it too, even without sensitivity. The pressure. The subtle wrongness in the air. The way sound seemed to hesitate before traveling.

She drew in a slow breath.

"Residual fields," she said quietly. "Old power networks, ritual sites, layered tech, and…something else. They didn't dismantle this place. They sealed it."

Her fingers tightened slightly on the railing as the cavernous opening came into view.

"Which means," she added, her voice calm but edged now with seriousness,
"whatever they were trying to contain either killed them…or convinced them it was safer to leave than to fight."

When Aya motioned, and the boat slowed, Ana finally looked back toward the others, meeting Aya's eyes briefly before nodding once.

"Alright," she said, steadying herself as the hull rocked. "If this place is watching us, then the worst thing we can do is act like tourists."

Her gaze returned to the dark mouth of the ruins, expression composed but intent.

"Stay close. Watch footing. Don't touch anything unless we all agree first." A faint, dry note slipped into her voice.

"And if something starts glowing that isn't supposed to, we leave. Immediately."

She shifted her weight, preparing to disembark when signaled, every trace of casualness gone now.

"Whatever this place is," Ana finished quietly, "it's still active. Just…in ways nobody remembers how to read."

Mistral Mistral
 
Ana Rix Ana Rix

Mistral had to agree with that as Aya got the plank set down and she was moving. Looking at seastone and the shark as she spoke. "We'll be back... stay on the boat and protect it. We don't want to be trying to trek through the jungle.. there are far worse things in there." She said it and grabbed several weapons while securing them including a large blade. Mistral grabbed a rifle in case but had his swords as going across the plank they waited for Anaa and then seastone was pulling it back to not let things onto the boat. Aya started walking and leading the way. "There is more dangers here, it is why you'll find a few but rarely anything or anyone wants to be inside of the cities for long." Mistral had a small nod of agreement but he was more looking carefully around with a hand ready to throw a blade if they needed to fight.
 
Ana stepped onto the slick, age-polished stone as the boat's hum faded into the dense quiet of the ruins. Testing her weight against the warped rock and encroaching roots, she scanned the fractured glyphs and repositioned blocks with practiced precision, her eyes tracking everything from the canopy to the shadowed gaps below.

"That tracks," she murmured to Aya, moving into a protective pocket near Mistral. "High predator density, unstable structures, and residual energy. Together, they make this place self-policing; nature and time have been handling security for centuries."

She checked the wrist scanner as it hummed against the interference, her frown deepening.

"I'm seeing intermittent energy spikes. They are patterned enough to suggest dormant infrastructure waking as we pass. If anything reacts, it's just the city's old pressure plates responding to our presence."

A wry edge touched her voice as she fell into step behind Aya, her posture coiled and alert.

"Let's try not to remind this place how to defend itself. Lead on, and I'll watch the systems and the shadows."

Mistral Mistral
 
Ana Rix Ana Rix

Mistral gave a nod of his head as he was walking and he took in the stone that still looked incredibly intact. Overgrown yes but it didn't seem as faded as one might imagine or eroded... if anything it seemed more alive before he followed a sound. Aya was looking at it and she stopped only to point. "A boat." She said it and there was a small slip with another repulsor boat tied up as she moved over by it and stopped only to look down. Kicking a clump of vine and plant over onto the boat as several things scattered from the sounds of it impacting the metal. Mistral was looking at what scattered and they looked like oily cats only the size of hounds and willing to dive into the water.

"Well that isn't impending." He said it while he was moving with Aya and Ana through more. Stopping as it sounded like something screamed, someone with a faint echo on the stone. He was looking as the firs signs came into view as his hand came up to motion. Then the other went to his blade as he held it for a moment with Aya motioning with herr head. She held the rifle at the ready while they were going and the sight had two things going around. The first was a large toppled over statue. The base showing a sunken pit filled with what looks like crimson waterrs for a moment until they got closer just passing it.

"Those rubies are the size of a newborn babe." Mistral said it looking and pointed more then tried to touch. The second sight was what drew Aya's attention as above on a pillar was whoever had been in the boat. "Looks like they thought so too." She said it as the person hanging had a necklace of the rubies suspending her like a grisly trophy. No signs of attack her their body hanging and Mistral spoke. "That is certainly a good reason to not take anything." He said it while walking with Aya pointing towards the doorways but she spoke. "Yeah, there is much more though that one is new. I have seen entire chambers filled from floor to ceiling with more."
 
