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Starship Review Diastec Orbital Yard

Manufacturer: Diastec
Market Status: Closed Market
Production: Unique
Length: Very High
Width: High
Height: Large
Size: Very Large
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

  • Intent: To create a large-scale orbital shipyard for the Diarchy, allowing the independent construction, maintenance, and launch of its fleets directly above Bastion.
  • Image Source: here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: Diarchy allowed me to create this
  • Primary Source: Original creation


PRODUCTION INFORMATION


TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS


  • Classification: Orbital Shipyard /
  • Length: 10,000 meters
  • Width: 8,000 meters
  • Height: 3,000 meters
  • Armament:
    • N/A
  • Defenses:
    • Multi-layered Titanium/Durasteel/Obsidian Armor
    • Localized Gravity Anchors
    • Thermal Dissipation Panels
    • Emergency Power Shields
      Defense Rating: LOW
  • Maneuverability Rating: None (stationary orbital platform)
  • Speed Rating: None (fixed orbital structure)
  • Hyperdrive: None (immobile installation; subspace links only)

STANDARD FEATURES

  • All standard orbital station systems, including:
    • Life-support network
    • Command and control nodes
    • Automated repair systems
    • Cargo handling systems
    • Crew quarters and residential zones
    • Docking bays and pressurized corridors
    • Communications arrays
    • Energy generation reactors
    • Trade and maintenance facilities

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

  • Intrusion Detection Matrix: Hybrid AI (Ada Core) monitoring biometric and thermal signatures.
  • Perimeter Defense Rings: Integrated with CIWS and Plasma Turrets.
  • Electronic Warfare Suites: Jamming, signal scrambling, and decoy signal projection.
  • Bio-Hexacrypt System: Advanced data protection architecture to prevent slicing and infiltration.
  • Internal Reactor Network: Self-sufficient nuclear-type energy grid powering all systems and shields.
  • Emergency Launch Corridors: Rapid fighter deployment shafts for defense readiness.

STRENGTHS

  • Monumental Construction Capability: Can assemble ships up to 5 kilometers in length; capable of producing all components in-house, from alloys to propulsion systems.
  • Strategic Location: Positioned above Bastion, directly linked to planetary resources and trade routes for fast resupply and deployment.
  • Industrial Self-Sufficiency: Internal foundries, refineries, and manufacturing lines reduce external dependency.
  • AI Coordination: Ada Core provides seamless control of defense, logistics, and production, minimizing human error.
  • Crew Comfort and Longevity: Equipped with residential, medical, and recreational areas to sustain long-term habitation and morale.

WEAKNESSES

  • Ion Weapon Vulnerability: While resistant, concentrated ion barrages can temporarily disrupt shielding and AI coordination networks.
  • Tractor Beam Interference: When the Vigilant-class drone wings are deployed, overlapping electromagnetic signatures can reduce tractor beam effectiveness.
  • Stationary Target: Immobile structure makes it predictable and requires defense rather than evasion.
  • Energy Load Management: High simultaneous weapon and shield activity can cause reactor strain, forcing temporary power rerouting.
  • Limited Fuel Refining: The D.O.Y. relies on Bastion's surface refineries for fuel shipments, creating a potential logistical weak point.
  • Crew-Heavy Operations: Despite automation, it requires extensive personnel, increasing long-term resource costs and vulnerability to internal sabotage.
  • The reactor nuclear, if he fall in failure, the station haven't energy and that's the black-out
  • The station is not able to create her own fuel, so she import from the other for charge they ship.
  • NOT ARMED.

DESCRIPTION

Suspended in the stillness of Bastion's upper orbit, the Diastec Orbital Yard (D.O.Y.) stands as the Diarchy's ultimate symbol of industrial independence and military strength. Known colloquially as the Ring of Production, the station's glowing blue arcs encircle a massive central core of foundries, shipyards, and control towers. Its form is both elegant and imposing a luminous ring of durasteel and obsidian alloy balanced by a core of command spires and reactor conduits.

