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Approved Species Croa

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Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
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Name: Croa
Designation: Sentient
Homeworld: Sekalus
Language: Basic
Average height of adults: 1.8m (5ft 9")
Skin color: White to black
Hair color: White to black
Breathes: Type I
Strengths:

* Heightened Senses: Their hearing, smell, eyesight and taste are better than the maority of other species allowing for better hunting instincts, but it is also able to be used against them as sensitive ears can pick up ultrasonic frequencies.

* Acrobatic: with more hollow bone structure they can run faster, jump higher and climb better.

* Immune system: With the croa initially starting out as a virus that hit the genetics of humanoid species the immune system rapidly grew better allowing them to fight off viruses, illnesses and infections faster. This dose not however stopping them from dying from really serious case's or poison.


Weaknesses:

* No more durable or physically strong than average humans: They do however have more weaker bones due to them slightly hollowed out.

* sensitive hearing: with their ears been so sensitive to sound the croa can pick up frequencies many others cannot. But loud nosies in close proximity, Flashbangs for example would have a high possibility of rupturing their eardrums.

* sensitive to extreme cold: The Croa easily get cold and suffer hypothermia. When in cold environments it's is very common to see them well rapped up.

Distinctions:

* Humanoid Appearance

* Flexible Tail

* Retractable Claws

* Elongated ears

* androgynous

* Female

Average Lifespan: 80+ years

Races:

*Neki: The final stage of this species that now combine the previous three but no longer a virus. With quick evolution their bodies have rejected the virul aspects in turn for a more steadily repopulation by giving birth to new croa. Those who had been previously infected and classified as a Resuneku they had become completely sterile meaning in time they would soon die out to natural causes.

* Resuneku: A first generation Croa created originally from the primary virus and the leadership caste with more intelligence compared to the lower generations. Their body is capable of reproducing and has the highest level of success compared to others. Due to been the genetically more stable the evolution was the fastest to occur with these into rejecting the virus and passed it on further down the line.

* Neku: The more intelligent generations that come from the source. Used and bestowed upon the ones of value who require a new level of loyalty.

* Nasaneku: The more advanced generations that have degraded and diluted reducing the intelligence. Their frustration and ferocity comes out more often due to been mentally unstable. Been the most unstable they cannot conceive offspring. (Very few remain and will become extinct soon.)


Estimated Population: Few, though they are graduly repopulating.

Diet: Their diet is essentially the same as humans, though they lean more towards meat.

Communication: Generally the same as humans, though they tend to meow within their sentence structure or to indicate emotional states of irritation or joy.

Culture:

The croa over time have become a quiet civil race nd very accepting of their forum. Many problems in other races like sexism and discrimination don't really happen among the croa since they are all roughly the same in appearance.

Military -


The croa are fierce warriors. They hold many traits that can give them advantages. Many of those in armed forces or even peacekeeping are trained in hand to hand combat with and without the uses of their claws. Their sight also helps pinpoint details especially through a scope.

The croa also very good spies. Their hearing, lighter bodies and acrobatics allow them to move around almost silently.

art's -

Fashion, paintings, sculptures, music. They do it all but it's mostly the right side dominant that contribute to the art's. They have the advantage of simple thinking and allows creativity for all to enjoy. Clothing wise are designed around the climates they belong in. Fur and soft durable fabrics seem to be the common materials. The paintings and sculptures also vary to each individual. The most famous sculpture to the croa is one if their own kind stood tall and proud with there hand held out. On the hand is a insect that looks identical to a butterfly. On the musical side there is many different genres. The most comon are easy listening and rock.

Science and technology -

The croa has been brought up in the age where technologic and scientific advances are achieved everyday. So the basic knowledge is passed along among their childhood in education. The croa also involve them selfs in the developments on sekalus. Many big projects that could better the society tend to be funded by the government to not only help but inspire.

Technology level: Galactic standard level

General behavior:

While they could in theory operate as a normal human society should their numbers ever warrant such a possibility. Mostly opting to lounge around, they typically behave in playful manners with each other, or conducting themselves in normal conversations. Truly their only distinctions from humans depicting their changes is their submissive nature and the growth of natural claws and fangs.

Their structure is built as a society. After the evolutionary stage had finished the Croa soon adapted become less violent and civil. The Croa now live normal life's like any other sentient spieces. Be born, grow up, work, give birth, die. The cycle for them is the same for almost everything else in the galaxy.



History:

The croa. Originally made to be a virus by the infamous Sith lord Baylor Prealior. No one truly knows what her purpose for them was. To strike fear? Galactic dominence? Its an unknown. In the history of the croa the first sighting of them was at rendili when [member="Camellia Swift"] transitioned into subject zero. A begging to an end? Maybe.

The spiecies makes up a combination of other know creatures and spiecies in the galaxy. Cathar, zeltron, human and rackghoul. The human and Cathar where two of the most dominant traits. While the body remaind remarkably similar to a human the body also gained an extra limb been the tail, elongated feline ears and claws.

Zeltron traits was included in hopes to gain the pheromone aspects. although that trait didn't take instead they gained the trait of the average height of the zeltrons been 1.8 meters (5ft 9inch). The rackghouls only made up a small portion of what could be added in. The rackgouls where used to attempt to make this spieces into a virus and it was successful, to an extent.