Ana's pace slowed the moment the body drifted into view. Up until that point, she had moved with a careful, analytical curiosity—her eyes cataloging the intricate stonework and the selective way the vines clung to the ruins as if something beneath the jungle still remembered how the temple was meant to be maintained. But the sight of the hanging figure stopped her cold, catching her breath for a sharp second before she forced her heart rate to level out.

She came to a halt beside Aya and Mistral, her gaze tracing the grisly scene with a clinical, yet mounting dread. She took in the necklace of massive rubies and the way they bit into the cold flesh, noting the lack of wounds or signs of a struggle. The body simply swayed in the damp air, unnatural and perfectly displayed.

"That isn't about greed," Ana said quietly, her voice low and dangerously controlled. "That's about deterrence. Someone wanted this seen by anyone who dared to follow."

Her eyes flicked briefly toward the pit of crimson water before returning to the gems. "And if there are chambers full of those stones, then this place has been tempting people for centuries. It means whatever did this isn't random—it's consistent, and it knows exactly why people come here."

She exhaled slowly through her nose to ground herself, adjusting the strap of her pack with a sharp, decisive tug. Turning her gaze toward Aya, she spoke with a flat, plain urgency. "We shouldn't touch anything. Not the stones, not the structures, not even the debris. If this place punishes curiosity, I'd rather not test how creative it can get."

Taking a careful step forward, she kept close to the others, her eyes never stopping as they scanned the darkened doorways and the shadows lurking on the upper ledges. "Let's stay together," she added, her voice dropping to a grim murmur. "We get what we came for, and we leave, before we become part of the décor."

Mistral Mistral
 
Ana Rix Ana Rix

Mistral had to agree with that it wasn't about punishing them it was about sending a message. The crimson waters as they passed more he noticed it. "Not is not water." He said it and followed quickly. "Not blood either... that is more of those." He pointed from the pool of rubies to the ones around her neck. "Greed is sometimes a powerful motivator." He said it but moved with Aya as she spoke. "Yeah this is... this is just the surface stuff. There are other places, more ah you could say.. more rich in some cases. It is up ahead." She said it while they were movign and the city showed an arch that went up into the jungle and hugged a mountain side.

She stood there at the top of the pathway going up,not as a single person but as a living shrine to the forgotten and the drowned. Her silhouette a jagged tapestry of textures, draped in layers of sun-bleached calico and salt-rotted velvet that seem to hold the very moisture of the swamp within their fibers. Every movement she makes is accompanied by a rhythmic, metallic shiver the clatter of a thousand "trinkets" sewn into her bodice. Bleached bird skulls, tarnished silver coins, and vials of murky swamp water hang from her hips like grisly trophies. The fabric of her skirt is heavy with the grime of a dozen shores, trailing behind her like a lingering shadow.

To look at her was to see a shipwreck personified; she stood adorned in the debris of the city, yet she weard her rags with the terrifying elegance of a queen who has outlived her own kingdom. The most arresting feature is the untamed crown of her hair, a wild thicket of matted dreadlocks that defies the weight of gravity. Woven into the dark, tangled tresses are slivers of polished bone, dried sea fans, and strings of colorful glass beads that catch the torchlight like the eyes of predatory fish. Her face is a map of ancient mysteries, her dark skin dusted with a fine layer of white ritual ash that accentuates the sharp, feline curve of her cheekbones.

Across the bridge of her nose, faint tribal markings are etched in charcoal, giving her an expression of permanent, mocking wisdom. When she tilts her head, the heavy ornaments in her hair chime a low, hollow note a funeral dirge played by the wind reminding everyone present that she carries the weight of the spirit world in every strand of her being. Her eyes are two dark pools of ink, shimmering with a mercurial light that suggests she is viewing a reality far removed from the physical plane. They are wide and unblinking, framed by lashes caked in soot, and they seem to pierce through flesh and bone to weigh the very soul beneath.

When she finally parts her lips in a smile with Aya's approach, she reveals teeth stained a dark, earthy umber from the chewing of bitter roots and ritual herbs. That smile is a crooked, unsettling thing; it is both a welcome and a warning, revealing a blackened tongue that has tasted the secrets of the other place. Her hands, stained to the knuckles with indigo dye, rest restlessly against her sides, her long fingers twitching as if she is plucking invisible strings. She does not merely occupy the space she haunts it, standing with a predatory stillness that demands absolute, terrified silence. Mistral looked at her and then at Aya as he could see the family resemblance in their looks deep down.

"Auntie." Aya's voice came out as she spoke.
 

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