Codex Denied Directorate Security Bureau | Imperial Directorate

[Jarred Ketzloff]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Detail the Directorate's Intelligence Branch.
• Image Credit: Link - I am the artist.
• Canon: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Links:
  • Imperial Directorate [Faction]
  • Jarred Ketzloff [Character]

GENERAL INFORMATION

• Organization Name: Directorate Security Bureau [DSB] ,also known as Imperial Security Bureau [ISB], Directorate Intelligence Agency [DIA]
• Classification: Military Intelligence
• Affiliation: Imperial Directorate
• Organization Symbol:
  
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• Description: The DSB is the law enforcement and Intelligence agency of the Directorate that was tasked with internal and foreign state state security. The DSB collects, analyzes and reports data that are considered threats. The DSB operates closely with the two other branches of the Directorate, the Navy and the Army. The DSB is split into two divisions, the Intelligence division and the Security division.

GEOGRAPHICAL INFORMATION

• Headquarters: DSB Headquarters, Jakku
• Domain: The DSB operates both within Directorate territory and outside Directorate territory.
• Notable Assets: N/A

SOCIAL INFORMATION

• Hierarchy: The DSB is overseen by a Director who is on the board of Directors. Below the director is the assistant director who oversees the day to day operations when the director is not present. Below the assistant director are DSB colonels who are in charge of their respective division within the DSB whether the Intelligence or the Security division. Below colonels are lieutenants who are junior DSB officers that are in charge of agents and cadets.
• Membership: Every member of the DSB completes a course. These courses are standard issue and involve many courses an agent will need either in the field or in the office. Agents may also take further detailed courses of a particular subject. Every agent is closely monitored to weed out dissent. While the Directorate is unofficially xenophobic, anyone with a clean background may join the ranks of the DSB. The DSB accepts anyone
• Climate: All personnel are required to follow stricter guidelines then any other branches of the Directorate. Personnel of the DSB are also more closely examined in their day to day activities by their fellow operatives to spot spies.
• Reputation: The DSB is widely known within the Directorate. They are feared by other branches of the Directorate due to their fierce loyalty to the Directorate and their willingness to do anything to protect the Directorate. The DSB is also widely known outside of the faction, but little is known about what they do.
• Curios: Uniform worn to designate DSB occupation. Rank insignia, and code cylinders are also worn.
• Rules: DSB personnel follow more rules than any other branch. Restrictions are also in place for personnel during their personal life.
• Goals: Collect, Analyze, and Report data about threats foreign and domestic, then eliminate said threats swiftly through covert and overt operations through the means of task forces.

MEMBERS
Jarred Ketzloff - Director

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
[ Include a description of the organization's history. Who started it, how and why it was formed, modus operandi, any events tied into its creation and existence, etc. ]

 

[Jarred Ketzloff]

Zak Dymo ready to be moved!

 

[Zak Dymo]

Jarred Ketzloff

I will be doing this review for you. I like the aesthetic, but I do want to encourage a little bit more development here.

1. Missing Template Field. Your submission is actually incomplete at the moment. If you refer to the template, you're missing the Historical Information field, which comes after the Members section.

2. Relevant Links.

Headquarters: DSB Headquarters, Jakku

Please link Jakku here.

Curios: Uniform worn to designate DSB occupation. Rank insignia, and code cylinders are also worn.

Please link code cylinder here (that's a detail that is a tad obscure as a costume item, and some readers may not be familiar with it).

3. Nitpick

Organization Symbol: Red and Blue filled Triangel

Triangle.

Aside from the above, there are just a few areas that I'd encourage some further develop for.

Hierarchy: The DSB is overseen by a Director who is on the board of Directors.

What does the hierarchy look like beneath the Director level? What is the managerial structure? What about the agent structure?

Membership: Every member of the DSB completes a course. These courses are standard issue and involve many courses an agent will need either in the field or in the office. Agents may also take further detailed courses of a particular subject. Every agent is closely monitored to weed out dissent.

Aside from performance on their courses, what qualifies someone for membership? Citizenship with a particular planet? Being of a particular species?

Curios: Uniform worn to designate DSB occupation. Rank insignia, and code cylinders are also worn.

How would you describe the uniform? What does the rank insignia contain or resemble? Does the DIB make use of specialty marks, colors, or other means of distinguishing roles or divisions (such as between Security and Intelligence)?

Rules: DSB personnel follow more rules than any other branch. Restrictions are also in place for personnel during their personal life.

Fascinating! Could you give us an example of a few of these rules/requirements?

Those are my thoughts and I look forward to yours in reply. Please tag me when you have completed any edits.

 

[Ben Craig]

posted with Wrong character

 

[Jarred Ketzloff]

Due to faction change, can i have this archived please, thanks! Zak Dymo

 

[Zak Dymo]

Jarred Ketzloff

Archived at OP request.