In this time Sanya Val Lerium (at the time) had been converted into a croa. Although it was and was not accidental. It was Sanya's lust and passion for Camellia swift that she had transitioned from a simple kiss. During her transformation a vision of a world on the farthest outskirts of the outer rim. The world was corrupted by it's government and the civilians desire for change.

Sanya had made it her quest to not only liberate the world but give the croa somewhere safe to flourish. The intentions at first where to only have those who wanted the change be affected. But during the liberation it had became out of hand. The governments enforcement was the first to be affected. They then turned on the civilians that reveled against the government. In the end a large portion of the populace in luss city have became croa due to the lack of order. In this time Sanya had assumed control of the goverment turning the king into a croa. This sign of defeat placed her in the role of queen.

over several months and order restored quickly. Those who had transitioned became accepting of the new form. It had brought good perks to them as a socioty. Unison, peace and a grate deal of other things. In several months the cases of people been transformed had dropped to zero. While at first this raised concern as a spieces but it was simple evolution taking control. The rackghoul part of the croa was so diluted that it was no longer needed.

In fact the croa's had continued to develop into it's final stages of a normal spiecies. They had lost the abilities to pass the virus along and had took a long time to learn the croa can naturally have children. In no time the number of croa went in a rise. Not only was the people overjoyed about leading a full normal life but could start a family.

All croa had developed a working a uterus and overlies and another organ that acts as a male equivalent of the testies to make up both requirements to consive a child. Once the child is conceived the pregnancy can last up to 11 month's. While it dose take longer than most humanoid species the croa develop at a slower rate. The 11 months may be a strain on the mother but if the child isn't still born it will come out extremely healthy with a rare chance of organs not developing properly or genetic defects.

Although with the virus now no longer in effect they have become a lot less violent and very civilized. As a society they are exelent at team work and attempt to excel at their jobs. Croa are often born with a dominant side of the brain while a healthy amount remain equal. The croa that are right side dominant are the more creative outside the box. Their work flow is much better as they are simple thinkers to solutions. These Croa often end up in the jobs that are very cultural or in development jobs. The croa left side dominant are the more intellectual ones. Their ability to question stuff, to learn and adapt quickly and map out ideas makes them more strategical. When they often encounter a problem they plan the solutions without improvising. These croa often end up with the more office work up to the hard science. The ones who have equal levels are the ones who have more and less potential. While the dominant ones struggle to do the opposite these croa can excel at either but with far grater challenge. Those who struggle to learn often end up with more labor work and the dangerous jobs.




Dev Threads:
PHASE ONE
Notable Player-Characters: [member="[/FONT]Sanya Val Swift"] [member="Camellia Swift"]
Intent: To create a new species that people can role play and to fill the gaps of a really long story

THE CROA VIRUS:

The virus is extinct, may not be replicated, and is no longer present throughout the Croa species.


[Member="tefka"]
 
Sanya Val Swift said:
Their body is capable of reproducing asexually and has the highest level of success compared to others.
Remove the part about asexual reproduction. Given that the 'virus' previously inhabited humanoid genetics, this would be impossible.



Sanya Val Swift said:
Mixed: * Force dedicated: those born with the ability to use the force will find it harder to swap paths from light and dark. Once been dedicated to one side of the power line all find it easier to remain on that path.
This is not a proper racial trait and is against the spirit of Star Wars. This submission will not pass with this entry. Remove it entirely.


Concerning the Croa Virus

I need a very clear, concise statement that this virus is extinct. It's not approved nor does it have a current codex/factory submission that is approved. Further infection by this virus will not be allowed.

This species will stand on its own, virus free, or it will not be permitted. You are to then hang up any future ambitions for including or expanding the virus in your role-plays, or this submission will be denied.

If the virus returns in any way, shape, or form, this submission will be denied.

Concerning Unannounced Abilities, Skills, Etc.

If any character utilizing this species performs any abilities, skills, etc of any of the races utilized in its concoction (zeltron, rakgoul, etc) or any other unannounced skills that are not listed in its strengths that do not have any prior precedent for existing, this submission will be denied outright without second chance and the Croa, nor any derivative, will be allowed to be submitted in the future.

Concerning Future Croa Submissions & Second Chances

This submission cannot be second chanced. No future Croa submission may be second chanced. No derivative of the Croa, whether it be technology or codex, may be second chanced. There is a lot of negativity surrounding this submission from the community, so you will accept Staff's guidance at face value or your submissions will be denied.

Make your edits, divulge anything that has yet to be divulged, and agree to my conditions.

Then I'll approve it.
 

Sanya Val Lerium

Neutral, Queen of Her people, Neko
[member="Tefka"]

Asexual has been removed (thought I had removed that word throughout )

Mixed has been cut out as per requested.

As said in the history the virus is non existent anymore and traits gained from those spieces are mentioned.



Sanya Val Swift said:
They had lost the abilities to pass the virus along



Sanya Val Swift said:
While the body remaind remarkably similar to a human the body also gained an extra limb been the tail, elongated feline ears and claws. Zeltron traits was included in hopes to gain the pheromone aspects. although that trait didn't take instead they gained the trait of the average height of the zeltrons been 1.8 meters (5ft 9inch).
 
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