Boethiah
Dark Messiah
Feel free to criticize me!
I'd like to know where I can improve. Just make sure it's constructive, otherwise lay it on me.
I'd like to know where I can improve. Just make sure it's constructive, otherwise lay it on me.
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Dredge
Kneel Before Zod
[member="Anja Aj'Rou"]
Your ugly and you smell like funions. But dammit you got moxy gurl
Your ugly and you smell like funions. But dammit you got moxy gurl
Jsc
Disney's Princess
It feels like I give you shit all the time. When really, let's be honest. I think you are a fantastic innovator, question asker, status-quo pusher, character builder, and a natural leader among the human race.
Whatever happens? Don't let anybody stop you from achieving exactly what you want.
Whatever happens? Don't let anybody stop you from achieving exactly what you want.
Boethiah
Dark Messiah
I appreciate the praise but I'd genuinely like to know where I can improve, too.
Jsc
Disney's Princess
[member="Anja Aj'Rou"] Have more 'I'll sleep on it' days. Trust me. As a fellow 'Keyboard Warrior', this will improve your writing, (<--- Yes, your writing), by leaps and bounds. It will also save you from dozens of the mistakes that I myself have made in my career.
Sleep on it.
Sleep on it.
Dredge
Kneel Before Zod
[member="Jay Scott Clark"]
But I am the One Keyboard Lord to rule them all D:
But I am the One Keyboard Lord to rule them all D:
Dredge
Kneel Before Zod
[member="Jay Scott Clark"]
But sleep is for the weak!! And so are silly things like water!
I should make a feedback thread but only when the bandwagon ends. Can't have anyone think I follow trends
But sleep is for the weak!! And so are silly things like water!
I should make a feedback thread but only when the bandwagon ends. Can't have anyone think I follow trends
Boethiah
Dark Messiah
[member="Jay Scott Clark"]
Definitely. I go at it like a mongoose -- a sleep deprived mongoose. I realize I tend to be the first one to retort; it's a habit of having four older sisters who all think they're right and sadly sometimes I too tend to think I'm always right.
Definitely. I go at it like a mongoose -- a sleep deprived mongoose. I realize I tend to be the first one to retort; it's a habit of having four older sisters who all think they're right and sadly sometimes I too tend to think I'm always right.
Boethiah
Dark Messiah
Please criticize me
Zambrano the Starweird
The Black Prophet of Balagoth
I hear the Mandalorians think you're smelly!
Also, pretty sure this is an April Fools joke since our Dear Leader has no faults. She's space pope!
Buuuuuuuuuut if I was a heretic I'd say that you need to recruit more people that are as crazy as you to keep up with your activity, because you are karking insane when it comes to recruitment and activity, and you need some help Also, I find that you have a penchant for leadership in your characters (the gall of it!), maybe some time you can try writing someone from the bottom of the food chain from the start?
I apologize Dear Leader, if you have done this and I have been blind to it.
Also, pretty sure this is an April Fools joke since our Dear Leader has no faults. She's space pope!
Buuuuuuuuuut if I was a heretic I'd say that you need to recruit more people that are as crazy as you to keep up with your activity, because you are karking insane when it comes to recruitment and activity, and you need some help
Also, I find that you have a penchant for leadership in your characters (the gall of it!), maybe some time you can try writing someone from the bottom of the food chain from the start?I apologize Dear Leader, if you have done this and I have been blind to it.
Boethiah
Dark Messiah
[member="Zambrano the Hutt"]
How could you have forgotten about my farmer!?!?!? Points taken, tho
How could you have forgotten about my farmer!?!?!? Points taken, tho
Zambrano the Starweird
The Black Prophet of Balagoth
[member="Anja Aj'Rou"] Exactly! How could you have allowed me to forget about him? That's why you need to work on it!
That's why you need to work on it!