Measuring ten kilometers across, the D.O.Y. is capable of constructing vessels from nimble starfighters to colossal battlecruisers and star destroyer. Inside its vast docks, engineering teams and automated systems work in concert to assemble the next generation of the Diarchy's navy. Each ship produced here is tested, calibrated, and verified within Bastion's orbital range before being assigned to active duty.

Every corridor hums with life and precision from the industrial foundries melting raw metal into hull plating, to the command sectors issuing launch authorizations, and the residential zones where thousands of engineers, pilots, and staff live and work in rotation. Beneath the calm blue light of its shielding rings, the station is a living city dedicated entirely to creation and control.

Security on the D.O.Y. is maximum . Its Tri-Phase Shield Grid, perimeter defense rings, and AI-coordinated drone wings ensure that even a coordinated assault would face a fortress of energy and precision fire. Yet despite its power, the station's true strength lies not in its weapons, but in its efficiency a perfectly tuned ecosystem of production, protection, and progress.

Built under the oversight of Lyssara Thrynn, and commanded by Diarch Rellik, the D.O.Y. represents the apex of Diarch engineering philosophy: self-reliant, impregnable, and ever-efficient. It is both factory and fortress a beacon of industrial might above Bastion's blue horizon.
 


Out Of Character Info


Intent: to create a station spatial for product ship yard company
Permissions: closed market

Technical Information


Affiliation: Diarchy
Model: D.O.Y Class station space-ship yard
Starship Class: Other
Starship Role: Other
Modular: Yes
Material: Durasteel, Titanium Alloy, Obsidian composite, Reinforced hull plating, Energy shielding components
Armaments: N/A
Defense Rating: Very High
Speed Rating: None
Maneuverability Rating:: None
Energy Resist: Very High
Kinetic Resist: Very High
Radiation Resist: Very High
Other Resistance(s):

EMP shield, thermal dissipation

Minimum Crew: 4500
Optimal Crew: 10000
Passenger Capacity: 15000
Cargo Capacity: Very Large
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Lyssara Thrynn Lyssara Thrynn

Cool submission! That being said there’s a few concerns we need to address! First, be sure to link all Factory submissions that the station is using. When you’ve done this tag me and we’ll proceed from there!
Uh, wait, I'm going to have to create each factory category for each thing? Tell me what to create, because I admit I'm lost. :D Thanks! I have nothing to list unfortunately. Tell me what I have to list and I'll do it. Thanks you prazutis. Darth Prazutis Darth Prazutis
 
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Lyssara Thrynn Lyssara Thrynn , Darth Prazutis Darth Prazutis

Cool sub! You don't need permission of you want to make something to anyone or to any factions. I found several problems:
  • As individual you can't be a manufacturer to a larger than 1.000 metres civilian ship/space station or to a lager than 500 metres warship/battle station.
  • This is a 10.000 metres shipyard with weapons, so this is an SSD, so if it is really an SSD only a Major Faction can be the Manufacturer and you need to link the last 2 invasion what the The Diarchy won, but AFAIK they didn't win any invasions, so this can't be an SSD.
  • Please remove the Armament section from the sub, or modify the dimensions at max to 5.000 metres.
  • If this a civilian station, the size can be anything, but you still need to remove your name from the production.
  • I recommend to check production/size picture about this when you make the modifications.

And if you have any questions or if you don't understand anything, feel free to ask in this sub.
 
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Lyssara Thrynn Lyssara Thrynn , Darth Prazutis Darth Prazutis

Cool sub! You don't need permission of you want to make something to anyone or to any factions. I found several problems:
  • As individual you can't be a manufacturer to a larger than 1.000 metres civilian ship/space station or to a lager than 500 metres warship/battle station.
  • This is a 10.000 metres shipyard with weapons, so this is an SSD, so if it is really an SSD only a Major Faction can be the Manufacturer and you need to link the last 2 invasion what the The Diarchy won, but AFAIK they didn't win any invasions, so this can't be an SSD.
  • Please remove the Armament section from the sub, or modify the dimensions at max to 5.000 metres.
  • If this a civilian station, the size can be anything, but you still need to remove your name from the production.
  • I recommend to check production/size picture about this when you make the modifications.

