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Approved Tech Echos of Resurgence Lightsaber

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To document the creation and characteristics of a replica lightsaber crafted by Jedi Initiate / Padawan Braze as a study and practice project. This project aims to merge the tradition of ancient Jedi craftsmanship with modern technological advancements.
  • Image Source: Self Made / Drawn by me

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Lightsaber / Force Artifact (The Gem being used is the artifact)
  • Size: Large
  • Weight: Average

SPECIAL FEATURES

STRENGTHS
  • Temporal Insight: Offers the wielder glimpses into the past, present, or potential futures.

    Expanded Description:
    Temporal Insight grants The User the ability to peer into the temporal stream, offering glimpses of the past, present, and potential futures. This ability is not without its limits, to prevent it from being overpowered or undefined.
    • Past Insight: The User can look up to 1,000 years into the past, with the clarity of the vision decreasing the further back they go. Events within the last century are seen with crystal clarity, but older visions may become more symbolic or require interpretation.
    • Present Insight: The User can observe concurrent events happening in real-time anywhere in the world, but this requires intense concentration and is limited to locations or people The User is familiar with or has a significant emotional connection to.
    • Future Insight: The future is inherently uncertain and fluid, so The User can see potential futures up to 5 years ahead. These visions are not guarantees but rather possibilities based on current trajectories. The further into the future The User looks, the more possibilities emerge, making the visions increasingly vague and numerous.

    Limitations:
    • Using Temporal Insight is mentally taxing, and frequent use can lead to headaches or temporary disorientation.
    • The ability cannot be used in rapid succession; there's a cooldown period of 24 hours between uses to prevent mental strain.


  • Psychic Disruption: Can disrupt the focus and concentration of nearby individuals.

  • Psychic Disruption

    Expanded Description:

    Psychic Disruption allows The User to unsettle the focus and concentration of those nearby, making it a strategic tool in combat or tense situations.
    • Intensity Levels: The ability can be adjusted in intensity, from a mild distraction that might cause someone to forget what they were saying, to an overwhelming barrage of mental noise that can incapacitate foes for a short period.
    • Range and Control: The effective range of this ability is approximately 30 meters (about 98 feet). The User has precise control over who is affected within this range, able to target specific individuals or affect everyone in the vicinity.
    • Nature of Disruption: The disruption can manifest in various forms, tailored to the target's mind. It could be an incessant, catchy tune stuck in their head, a barrage of flashing images, or an overwhelming wave of unfocused thoughts and emotions. The exact nature of the disruption can be somewhat directed by The User but is also influenced by the target's fears, memories, and personality.

    Limitations:
    • Psychic Disruption requires line of sight to be most effective. Obstructions between The User and the target can diminish the ability's impact.
    • The ability's more intense forms can only be sustained for a few minutes before The User needs to rest, due to the mental exertion involved.
    • Individuals with strong mental fortitude or those trained to resist psychic attacks are less affected by this ability.

  • Force Resonance: Enhances the wielder's connection to the Force, improving awareness and sensitivity to disturbances in the Force.
  • Memory Echoes: Allows the wielder to experience echoes of memories from past users.

WEAKNESSES
  • Void Stone Vulnerability: Can be dampened or nullified by Void Stone.
  • Ysalamiri Effect: Negates the crystal's powers in the presence of Ysalamiri.
  • Locking Activator Vulnerability: While the locking activator ensures the blade remains engaged during combat, it also poses a risk if the saber is unexpectedly thrown. If the locking mechanism malfunctions or is tampered with, the blade could remain engaged at an inopportune moment, potentially causing harm to Braze or allies.
  • Pressure Grip Disadvantage: Although the pressure grip enhances safety by deactivating the lightsaber when not held, it could become a liability if compromised. If the pressure sensor fails or is manipulated by an opponent, the saber might deactivate at an inconvenient time, leaving Braze momentarily defenseless in battle.


DESCRIPTION
Inspired by the ancient lightsaber of Master Shaelan Vosara, detailed at Echos of Eternity, this modern interpretation crafted by Jedi Initiate / Padawan Braze blends tradition with contemporary Jedi craftsmanship. Incorporating durable phrik and standardized saber parts, including the precision-enhancing Ossus Dueling Lens and the Crude Phobium Emitter, the replica introduces tactical versatility and adaptability. This project pays homage to the Jedi legacy while exploring the potential of lightsaber design, reflecting a balance between the ancient wisdom and the evolving needs of the Jedi Order.
 
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So, while there's nothing inherently wrong with this sub, I am gonna ask for two things.
Temporal Insight: Offers the wielder glimpses into the past, present, or potential futures.
Psychic Disruption: Can disrupt the focus and concentration of nearby individuals.
These are both very neat strengths, but I'd like you to expand on them. If this item were to ever be stolen or taken off of Braze for any reason, this two are pretty vague and leave room for interpretation. What is the limit of the temporal insight? Exactly how far into the future can it let you see? How far in the past? How does the psychic disruption work? Does it act as a sort of mental flashbang, or is Rick Astley just forcibly playing in my head?

There's a lot of room for expansion, and I feel like that could improve this sub, and make it more clear for opponents facing it.

Other than that, you're golden. Please ping me when you've expanded on your strengths. Braze Braze
 
John Locke John Locke - This is finished
Braze starts to slowly upgrade his older saber designs as he learns more about saber construction:

Added:
EM Protection & Offensive Capability:Electromagnetic shielding paired with offensive electric shocks.
Non-Demetrius Circuitry: This modification ensures Cortosis will not short the lightsaber out.
Bifurcating cyclical-ignition pulse - Water Proof Casing
Hidden Compartment: Hidden compartment for storing small items or tools, providing additional utility for the wielder.
Force-activated: Lightsaber can only be activated using The Force.
Locking activator: Locks the blade on, so it does't accidentally deactivate when Thrown.
Pressure grip: Lightsaber automatically disables itself when not being held.


Removed appropriate weaknesses
added:
  • Locking Activator Vulnerability: While the locking activator ensures the blade remains engaged during combat, it also poses a risk if the saber is unexpectedly thrown. If the locking mechanism malfunctions or is tampered with, the blade could remain engaged at an inopportune moment, potentially causing harm to Braze or allies.
  • Pressure Grip Disadvantage: Although the pressure grip enhances safety by deactivating the lightsaber when not held, it could become a liability if compromised. If the pressure sensor fails or is manipulated by an opponent, the saber might deactivate at an inconvenient time, leaving Braze momentarily defenseless in battle.
 
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