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Approved Tech Crimosteel

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a vital and plentiful resource for the Imperial Manika Dynasty to construct various vehicles, weapons, armor and ships out of.
  • Image Source:
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    Konstantin Polienko
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Primary Source: Durasteel
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
PHYSICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Metal Alloy
  • Weight: Average
  • Color: Deep Maroon
  • Resistances: (If this submission has specific resistances, please list them. For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, and Extreme. Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.)
    • Energy (And other Blaster type weapons): High
    • Kinetic: Average
    • Lightsabers: Low
    • Other: How much protection does the material provide against other types of damage? (Examples: Sonic, EMP/ION, Elemental. You must disclose each specific type that applies to this submission with its own rating.)
    • Sonic: Average
    • EMP/ION: Average
    • Elemental: Average
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • N/A; literally Red Durasteel
STRENGTHS
  • Durable and plentiful, if one controls Manikata. Its durability is par with most materials used to construct warships, like durasteel. It also provides a significant symbolic boost in morale if a Crimosteel-constructed ship is visible for Dynasty soldiers, considering Crimosteel is only used by the Dynasty. Its presence implies reinforcements, a fighting force, and Dynasty expansion.
WEAKNESSES
  • It is ultimately a rare material outside of Manikata, and it is redundant if one has durasteel, except for the Dynasty, where it has symbolism.
DESCRIPTION
Crimosteel was discovered somewhat early in Manikatan history, millennia upon millennia before the Dynasty's reign. It was used in the construction of some of the first orbitships, atmofighters, and armored vehicles during their age of industrial expansion and modern war. Its a plentiful and reliable material, but lacks any special features besides notable durability and its usage in the Dynasty's fleets and armies.

Crimosteel is composed of carvanium, lommite, carbon, meleenium, neutronium, and zersium, however its unique inherit red color is due to a heavy amount of hematite within the crust of the planet, which means all minerals mined from the planet have more than the typical amount of hematite within their makeup. When enough material is blended together, the hematite percentage becomes large enough to completely turn the product red, leading to the material having a deep maroon look.
 
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HPI AI; Terraris Command
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Bigger Boss Bruce Bigger Boss Bruce

I really like the maroon version, better than the original. And I found 2 problems:
  • Your raitings are underpowered (-1), if you want you can edit this.
  • You have to describe what it’s made of, for example, since it’s a steel, which means it’s already an alloy of other materials. But even if it wasn’t, it was still made of crimosteel's ore.
    You write below that this is "literally Red Durasteel", but:
    • "Durasteel was an incredibly strong and versatile metal alloy, created from carvanium, lommite, carbon, meleenium, neutronium, and zersium." (from the wiki article)
    As you can see, it is precisely because of this that the material must also be given.
 
Bigger Boss Bruce Bigger Boss Bruce

I really like the maroon version, better than the original. And I found 2 problems:
  • Your raitings are underpowered (-1), if you want you can edit this.
  • You have to describe what it’s made of, for example, since it’s a steel, which means it’s already an alloy of other materials. But even if it wasn’t, it was still made of crimosteel's ore.
    You write below that this is "literally Red Durasteel", but:
    • "Durasteel was an incredibly strong and versatile metal alloy, created from carvanium, lommite, carbon, meleenium, neutronium, and zersium." (from the wiki article)
    As you can see, it is precisely because of this that the material must also be given.
Good points. Fixed according to instruction.
 
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