And if you have any questions or if you don't understand anything, feel free to ask in this sub.
In fact, it is a military station for creating ships of the Diarchy as a major faction, the leaders have validated it, so what do I do?

Thanks you to considering i create a building for the faction diarchy, and the rules at the table said it's unlimited :/ if that's pose problem, i reduced size no problem. But, i ask again.


MANIAC MANIAC
 
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Lyssara Thrynn Lyssara Thrynn

This can be 10km but without weapons. Can be unlimited if it is a civilian station/ship. In warship / military station's unlimited rule is:
Super Star Destroyers / Dreadnoughts
  • SSD/Dreadnoughts may be requested for approval once it has won two Victory Declarations, judged by the SWRP Staff Team. (Invasion, Annihilation, etc.)
  • A Major Faction may only have up to three active SSD/Dreadnought submissions at a time.
  • Acquiring a Super Star Destroyer / Dreadnought will be restricted to Major Factions.
  • A SSD/Dreadnought factory submission requires SWRP Admin approval.
  • An SSD/Dreadnought is permitted to be any size larger than 5,001m.
  • Each SSD must be labeled Unique, each Dreadnought submission must be Semi-Unique.
  • No player may captain a SSD / Dreadnought without the Major Faction Owner's consent.
  • If a Major Faction is recalled, merged into another Major Faction, or drops to minor, any SSD / Dreadnought created must be decommissioned and archived.
  • While SSDs may be destroyed, they cannot be stolen by an opposing Faction.
 
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Lyssara Thrynn Lyssara Thrynn

This is not how it works unfortunately. But you have 2 options:
You can say it is an 5.000 metres war station and it is creates ships. And Military Space stations can be SSDs, it is why the unlimited there too, in this case you can keep the armament section.
The other option, you say, it is still 10.000 metres, but in this case it can't have armaments, but it is still able to build warships too.
 
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Lyssara Thrynn Lyssara Thrynn

This is not how it works unfortunately. But you have 2 options:
You can say it is an 5.000 metres war station and it is creates ships. And Military Space stations can be SSDs, it is why the unlimited there too, in this case you can keep the armament section.
The other option, you say, it is still 10.000 metres, but in this case it can't have armaments, but it is still able to build warships too.
Hi thanks for your advice, i have completly remoove her armament, that's look me weird for a military base, but why not, thanks you

MANIAC MANIAC
 
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Lyssara Thrynn Lyssara Thrynn

Thank you! It is not a military base, it is a civilian base. You can't keep any warships or Starfighters squadrons in it. In the hangar space it can hold only Support crafts, true warships can attach to it via docking bays.
See here:
Hangar Space: (Civilian stations are not used to hold starfighter or other squadrons of armed vessels. You may list Vehicles or Docking Bays for capital ships or other items of note here.)
Please remove your character from here, because she can't be manufacturer. If you want to keep her, put a designer after the name.
What I mentioned:
And here, please remove the "Orbital Defense Platform", because it is a civilian station/platform, not an war station.
Classification: Orbital Shipyard / Orbital Defense Platform
 
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No problem, I still made the changes you requested, out of respect for the rules, but a military base without weapons, even if immobile, is already strange to me. In fact, I needed the 10 km length because if I want to be able to build enormous ships for the Diarchy, it has to remain logical. For ships 5 km long, well, you need the necessary infrastructure with logic. A codex judge asked me for a station because it's not canon, something I'm doing, and now I find myself with this. All I want is to build warships, that's all, nothing more, nothing less. I am the R&D member of the diarch and they command me a military base, and what i give to they ? A civilian base for construct warship ? Thats feel me weird.

I have :

remoove my character like you said, i have delete the squadron number. I dont know what i'm supposed to place here, so i have delete it, and now i hope it's good

If you tell me i can build my ship with that's, all is okay :)

Thanks, need anything else?

Edit : i have integraly edit the two thread, the Codex thread, and the Factory codex, i HOPE it's good now. I completely remoove, defense and armament, for a civilian station. :3

MANIAC MANIAC
 
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